传奇人物英语作文

An Australian, whose name is Allan Stewart born on March seventh 1915, [was] bestowed the world record concerning the oldest person to get [a] master’s degree in 2006. "The" 用错了，2006 用past tense，改was使句子通畅According to Allan‘s perspective, his attitude of learning is“[it is never too late to challenge yourself]”.[we know that删去]....另外改写了後半句使句子通畅To prove what he [had said], Allen got his first degree in 1936 ,and soon after, [got] the second one ----- the [Doctor of Medicine]一言既出，时态须变 get==>got 保持时态一致 medicine doctor会产生歧义.(doctor有医生一解，改大写+of破之)At the age [around] 80, he decided to study law. [At the same year,] he was given the master’s degree of law, which was his third one. 见4..Just in 2012, he [had] obtained not only the last degree by [studying] through the internet, but [also] the praise from his teacher,for his [habit] of planning learning-time properly.2012年十分遥远了，let the past to be the past吧..... 通过"网上学习"这是名词吧?studied =>studyinghobbit....LZ最近电影看多了1. No problem2. 可分可不分，但根据Lz的标点..不分3. 没差4. 80时~有明确时间，普通past tense可以了...另外断句改了而且前後没有因果关系(因为决定了所以学位到手了!?)，於是改了5. 改了

第一篇 Everyone's heart have a hero,maybe a person who save the people,maybe a animal who have got good spirit. So far,I can't forget a person who helped plenty of people.His name is Leifeng.I think he was a good person I can't understand why he was so friendly,but I really know,he was a hero in my heart.I looked up upon him.and I will do all things I can do,I want to be the 2nd Leifeng.第二篇Li zhunji, My HeroHave you seen the Korean TV series call “Hero”? The hero of the story is a actor called Lizhunji. Lizhunji, he is my hero. I admire most of the characters he acted in the movies and TV dramas, such as the romantic and free spirited Xu Zheng yu in “My Girl”, the tough man in “the times of the wolf and dog”, and the legendary hero in “the plum blossom”. Beside this, I admire him as an actor. He challenges himself as an actor and chooses to act totally different type of rolls. He said to his fans, “If one day I forgot my dream and chased after money and fame, I wouldn’t be me anymore. Please abandon me then.”I’m not an actor, but I want to be like him to challenge myself and live in the dream to achieve, not to sit back and enjoy the success.李准基，我的偶像你看过一部叫做《英雄》的韩剧吗？这个故事中的主角就是一个叫做李准基的演员演的，他就是我的偶像。我喜爱他演的大部分电视剧和电影中的角色。《我的女孩》中浪漫又富有自由精神的徐政宇，《狼与狗的时间》中的硬汉，还有传奇性的人物《一枝梅》。除此之外，我还欣赏他做为一个演员，挑战自身，演完全不同的角色。他对影迷们说：“有一天如果我忘记了我的梦想开始追求金钱和名誉而演戏，我就不再是我了，你们就抛弃我吧。”我不是演员，但我愿意像他一样挑战自身，为梦想和成就而生，而不是松懈和享受成功。第三篇The person I admire is my mum. She is an English teacher. She is very popular among the students because she spends lots of time on her lessons and has a good sense of humor. Students all enjoy her class. My mum is not only a good teacher, but also a great mother. She is patient with me and always smiling while talking. My mum teaches me how to think independently and helps me to build up my confidence. When I have some difficulties in my studies, it is my mum who encourages me to work until I solve the problem. When Im feeling sad or bad, it is also my mum who looks after

这是我帮另一个人写的文章,也适用于你的这个题目.To me,a suerhero is definitey someone who selflessly helps those who are in need.And so today,I would like to introduce to you someone I hold as the greatest and most superb hero in my heart - my uncle.Many people have uncles,but I think mine is different,and unique.He has a very special job - a fire fighter.Being a fire fighter means that he puts his life on the line whenever he is called for duty.Each battle with a burning building,or each rescue mission of someone trapped in the debris of a collapsed building spells nothing but risks and danger,yet he puts his own safety aside,and dashes into the danger zones over and over again,saving numerous lives.It is an understatement to call him a hero.He is just like any other uncles who dotes on his nephews and nieces.He buys toys for me,and even takes care of me when he isn't on shift and my parents need help looking after me because they are usually always on overseas business trips.He isn't married,so all his love for children and kids are devoted towards me.I am really appreciative of all that he has done not just for me and my family,but also for the many families and lives he has saved,and will save in the future.

