全国卷三英语作文

38、枫桥夜泊 张继

在日常学习、工作和生活中，大家或多或少都会接触过作文吧，作文是一种言语活动，具有高度的综合性和创造性。还是对作文一筹莫展吗？以下是我帮大家整理的高三英语作文6篇，仅供参考，希望能够帮助到大家。

A sall tree finall pened its ees, with the first sight f the wrld .But the land was bare, with little green. Everthing was uch different fr what it dreaed in the earth,

An ld an . waled int his sight and sat in frnt f the tree ,gazing at it .

“wh are u ?” ased the tree, happil. But there sae n answers.

After a shrt silence , the ld an stared at the gre s.

“what are u ding?” ased the tree, again.

“I’ erizing,” the an said with a trebling vice.”

“when I first arrived here ……”he had a sudden cngh fr pause . “when I first arrived, here are an trees which as enthusiastic as u, but taller than u.”

“ Reall ! Where are the nw?” The tree ased happil, as happ as a id finding a cand.

But the ld an nl glanced arund quietl with ees full f sadness and quilt. Then cntinued his wrds.

“Then I settle dwn. It was the st wnderful tie that I had ever ened at beginning. I can appreciated the flwers in springs, slept in the shade in suers, picaed up the gd fruits in falls and ade fires fr warth with wd in winters,” With the wrds, happiness and indness aurred in the an’s face.

“But thirteen ears later, I fund gasline under grund.” Suddenl, he clsed his ees, buried his head in his hand.

“what’s that ?” the sall tree ased frightenedl.

“abe a gd thing.” the an finall becae cal, “In rder t ship the gasline awa, I cut dwn an trees t build big bats. At last, few trees left. Ling at the trees staps, I felt guilt. But I was swallwed b ne and frgt the happ das and despair f the trees. The gas was ined assivel and as a result, the grund began t fall dwn. I had t answer fr what I had dne. One da ust befre I left a big lightning struc gas, everthing then burned. Therefre, the trees, the gas. The bats including heart were gne.”

The sall tree ept silent.

“Nw, I want t d sething t iprve, but nthing can be dwn. I fund the seed f u fr the sea several ears ag. S please help return the green !” cried the an.

“s u are sure that u wn’t cut dwn the trees an re?” the ld an ndded .

“the gasline?” ndded again.

“and u green t plant seeds everwhere and sta here frever?”

“es, I d!”

The sall tree led at the an, then turn its face t the sining sun, which is lie a rising sun. In the island, the shadw f the tw cbined tgether.

A light wind cae, the green leaves ade a gentle sund.

Now we’re facing with a choice。 Whether to rent the school dormitory or not depends on different persons。

Obviously， the school dormitory is cheaper。 And I think as a university student I can afford it。 But as each coin has two sides， the equipment isn’t very ideal。 If I live in the school dormitory， I cannot occupy the whole toilet。 That must be a terrible problem for a gift。 What’s more? I have to go to bed on time and get up on time next morning。

On the other hand， renting a flat near school may solve all these problems except for the expense。 It’ll cost me 800 RMB a month， and the price is considerably high for a no salary university student。 But it’s really attractive to live with few people and have my own space。

As mentioned above， I’ve made up my decision to live near school and rent a flat。 Though the price is high， maybe I can find another girl also finding somewhere to live。 And we can rent it together。 Thus reducing our expenses。

一、试题回顾分析

今年全国卷作文命题思路和前几年相比变化不大，仍然采用是应用文考查形式，列举提纲要点，体现了高考(微博)命题的稳定性。材料如下：

假如你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(learningcenter)的帮助。按照学校规定，你需要提前预约。请按下列要点写一封信：

1 本人简介

2 求助内容

3 约定时间

4 你的联系方式(Email: [email protected]， Phone: 1234567)

注意：词数100左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，结束语已为你写好。

Dear Sir/Madam，

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Look forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

