英语4级作文批改

渣渣水平随便说的，仅供参考～1、common matter 这个说法没怎么见过，common issue较好2、There is a public debate today over whether should food be banned on the subway. whether后是陈述句语序，应为whether food should be banned3、 Why I have the opinion like this? 这句有语病而且完全没必要，累赘，改一下下一句直接过渡即可～4、最后给出的三条理由changlish比较严重，建议重写一下

都是电脑阅卷的没人会把你的作文都看完的 开头结尾你的语法运用技巧，完全就能判断你的作文是多少分了

哪有老师给改，一个作文不到一分钟就过了

有不少小小的错误哦~In every school, teachers teach students and help them pass the exams. But how can students get a good score? You might say "hardworking". Hardworking is important to students, but a good teacher-student relationship should not be ignored. A rapport teacher-student relationship is a basic fundation for the successful teaching and studying. When I was in high school, most students in my class got on very well with our teachers. Our teachers were not only the teachers in class, but also our friends after class. And if we ased any questions, they would teach us very patiently until we understood it. But several students had a bad teacher-student relationship. When they got puzzled about some questions, although our teacheres tought them very patiently, they got the knowledge very slowly. So, they usually got a lower score. It seems as if there is a resistance exsisting in their consious. So a good teacher-student relationship is based on a bothside effort. Sometimes there might be a misunderstanding between teacheres and students. We should solve the problem as soon as possible. Explain it to our teacheres, and have a talk with them. Don't leave a barrier behind between your teacheres and you.注意一下词性和时态哦~还有一些固定的短语。