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第一句 saying it was against God's idea 是伴随成分,来补充主语和修饰主语的。例如: knowing that her mother has died, he cried looking at the smiling face on that little boy, he perceive a strong feeling of happiness.lay dying是搭配来的,意思是弥留之际,快死掉了的意思。
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翻译:内附注解,请仔细看Greetings你好,(这个greetings 不是“问候”的意思,应该是信的开头语)After much consideration and prayer I have decided to tell you all about my plight because I believe you can be of assistance to me and my faith and believe in God led me to you I am the only son of my father, late (Bashiru muda Sani) from Darfur, In Republic of Sudan.在深思熟虑和祷告之后,我决定告诉您我所有的困境,因为,我相信你会帮助我。我的信念和我对上帝的信任告诉我你会帮助我。我是我已故父亲Bashiru muda Sani的独子,来自苏丹共和国的达尔富尔。(这里led me to you 就是把握指引向你的意思,但是这里意译,使句子更通顺;plight 是困境,不能简单说成是情况,境地)i am a 19 years old boy, my name is john sani我是19岁的男青年,我的名字叫John Sani。(old boy 男青年,大男孩)My father was a wealthy Cocoa and Gold merchant in SUDAN before hisuntimely death. After his business trip to Accra Ghana with business associates from Italy to Negotiate on a gold and cocoa deal, he was assassinated with my mother by Arab Militia because of hatred and greed, my mother died instantly but my father died after five days in the hospital.我的父亲英年早逝,他曾是经营可可和黄金的苏丹富商。他和来自意大利的生意伙伴一同前往Accra Ghana 洽谈一笔黄金和可可买卖之后,和我母亲一同死于Arab国民军实施的暗杀。那场暗杀完全是出于仇恨和贪婪。我的母亲当场就死了,但是我的父亲在医院里坚持了5天,却也难逃死难。(untimely death 英年早逝;because of hatred and greed另外做一句话翻译出来)Before the death of my father, he disclosed to me that he Deposited the sum of (US$7.5) seven Million Five Hundred Thousand united states Dollars in Gold coast security company in Accra Ghana, and 40kg of gold dust which were profit from his trip together with his savings, he showed me the Documents covering the Existence of the Fund and Gold, he advised me not to invest this money in Africa because of the rebels against the entirefamily and nation.在我父亲弥留之际,他向我透露说他在位于Accra Chana的金海岸保安公司存了总计750万美元的现金,还有40公斤的金沙,都是他最后一次出行时的获利。除了他所有的积存,他还给我看了证明那笔现款和黄金确实存在的文书。他告诫我不要在非洲用这笔钱投资,因为那里有针对我整个家族和国家的反抗。(Before the death of my father,我父亲死前,即弥留之际;profit from his trip 这里的trip代指上文的那次出行,所以就是最后一次出行)Right now I am in Accra Ghana and I have succeeded in locating where the Fund is in Accra Ghana with the help of my late fathers barrister and also confirmed the Existence of the Fund. 当下,我待在Accra Ghana。我父亲的律师帮助我找到了那笔存放在Accra Ghana的现款,确定了它真实存在。I want you to Assist me in receiving this Fund in your country as a Trustee and New Beneficiary of the Fund in oversea, and also use it for an investment purpose, and also To be a guardian and also help me with Accommodation in your country 我请求您以受托管理人和新海外受益人的身份,帮我在国外收款,帮助我投资监管这笔钱,并为我在您那里安排住处。