题示材料对写作范围作了较明确限定。但仍给考生留出了一定的发挥空间，有利于考生充分展示自己的英语书面表达能力。

这次英语作文试题采用了以往的书信形式，考生在复习和模拟训练时见过不少，并不陌生，同时题材属于校园生活，要求考试对学习困难进行求助，贴近学生生活，因此总体难度不高。英语作文没有唯一的固定标准答案，只要书写工整、要点齐全、词句准确，就能拿到满意的分数。

二、把握评分标准

高考评分原则及标准是考生平常写作训练的'指导原则，在高考进行写作的规范，也是阅卷老师给分的重要依据和标准。

(一)评分原则：

1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。

4、评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。

5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

(二)评分标准：

第五档(21-25分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的

覆盖所有内容要点。

应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。

Sea pollution is becoming an increasing problem for our planet and we have a responsibility to reduce sea pollution.

I need to describe the problem. Our ship currently dumps all its rubbish into the sea.It's easy to result in huge endanger.

First of all, Non-organic substances such as plastic bags kill fish and whales. Because fish get trapped and whales cannot digest them. Secondly some rubbish is inherently toxic.

I can suggest some solutions. First and foremost we can create a better system of disposing of rubbish for instance.

We ought to store rubbish. Next, we are supposed to make ships environmentally and friendly.

A case in point is that we should stop providing plastic bags.

We must act now before it is too late!

Thanks for your last letter. Don’t worry about my new school life here. I’m fine here because I like my new school life. My new school life is busy but interesting. Every day I get to school at 7:00 am and go home at 4:30 pm. We have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. My favorite day is Thursday, because I have English and art that day. The two subjects are my favorite. But I don’t like math, because it’s difficult. At school, I also have a new friend, Zhang Qiang. He often helps me with math. After school, I often have art club with him.

谢谢你的最后一封信。不要担心我的新学校生活在这里。我在这里很好，因为我喜欢我的新学校生活。我的新学校生活忙碌而有趣。我每天早上7:00上学，下午4:30回家。我们上午有四节课，下午有三节课。我最喜欢的一天是星期四，因为那天我有英语和美术课。受试者是我最喜欢的。但我不喜欢数学，因为它很难。在学校，我也有一个新朋友，张蔷。他经常帮我学数学。放学后，我经常和他一起艺术俱乐部。

When I was in high school, there was a teacher who taught me more than that in was a very kind boy, 4 or 5 years older than us and taught us geography.

We all liked to take his class, though geography was not our major course.

What impressed me a lot was his could see him always got angry only when we were too noisy in class,he often played soccer with used to be a very believable defender and never fouled on any of us.

We all liked to call him "Teacher Miao" and he was just like a friend, not a sonsy personality inspired me to be kind to everyone I was my well-beloved "Teacher Miao".

无论是在学校还是在社会中，大家都经常接触到作文吧，作文是人们把记忆中所存储的有关知识、经验和思想用书面形式表达出来的记叙方式。你写作文时总是无从下笔？下面是我为大家收集的高三英语作文5篇，欢迎大家借鉴与参考，希望对大家有所帮助。

Every day that goes over,finally,finally the students who entered the so-called "purgatory",Xue-mei,who yearn for the Tuotuo stage - the third year.I would like to have,the more senior Yes,in addition to review what can not,it more than the well-being.Shuzhi how he is a young Blair,as the math teacher said of the verbal phrase "set aside to see the essence of the phenomenon of" precarious,and this time I was deceived by the phenomenon to.As in his junior high school,middle school is very annoying; on how well the high school,when I used to think was the fact that on the high school,junior high school on time,remember life to death,and even repeating dreams are In the past,also did not expect to actually commit the same mistake in the past,did not progress.

