不锈冰theresa
每句在不同程度上都有错. 第一句:前句和后句时态不一致,后句的is应改为 was 或 would be,另外还有一小错误,monitor 前需加介词 on. 后句应改为：Then the typed information would be displayed on monitor for deaf students to read during class. 第二句：句子不完整 (动名词短语),除非是标题,但标题需要大写,即：Helping Deaf Students to Learn in the Classroom. 完整的句子：Helping deaf students to learn in the classroom is my responsibility. 3.web logo and mascot 4.I prefer to work in a group....,(it makes me feel very warm-意思不对,“觉得/感到很热.可省略) 5.I want to go and visit Hollywood,Disney world and watch a baseball game.go to hollywood的意思是”进军好莱坞“ 协助听障学生人员=staff who assist students with hearing problems
