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如果你是高中生的话 首先要搞清楚论点 字数 话题类【2009年09--12月】 Passage 1(江苏省南京市南师附中2010届高三学情分析样题) 2009年6月,江苏省教育厅作出决定:严禁中小学暑假和双休日补课。请根据以下要求,用英语报写一篇文章。 要求:1. 听到这一决定时你的想法(两点)。 2. 你家人对这一决定的反应。 3. 简述你今年暑期的安排(包括学习方面、身体锻炼、其他活动等)和收获。 注意:1. 对所给要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,结合事实阐述自己的认识。 2. 词数150左右。开头已写好,不计入总词数。 3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。 参考词汇: 高考本科分数线 the required score in gaokao 【参考范文】 In June, 2009, the Education Department of Jiangsu Province made a decision that giving lessons during the summer vacation and weekends should be banned. I think it quite correct. This is an important measure for the quality-oriented education. As is well known to all, in order to raise the number of students to meet the required score in gaokao, almost all high schools gave lessons during the holidays. We students suffered a lot both physically and mentally. However, my parents felt worried, and they complained, “Now that the present system of the college entrance exam hasn’t changed, can you cope with the fierce competition without extra lessons and enough exercise?” Believe it or not, no summer vacation has been so meaningful to me as that of this year. Every day, I spent several hours going over my lessons. I also had time to relax and enjoy my hobbies. I went swimming, watched interesting programs on TV, did some reading and met my friends. In addition, I participated in community work and this has raised my awareness of public service. I really enjoyed my vacation. Passage 2(安徽省两地2010届高三第一次联考) 英语是同学们非常熟悉的学科。请你写一篇文章,内容如下: 1.阐述学英语的必要性。 2.你能采取哪些措施提高英语成绩。 注意: 1.词数不少于120个; 2.可适当发挥想象,增加细节,以使行文连贯; 【参考范文】 Learning English is really a must! Let's take a look around us: the latest information around the world is written in or translated into English. English is one of the most important required subjects for the university and high school entrance exams. Frankly, my English is not good. But I have to improve my English to pass the college entrance examination. As for me, I would force myself to memorize at least a few new words every day because a large vocabulary is essential in learning English well. Second, I would review some grammar rules every week, which helps me make fewer mistakes in writing English. Third, I’d like to read short articles and then write an English composition every other day. I hope in this way I can realize my dream. Passage 3(江苏省六校2010届高三第一次联考) 请以“Sports”为题,根据下面提供的内容写一篇120左右的短文。(开头部分已给出,不计入总词数) 随着时间的推移,体育运动在现代生活中的作用越来越重要了。 人们参加各种各样的体育运动,比如踢足球、打篮球、散步、游泳等等。人们也喜欢观看体育比赛。体育明星深受人们喜爱,尤其受年轻学生们的喜爱。 世界上几乎每天都有体育比赛,但最著名的是每四年所举行的奥运会。在2008北京奥运会上,菲尔浦斯(Phelps)、博尔特(Bolt)等运动员吸引了全世界人民的目光。 体育运动有助于我们的健康。现在,我们学生被鼓励每天锻炼一小时,这样我们学习的效率(efficiently)就更高了。【参考范文】 As time goes by, sports are playing a more and more important role in people’s modern life. People all over the world take part in different kinds of sports, such as football, basketball, walking, swimming and so on. They also like to watch sports matches. Besides, sports stars are very popular with people, especially young students. There are sports matches nearly every day in the world, but the most important and famous are the Olympic Games held every four years. In the 2008 Olympic Games held in Beijing, athletes like Phelps and Bolt attracted the attention of people all over the world. As we all know, sports can keep us healthy, so now we students are encouraged to take exercise for an hour every day, and in this way we can learn more efficiently. Passage4(浙江省海盐县元济高级中学2010届高三第一次月考) 学生上学通常有两种方式:乘公交车与骑自行车。两种方式各有特点。请你以“Going to School by Bus or by Bicycle”为题,按照以下要点写一篇英语短文: 乘公交车:节省时间、节省体力 骑自行车:锻炼身体、灵活方便 我喜欢的方式及理由。 注意:词数100~120,文章的题目和开头已给出(不计词数)。 Going to School by Bus or by Bicycle There are basically two ways to go to school. 【参考范文】 Going to school by Bus or by Bicycle There are basically two ways to got to school. They are going to school by bus and going to school by bicycle. Each of them has its own advantages. On one hand, going to school by bus can save you a lot of time especially when you live far away from your house. Besides, it can also save some energy. Thus, you won’t be very tired when you get to school. On the other hand, goingto school by bicycle can provide you with a chance to make you stronger and healthier. As is known to all, cycling is a good form of exercise. What’s more, cycling is flexible and convenient form. To some degree, choosing which way to got to school partly on the personal character and favor. I think going to school by bicycle is suitable for me because it builds up my body. Passage 5(湖南省长沙市一中2010届高三第三次月考) 每年暑假,各种机构纷纷组织形式多样的夏令营, 如英语夏令营, 减肥夏令营等等。家长们踊跃送孩子去参加。请通过这一现象用英语写一篇短文, 来说明家长们此举的原因, 并表明自己对夏令营的看法。 注意: 1. 词数不少于120字。 2. 列举的原因不得少于两个。 3. 参考词汇: summer camp 【参考范文】 Every summer vacation witnesses a series of camps across China organized or sponsored by different institutions. They are varied in form or name, such as English camps, weight-losing camps, etc, which abundantly draws/ attracts parents’ attention. The reasons behind can be concluded as follows. To begin with, summer is absolutely a right time for children to enrich their extracurricular knowledge, broaden their horizons and strengthen their basis of different subjects. Meanwhile, in some parents’ opinion, it is far better to keep their children occupied than to leave them at home having nothing to do. As far as I am concerned, mostly the participation of summer camps does benefit children theoretically and practically. Nevertheless, there is no need for all parents to copy something blindly. They might as well cope with it sensibly. Otherwise, negative effects won’t be avoided in terms of time, study habit, payment or growth.高三用的天星的什么《高分范文天天背》还不错。谢谢!
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高中英语论述型作文主要都是观点对比类文章,本人认为最好分为三段式: 第一段:直入主题,介绍一方观点并叙述理由 第二段:介绍另一方观点并阐述理由 第三段:你自己的观点现将常用模板提供,希望对你有所帮助!要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1. 有一些人认为...2. 另一些人认为...3. 我的看法...The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .另外,还有经常考到的三个题型就是阐述问题型、问题解决型和说明利弊型,也将模板提供如下,仅供参考!阐述主题题型要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述.1. 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.2. 分析并举例使其更充实.The good old proverb ----------------(名言或谚语)reminds us that ----------------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(举例说明). Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(举例说明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三).In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径1. 问题现状2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点) In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状) Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处). 说明利弊题型这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)1. 说明事物现状2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(A的优点之一). Besides -------------------(A的优点之二).But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测).)