Hated his high school,so why Naozhong,a three-year,the office is actually an unknown place of the small fry,that is not very good results,not too bad,not outstanding performance,but has never done a bad thing.In the early days,Oh,Bukanhuishou past.Mean people too,a little color,but there was almost a "color" (should be "injured").At that time expressly prohibited in the school Sunday to Internet cafes,I do not know where I had the courage to dare to "crimes against the wind" went.Shuiliao,but groups of teachers came for the "prey",of course,we have a class.Just when I was in a URL and find joy in cases of doubt in the back when it saw a familiar figure,saying it gave me the direct religious ties swallowed it,the first reaction is to affirm the end,inevitably Monday seized a public school guide,When they can really ruin and death without a burial.Immediately go back to running a boil over 3 hours writing a long 5 thousand seized the lead character (this is my longest to date,"works"),said his despicable act,so all kinds of bad machine David.Also in the evening to dream,a dream teacher Zhang Xuepentaikou to hit me,scared out in a cold sweat.Originally thought it very brave,the effect is so timid,have not always been afraid of problems at school.The next morning at the Dan Chan scared spent in determining their own have not been found,is still lingering fear.Breath back,God bless ah,but fortunately I have not found that would lead to pay up,otherwise I would not go home to die is you!After this difficult ordeal,it is no longer the brave dare not,will make their own good that this has become mediocre.

Mediocrity is,of course,get mad fan,a senior teacher would often talk to people to the office.It was not strange,all talk of the mysterious return of the sword have a sense of well-being,as if in the 5,000,000 awards,and asked him laugh and not always answer,it is more to this increase in the level of mystery,often It has to feel the desire to talk to the teachers were strict,very good results either,or misconduct,and no matter which one I do not fit,seems the middle is the least The rights.

Always thought that their problems can be independent of the Department.Simply turns a blind eye on the college entrance examination,the score was insignificant.But in fact they are themselves for the college entrance examination is still fighting and anger,if every time test scores will be lower still can not help the bad.After the test scores of feel sorry ourselves,very sorry,and regret that I did at that time was not seriously listening to a teacher clarified,and regret that I did not remember it,so why regret negligence,and how a "regret" terrible.At this time it felt "detached" just take it for granted,it is only their wishful thinking,the ideal and the reality is very different from the.Often hate themselves,and why others in the same classroom,a teacher in the same teaching,some people may be at Beijing University,Qinghua,and I do,but I just focus has been weighed down the line.Is it natural to me than they do worse?Careful not compare the gap between what you can score a big difference but also had to try,but still.Q with the Arab-Israeli trick that,"I do not want to be so good at the University of mud." Doing it for a long time for a long time and feel a natural,high-Trinity began to come to the waves,the number of examinations,the total will not always be The disappointing scores,right?Imagine my not so good psychological,not a blow,the second is not afraid,but afraid that a lot of times when it's Sixinliefei how to put up with,if open to the Department would like to have nothing,perhaps many times After the fight against heart on the numbness,pain no longer.

There is a third of the total teachers or parents tell you to set goals,which is the only goal for college entrance examination on what schools,said that the simple test is what University.I gave a "priority" for his high school's "emphasis on the country," University should be the last time was in any case are too unreasonable.Therefore,efforts have to,too many people you can not sleep.Do not kick the ball,not playing ping-pong,and not on the network,QQ is not a chat,about an impulse to open the QQ,the above message,they thought I was dead,I do not know they are in the third year,it involuntarily,Sleep,next year should not cliff-fall.As a teacher here by 11,insisted the 10 months of hard to eat in order to endure hardship will not endure hardship or less,"Kujinganlai" why are the so-called "fight a spring and summer,autumn and winter,a youth-for-no regrets." Several times to listen to It would appear that may have similar,only later to think about this carefully to know when the junior high school have said such words,but I think Daomei than junior high school easier.

