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My brother was very interested in computers【不需要用复数】 and enjoyed writing programs of【on】 his own.He used to downloading information from the Internet and made good use【of】 it.He liked to explore the World Wide Web and used the Internet ti【to】communicate to【变成with】 computer programmer all over the world.Whenshe【变成he 因为是他的兄弟】 went to university he studies【过去式studied】 IT(information technology)and developed a special interest in artificial intelligence.Before 【改成After 根据上下文】studying it for years,he hopes【过去式hoped 根据上下文可判断时态】 to design an intelligent robot which can think logical【应为副词logically修饰动词为副词 】 and look like a human being.However,in reality he has a long way to go to.不用感谢我，因为我叫雷锋。
甜品达人范范
1.as-while while连接两个同时发生的动作.as没有这个功能.2.rings-变过去时. 整篇都是过去时.3.me-my 这里是"我的",不能用宾格.4.a-the phone是特指,就是自己用这个,a表示泛指,不知道具体哪部电话.5.room和full中间加 was be full of 固定句型.6.opening-opened 没啥好解释的啊,过去式,跟前面的turned照应.7.in-to to one's surprise出乎某人的意料之外,固定句型.8.没看出有错.9.about去掉 tell sb...告诉某人.. 中间没有介词.10.which去掉
lucy一只鱼
This morning, my foreign teacher Robert and I went to the park by taxi. On 【1.seen改成seeing】 the beautiful trees and flowers, Robert couldn't wait to take pictur. It was at the moment 【2.when改成that 】we found his camera gone. He searched all over his bag but just couldn't find 【3.one改成it】. Suddently it came to me 【4.加上that】he might have left it in the taxi. 【5.lucky改成luckily】, we found【6. 去掉out 】the ticket and immediately got【7. in改成to 】the taxi company.About half an hour【8. late改成later】 ,the dirver returned with the camera. Both of us were grateful 【9.for改成to 】the driver.Rober and I 【10.enjoy改成enjoyed】 ourselves during the rest of the day 。这貌似是你发的第二遍？虽然文章稍微不太一样
JasonZhou520
第一行，if和in去掉第二行，notices改成noticed 第三行，any改成some，最后的the改成a 第四行，great改成greatly，after改成before 第五行，Sometime改成sometimes，the改成what 第六行，and改成but
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