(这段翻译要化冗长为简练。trustee 受托管理人、New Beneficiary of the Fund in oversea新海外受益人、 use it for an investment purpose, and also To be a guardian 就是简单的帮助我投资监管这笔钱;帮我在国外收款,虽然原文说recieve in your country,但对于作者来说就是海外,而且这个信息点可以在后文补充说明)because Right now i can not go back to my country Darfur Sudan because of the Conflicts Between the Black Sudanese Rebels and Arab Militia also known as Janjaweed as you can see or hear it in the Newsoryou can find for more information at www.crisisgroup.org/home/index.cfm?id=3060.因为当下,我不能回国,不能回达尔富尔。您也许从新闻中看到听到了,苏丹黑反动军和Arab国民军(亦称阿拉伯民兵组织)正在发生冲突。或许也可以从这个网址知道更多消息。(as you can see or hear it in the News要放到前面来翻译,or you can find for more 放在段末翻译) “Upon the case of death consignment of any sort can only be cleared from the company with the name of the legal foreign beneficiary on deposit document as legal recipient of goods deposited for shipment”this is why i need your help, due to the policy of the security company“关于任何死后委托的事项只在有合法海外受益人身份的公司登记在存款文书上,作为合法的存款接洽人,才能被解决。”这是我需要您帮助的原因,因为保安公司有相应的规定。(这是最难的一段,因为有专业术语,因为我不学法,不知道详细,大概这样翻译。)I am soliciting for your Assistance to help in transferring this Fund to your country because this is my only hope in surviving in life and also continuing my education, help me to save my life please.我请求你帮助我把现款转入您的国家,因为这是我唯一能活下去,并继续接受教育的希望了,请帮助我,挽救我的性命。please show me love and take me as your child, i wait for god to touch your heart and you reply me to help me.我等待上帝触动你的心,等待您给我的帮助和答复,请爱我,将我视作您的孩子。(注意:全文称对方为您,不是你)john sani. John Sani回答完毕
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问候在经过了深思熟虑和祈祷之后,我决定告诉你们我现在的所有情况,因为我相信你们能够帮助我,以及我的信念,因为相信上帝我才认识了你们。我是我已故父亲(巴斯鲁.木达.萨尼 Bashiru muda Sani)唯一的儿子,我今年19岁,来自苏丹共和国(Republic of Sudan)的达尔福尔(Darfur),我叫约翰.萨尼(John sani).我父亲在英年早逝之前是苏丹一位富有的可可粉和金矿商人。在他与他的伙伴出差从意大利到加纳阿克拉商谈一笔金子和可可粉生意之后,他和我母亲被阿拉伯民兵组织暗杀,因为他们憎恨我父亲并且他们贪得无厌。我母亲当场死亡,我父亲五年以后死在医院。 在我父亲去世之前,他告诉我他在加纳阿克拉的黄金海岸保安公司(Gold Coast Security Company)里存了一笔钱,数额为七百五十万,以及40公斤的金沙,这些金沙是他从出差商谈生意中和他的储蓄中获取的利润,他给我看了些文件,这些文件隐藏了资金和金子存在的事实,他告诉我不要把这些钱投资在非洲,因为非洲反对我们整个家族以及这个国家。现在我在加纳阿克拉,并且在我已故父亲的律师的帮助我已经成功的找到了这笔钱在加纳阿克拉的位置,并且也已经证实了这笔钱的存在。我希望你们能在你们国家帮助我收款,因为这笔钱的信托人和新的收益人在海外,也希望你们帮助我在你们国家找个住处,因为由于黑苏丹反抗者(Black Sudanese Rebels)和阿拉伯民兵组织之间的冲突,也就是人们所知的贾贾威德民兵部(Janjaweed)导致我已经不能再回到我到苏丹达尔富尔了。你可能从新闻里见过或听说过他们之间的冲突,或者你也可以在这里找到更多的信息www.crisisgroup.org/home/index.cfm?id=3060.现在我请求你们帮助我把这笔钱转到你们国家,因为这是我唯一生存并且继续学业的机会,请帮助我保全性命。请让我感受到你们的爱,请接纳我,就像你们的孩子一样,我等待着上帝来触动你的心弦并且回应我的请求,帮助我。约翰.萨尼 希望对你有帮助,但是原文中关于存款数额“(US$7.5) seven Million Five Hundred Thousand“的英文表达法应该是错误的,所以没法翻译出来,所以我大概猜了字数字。英文里应该是没有这样表达数字的。
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