Have to work hard,and a third,or there is no chance,I do not want to be next year,also stayed in the school's "four high"

一、试题回顾分析

今年全国卷作文命题思路和前几年相比变化不大，仍然采用是应用文考查形式，列举提纲要点，体现了高考(微博)命题的稳定性。材料如下：

假如你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(learningcenter)的帮助。按照学校规定，你需要提前预约。请按下列要点写一封信：

1 本人简介

2 求助内容

3 约定时间

4 你的联系方式(Email: [email protected]， Phone: 1234567)

注意：词数100左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，结束语已为你写好。

Dear Sir/Madam，

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Look forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

题示材料对写作范围作了较明确限定。但仍给考生留出了一定的发挥空间，有利于考生充分展示自己的英语书面表达能力。

这次英语作文试题采用了以往的书信形式，考生在复习和模拟训练时见过不少，并不陌生，同时题材属于校园生活，要求考试对学习困难进行求助，贴近学生生活，因此总体难度不高。英语作文没有唯一的固定标准答案，只要书写工整、要点齐全、词句准确，就能拿到满意的分数。

二、把握评分标准

高考评分原则及标准是考生平常写作训练的指导原则，在高考进行写作的规范，也是阅卷老师给分的重要依据和标准。

(一)评分原则：

1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。

4、评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。

5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

(二)评分标准：

第五档(21-25分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的

覆盖所有内容要点。

应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。

教学目标：

（1）知识与能力目标：

A通过调动学生听、说、读等方面积极性，开阔思路，促进写作能力的提高。

B 训练学生对情景作文的.审题能力，拓展对给定信息点的想象空间。

C 运用基本语法知识表达思想感情。

D 掌握高考中情景作文的应试策略。

（2）德育目标：

A 情景作文主要是以日常生活中所发生的事为背景，教育、引导学生要尊重他人的感情。

B 辨证理解理由的合理性。

教学重点：

（1） 针对高考中以“理由与借口”为题材的情景作文，如何制定策略。

（2） 以小组讨论为形式，激活思维。

教学难点：

（1） 如何获取、筛选信息，以“合理”，“创新”为原则，展开想象。

（2） 语言知识在写作中的运用，如何有效表达个人情感，感染读者。

教学设计思路：

本课既是高三英语情景作文教学的有益探索与尝试，也是通过引入“头脑风暴”的思想，帮助学生分析、整理信息，理清思路，提高英语写作能力的有效途径和方法。学生在逐步拓展思维的同时，调动身体的各个器官来观看、讨论、阅读，以求在“动”中写作，最后组织语言，将这个合理并有创新的想法写成文章。同时，还要将这种思维渗透到日常生活中，做到礼貌待人，慎用“理由”，尊重他人的感情，以致师生都会从本课中受到启发，做到教学相长。

教学媒体：计算机 录像机

教学过程：

第一步 引入

A 简述本课将对以“理由与借口”为题材的高考情景作文进行指导与训练。

B 通过校园内的采访录像，总结出在何种情况下需要“理由与借口”。

第二步

A 以竞赛为形式，在指定的情景下将与之相关的所有想法展示出来，并以“合理、创新”为原则进行筛选、分类，从中引出“头脑风暴”的概念，并加以解释。

B 列举日常生活中的情景与理由，帮助学生打开思路。

第三步

A将学生分为5组，每组设一情景，进行小组讨论，以前面做过的指导为例，筛选信息，并将其拓展成文，再加以讲评。

B 总结写作策略。

第四步

阅读一篇与本题材相关的文章，使学生懂得在日常生活的交往中要尊重他人的感情，以深化本课的主题，加深学生对该题材作文的了解与认识，从而使思维上升到一个新的高度。

第五步

作业 A根据所提示情景，再练习一篇内容相关的情景作文。

B 认真思考对命题作文的写作策略与情景写作之间的联系。

Teaching Plan

Date: Nov.25th, 20xx

Class and Grade: Class 2, Senior Grade Three

Subject: Brain Storm and Situational Wring

Teacher: Zhang Rong

ⅠTeaching Objectives:

1. To improve the students’ writng skills by means of watching, speaking and reading.

2. To enhance the interests of the students in terms of English wring and encourage them to fully develop their ability of imagination.

