王小丽0125
写作思路：事物描写类的作文，已经明确对象是“我的房间”。所以，总体结构可以采取总-分-总的结构模式。开头可以我的房间的总体风格，定个总基调；中间详细描写房间的特色物品，还有自己最喜欢的一样事物，突出重点；最后结尾表达一下对自己房间的感情。这样就比较完整了。时态采取一般现在时。
双语范文参考如下：
写作模板参考
圆满的满
My room This is my room.It’s a nice room.There is a window in the wall,and a bed next to the window.My desk is between my bookcase and my bed.There are a lot of books in the bookcase.A lamp is on the desk.There are some pictures on the wall.My backpack is on my chair.There are some books and a pencil case in my backpack.A football is under my bed. I often clean it.I like my room very much Hello!I'm Cherry.I'm so happy,because I have my own room now.It's small but nice.Look!There is a bed,a desk,a closet and a shelf.There are two end tables near the bed.The computer is on the desk.The trash bin is behind the door.I can sing and dance in my room.And I can read books in it .I like my new room very much!Do you like my room?
张壮壮zy
My room means my personal bedroom. It is a 100 square feet room.There are desk, bed, lamp and closet. I like to read books on the desk. I enjoy my room very much.
森海淼淼
《My+room》Open the door,oh,the room is very beautiful!Whose room is this?It’s my room. The bed is near the window.a quilt and a doll is on the bed.What color is my bed?It’s my favourite color—purple.It’s very dreamily color.the dresser is next tOpen the door,oh,the room is very liuxue86.com beautiful!Whose room is this?It’s my room.The bed is near the window.a quilt and a doll is on the bed.What color is my bed?It’s my favourite color—purple.It’s very dreamily color.the dresser is next to the bed.There are some books and a pen on the dresser.I like watching TV.The TV is before the bed.I an lie to watch TV on the bed.I have a piano.The piano is near the TV set.Sometimes,I play the piano.And the computer is near the window.I often play the piano.This is my room.Do you like my room?What about your room?翻译：打开门，哦，房间很漂亮！这是谁的房间？这是我的房间。床靠近窗户。一床被子和一个洋娃娃在床上。我的床是什么颜色的？这是我最喜欢的颜色——紫色。这是非常梦幻的颜色。梳妆台在旁边 打开门，哦，房间很liuxue86.com漂亮！这是谁的房间？这是我的房间。 床靠近窗户。一床被子和一个洋娃娃在床上。我的床是什么颜色的？这是我最喜欢的颜色——紫色。非常梦幻的颜色。梳妆台在床的旁边。梳妆台上有一些书和一支钢笔。 我喜欢看电视。电视在床的前面。我可以躺在床上看电视。我有一架钢琴。钢琴在电视机旁边。有时，我弹钢琴。电脑在窗户旁边。我经常弹钢琴。 这是我的房间。你喜欢我的房间吗？你的房间呢？
神仙姐姐S
My room范文：
My secret base is my room, because there are a lot of things inside. Like a doll, with things before, my work, drawings, etc., are all treasures in my room. During the day, I don't allow other people to come in, I was the only in no one else in there, in the evening, can sleep with mother come in with me, other people still don't come in. To be honest, I really like a secret room base!
However, every day in a boring room. I sometimes let others into my room, but only sometimes, not often, so want to enter my room after I agree, is allowed to enter! My aunt is my favorite, so I often let my aunt into my room, she would tell me she's secret, I will tell her my secret, we often play games in the room!
My secret base like a free heaven, I don't have homework, when I was in the room reading, painting figure, in the evening I sleep in a bed sheet, just like sleeping on a cloud!
Sometimes I cry, I will come to the room. Into the room, the sun brought me happiness, and, more importantly, the shining sunshine, let my heart, forever free to fly in the sky.
中文翻译：
我的秘密基地是我的房间，因为里面有很多东西。像是娃娃、以前用过的东西、我的作品、图画等，都是我房间里的宝物。白天时，我不让其它人进来，只有我在里面没有别人在里面，晚上时，跟我睡在一起妈妈能进来，其它人还是不能进来。说实在，我的房间真的像一个秘密基地哩! 不过，天天都在房间真无趣。我有时也会让别人进入我的房间，但只是有时，不是常常，所以要进入我的房间要经我的同意，才可以进入喔! 我最喜欢我的姑姑，所以我就常常让我的姑姑进我的房间，她会跟我说她的秘密，我也会跟她说我的秘密，我们也常常在房间里玩游戏喔! 我的秘密基地简直像一个自由天堂，我没有功课时，我就在房间里看看书、画画图，晚上我睡在被单上时，简直像睡在云上一样哩! 我有时哭的时候，我会到房间里。一进房间，太阳光给我带来了快乐，更重要的是，那闪亮亮的阳光，让我的心，永远的在空中自由自在的飞翔。