Edison was born in America.When he was a child, many people thought that he was not good, in fact, he was full of thinking. He did a lot for the world, he owned over one thousand inventions."The genius contists of one percent inspiration and ninty-nine percent sweat." Although I can't be Edison, I can learn hardworking from him.爱迪生出生在美国,小时候被认为不值得教育的孩子,事实上他是个充满想象力的孩子。他为世界做出了贡献,拥有1000多项发明。是百分之一的灵感加百分之九十九的汗水。”虽然我不能成为爱迪生,但可以学习他的努力与坚韧。

Thomas then worked for five years as a telegraph operator, but he continued to spend much of his time on the job conducting experiments. He got his first patent in 1868 for a vote recorder run by electricity. However, the vote recorder was not a success. In 1870, he sold another invention, a stock-ticker, for $40,000. A stock-ticker is a machine that automatically prints stock prices on a tape. He was then able to build his first shop in Newark, New Jersey.Thomas Edison was totally deaf in one ear and hard of hearing in the other, but thought of his deafness as a blessing in many ways. It kept conversations short, so that he could have more time for work. He called himself a "two-shift man" because he worked 16 out of every 24 hours. Sometimes he worked so intensely that his wife had to remind him to sleep and eat.Thomas Edison died at the age of 84 on October 18, 1931, at his estate in West Orange, New Jersey. He left numerous inventions that improved the quality of life all over the world.爱迪生 (1847-1931) bai19世纪被誉为科学的世du纪，也是以科学的技术化和社会化为突出特zhi征的世纪。dao科学在这个世纪开始成为社会生活的一个重要组成部分。风起云涌的伟大创新转变成为技术科学的巨大威力。这个世纪的一些科技巨擘继续活跃于20世纪。托马斯·阿尔沃·爱迪生（Thomas Alva Edison）,就是其中之一。美国《生活》周刊不久前评出的过去1000年的100位最有影响力人物中，爱迪生名列第一。爱迪生出身低微、生活贫困，他的“学历”是一生只上过3个月的小学，老师因为总被他古怪的问题问得张口结舌，竟然当他母亲的面说他是个傻瓜、将来不会有什么出息。母亲一气之下让他退学，由她亲自教育。这时，爱迪生的天资得以充分地展露。在母亲指导下，他阅读了大量的书籍，并在家中自己建了一个小实验室。为筹措实验室的必要开支，他只得外出打工，当报童、办报纸。最后用积攒的钱在火车的行李车厢建了个小实验室，继续作化学实验研究。后来，化学药品起火，几乎把这个车厢烧掉。暴怒的行李员把爱迪生的实验设备都扔下车去，还打了他几记耳光,据说爱迪生因此终生致聋。爱迪生是美利坚民族崇尚的那种传奇般的人物——虽未受过良好的学校教育，但凭个人奋斗和非凡才智获得巨大成功。他自学成才，以坚韧不拔的毅力、罕有的热情和精力从千万次的失败中站了起来，克服了数不清的困难，成为美国发明家、企业家。他早年曾制定双工式和四工式电报系统，发明自动电报帮电机。1877～1879年发明留声机；实验并改进了电灯（白炽灯）和电话。以后又制定了照明系统，并为实现集中供电进行了许多工作。他提出并采用直流三线系统。制成当时容量最大的发电机，并于1882年利用该机建成了第一座大型发电厂。在同时期，作了铁道电气化的试验。1883年发现“爱迪生效应”，即热电子发射现象。在电影技术、矿业、建筑、化工等方面也有不少著名的发明，仅从1869年到1901年，就取得了1328项发明专利。在他的一生中，平均每15天就有一项新发明，他因此而被誉为“发明大王”。爱迪生献身科学、淡泊名利。在研制电灯时，记者对他说：“如果你真能造出电灯来取代煤气灯，那你一定会赚大钱。”爱迪生回答说：“一个人如果仅仅为积攒金钱而工作，他就很难得到一点别的东西——甚至连金钱也得不到！”他一直被称作现代电影之父，可是在电影界人士为他77岁寿辰举行的盛大宴会上，他说：“对于电影的发展，我只是在技术上出了点力，其他的都是别人的功劳。”爱迪生胸襟开阔、善处逆境。针对自己的耳聋不便，他说：“走在百老汇的人群中，我可以像幽居森林深处的人那样平静。耳聋从来就是我的福气，它使我免去了许多干扰和精神痛苦。”1914年某天晚上，爱迪生的电影实验室突遭火灾，损失巨大。爱迪生安慰伤心之极的妻子说：“不要紧，别看我已67岁了，可我并不老。从明天早晨起，一切都将重新开始，我相信没有一个人会老得不能重新开始工作的。”第二天，爱迪生不但开始动工建造新车间，而且又开始发明一种新的灯——一种帮助消防队员在黑暗中前进的便携式探照灯。火灾对爱迪生就像是一支小小的插曲。爱迪生造福大众、不畏艰辛。为寻找灯丝，他试验了数千种材料；为试制一种新的蓄电池，他失败了八千次。因此，爱迪生常常说：“天才是百分之一的灵感加上百分之九十九的勤奋。”他在80岁时，仍然保持着发明家的精神，坚张地进行着发明创造活动。1927年，他成立了爱迪生植物研究公司，投入一个崭新的研究领域，寻觅化工新材料。81岁高龄的爱迪生成功地从野草中提炼出橡胶，受到人们极高的评价。