3. To express their ideas effectively in formal writing and in the teaching process, the interactive teaching mold is tested in class.

ⅡTeaching difficulties:

1. To be creative and reasonable in the development of imagination, and improve the ability of analyzing accordingly.

2. To exchange ideas in the form of discussion in groups and develop the shinning points into compositions.

Ⅲ Teaching aids:

Computer Video Cassette Player Blackboard

Ⅳ Procedures:

Step1 Turning-in

1A brief introduction of the topic in situational composition-making excuses.

2. Summon up the ideas related to the topic “Under what condition people need to make excuse”.

Step 2 presentation

Introduce the concept of brain storm in the form of a competition.

Step 3 Class activity

Try to develop the composition according to the given situation in each group with reference to the writing strategy.

Step 4 Reading

Read a passage titled the truth about excuses, aiming to improve the way students communicate in their daily lives.

Step 5 Assignment

1. Writing practice

2. Thinking about the strategies for instruction-based wring.

Lots of things in the winter vacation is like a colorful fireworks, like pieces of falling snow lightsome happy, I carefully picked up one of the pieces, my brother is the most memorable and I set off firecrackers.

That day, the weather is sunny, like spring is coming! My brother and I went to the village building small set off firecrackers. Brother said: "this small firecrackers, the call to jilt cannon." Then brother let me play left first gun, because I was afraid of playing with that, the elder brother take a small firecrackers, and then use lighter lit it, and then thrown to the ground, such as the inside of the smoke stopped little firecrackers burst. I threw the sling gun force on the ground, it was broken. All of a sudden, I thought of a good way: put rejection gun on the ground step, this is called on to jilt cannons, is a dual-use ah, say, I put the gun on the bottom go to, a loud thunder startled, I saw my brother the sling gun in his hand to throw a chair to rebound to other place, then the brother said let's play small firecrackers! I said: "I can't!" Brother said: "come on, you will be." After his brother's encouragement and guidance I finally stood up, according to the elder brother say, result I finally success! I took a small firecracker, lit the fire and the results forgot to throw, I remembered I hadn't thrown, I throw it away, it's in the air blasting. It's getting late, my brother and I on the elevator to go home.

It is interesting to set off firecrackers, let me overcome the fear in the heart, become brave invincibility. Think of it, the little firecrackers and bursting in my heart.

寒假里的一件件事犹如一朵朵烟花丰富多彩，像一片片飘落的雪花轻盈快乐，我仔细地拾取其中的一件，我最难忘的是和哥哥放鞭炮。

那天，天气阳光明媚，就像是春天来了呢!我和哥哥到小区楼小放鞭炮去了。哥哥说：“这个叫小鞭炮，那个叫甩炮。”然后哥哥就让我先玩甩炮，因为我怕玩那个，哥哥拿起小鞭炮，然后用打火机把它点燃，再扔到了地上，等里面的烟停了小鞭炮就爆了。我把甩炮用力扔在地上，它也破了。突然，我想到了一个好办法：把甩炮放在地上踩，这样甩炮就叫踩炮了，真是一炮两用呀，说着，我把炮踩了下去，一声雷鸣吓了一跳，我看见哥哥手上拿着甩炮向椅子上扔去反弹到了其它的地方，然后哥哥说我们来玩小鞭炮吧!我说：“我不敢!”哥哥又说：“加油，你一定能。”经过哥哥的鼓励和指导下我终于挺身而出，按哥哥说的做，结果我终于成功了!我又拿了一个小鞭炮，点了火，结果忘记扔了，我想起我还没扔，我加快把它扔掉，它就在空中爆破了。天色已晚，我和哥哥上了电梯回家了。

放鞭炮真有趣，让我克服了心中的恐惧，变得英勇无敌。想起这件事，那个小鞭炮又在我心中绽开了花。

To cross the road, look around. Not on the road to play and run. See the red light to stop for a while. His trip to see the green light. This is for teachers and parents often told us, we often back, and we should not only talk about this sentence, it still deeply recorded in the hearts of safety in the first place, so that accidents may becoming less and less of. Let us surrounded in a safe happy and healthy growth, the construction of our home more beautiful!

