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上面一篇内容挺好的 但是有几处小问题 我们一起探讨一下～My major As we all know，（不需要that）the computer has taken an improtant part in our daily life .So knowing how to use a computer is very important（重要）,and I choose the computer as my major when i entered（过去时） the school.On（介词短语） my first day in the school ,my teacher told us something wonderful about the computer ,such as the use of（在日常生活与工作中的使用） computer in our daily life and work. With days passing by and a high speed of economy development（名词）,learning computer well has become my idea. The first time（第一次） to get in touch with programming（编程, it seemed so difficult to me. But what I have is insistance and I think i will finally get paid(被动) if i study hard.Now with the help of our classmate ,we have build several games with the knowledge we have learned .Study has become more and more interest .I am now good at the hardware and software .
赵13先生
My major As we all know that the computer has taken an improtant part in our daily life .So knowing how to use a computer is very useful ,and I choose the computer as my major when i enter the school. When my first day in the school ,my teacher told us something wonderful about the computer ,such as the usage with computer in our daily life and work .with the days passing by ,also a high speed of economy develop,learning computer well has become my idea.And this is first time to get in touch with the programme ,it seems so difficult to me ,but what I have is insistance .I think i will finally paid if i study hard. Now with the help of our classmate ,we have build several games with the knowledge we have learned .Study has become more and more interest .I am now good at the hardware and software .
康昱装饰
i am a student in campus and my major is music. It has been three years since i entered this university. Here i get more closer to my dream the musicsince i was in high school i have been preoccupied with the music It provided me many inspirations and passionNow i can afford time enjoy many kinds of musics. After class i always play basketball.Except eatting and sleeping I spend most of my time learning the music history and listening every kinds of musics .It includes not only the classic the pop but also the jazz the blues and the hip-hop .When i am listening music my heart is serene ,everything fades away in my mind, only the nature remains.In order to find a job related with music i have many things to do. I will spare no efforts to enhance my music taste and if possible i want to become a musician.I am aware that it is not easy job but i like challenge.
刹那恍惚28
仅供参考i am currently a graduate student at college of resource environment ,my major is soil science .when i was an undergraduate ,we study a course was called soil science at the same time i met he Prof Wang who teached our this course .and he is my tutor now .he is a very humour man and also has profound knowledge ,in his class all of classmates fell happy and interesting ,in a word ,his exalted personality attracted me deeply . "only clean soil can produce healthy food ",he telled us .as we all know ,the food is necessary part in our life ,if soil is polluted and degenerated increasing i want to ask everybody here we how to feed ourselves and our offspring,you know surely about 13 million people here in China .so we must keep our brain smart and educated another person to have consciousness of treasure nature resource . especially as a tudent study in AF university should we do more to keep our nature balance and harmonious ? i believe ,your ans is "yes ".ok ,don't hesitate,and let's get started together .just do it ,my friends !!!