Allow the possibility of traffic accidents have become less and less, it is necessary to known rules of the road, here I am giving you some rules of the road you:

1. Cyclists should follow the right side of bike paths.

2. Should follow the sidewalk to cross the road (or bridge, the underground passage);

3. When the red light to stop, see the green light before.

4. Take the bus after the first, not to each other, do not逼抢bit crowded.

5. Within walking on the sidewalk, there is no sidewalk to walk on the roadside.

6. It should be noted, when we are walking vehicles are not allowed to chase,猛跑.

7. Are not allowed in the vehicle suddenly crossed near.

8. Not be allowed to pass through, to sit upon the sidewalk, roadway and railroad crossing guard-rails.

9. Are not allowed to hold cars on the road to recover the vehicle, forced parabolic拦车and hit cars.

10. Pre-school children in the street or walk on the road, there must be led by adults.

11. Allowed the railings across the road.

These are our common life should be in compliance with the rules of the road, we would also like to promote in the class column on the column or exhibition, multi-paste a number of compliance with the rules of the road, not red light running and other words like a warning so that students better understand the traffic safety importance. School can also be invited to the police his uncle, the door to the students on the traffic class, so students know better to help the traffic of human beings ... ...

Security related to our life, we hope parents, the flower is the future of the motherland, the motherland’s future, we need to, and so we must make to comply with traffic regulations, protect our lives, but also to the safety of others. Let us follow traffic safety, to minimize traffic accidents, so traffic will never disappear. This is the call of the times!

从话题角度来看，和往年一样，社会类和教育类仍然是主要考查话题分别占到11次和6次，当然这里社会类的话题包括工作，生活，城市建设等，内容涉及多个层面，这也是数量偏多的一个原因；教育类包含学科教育, 教育方式, 家庭教育, 学校教育等一直是高频话题，科技类和环境类上半年考频正常,犯罪类和政府类考查偏少，各出现了一次。值得注意的是，新闻媒体考题一般出现在上半年，今年考频加大，上半年出现了2次。

截止到8月10日，大作文跟往年一样，仍然是同意与否类居多占到12次，其次是双边讨论类占8次，利弊分析类和原因措施类（报告类）各占3次，混合类占4次。

重点考题分析

Some people believe famous people’s support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems. While other think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (2019/04/13)

4月13日考的这道题是整个上半年构思难度极高的一道题目，也是一道老题，很多有望上6的考生都因为这道题的构思问题，变成5.5分。有些学生对题目的理解有一些偏差，题目的意思是：名人对国际援助组织的捐助使得人们关注到问题，然而另一些人认为名人使得问题不那么重要。第一方面比较好理解，名人利用自身的影响力使得问题得到关注，比如尘肺病对于大众来说不是很常见，是煤矿工人得的一种病，很多明星通过公益活动，让更多的人关注到这部分需要帮助的群体。另一方面，淡化问题的原因是大众或者粉丝只关注名人的行为而忽视问题本身，对问题没有后续跟进，也就最终解决不了问题。

The increasing use of technology in the workplace has made it easier for young people to get work and hard for old people. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2019/05/04)

这道题审题很容易跑偏, 很多同学把重心会放在科技让年轻人简单地获得工作,或者错误理解成科技让年轻人的工作简单化,忽视了后半句hard for old people。题目中含有并列关系and，需要两者都要提及，所以后面论证只证明对年轻人的好处是偏面的。

总而言之，上半年题目以老题重现居多，同学们还是要多刷机经，有可能就碰到自己写过的题目，下半年大作文犯罪类，政府类考题可能会增加，可以增加这两类话题的练习。另外，要注意审题常见的坑，乍一看不太懂的题目不妨多读几遍，不要贸然下笔。