韩食小神厨
1.Howcanyouspeechsuccessfully?(your是形容词这里不可以要用名词you)2.Here aresomeadvices(advices是复数)3possibly改成possible(这个是副词,要变为形容词)4.it去掉(这里不需要宾语)5audience改为复数加个s 后面把is改成are(因为这里不止一个观众)6either改为neither(neither....nor...意为既不。。也不。。)希望我的回答能对你有所帮助

可可Cris
Getting rid of the bad habit of procrastination is now my goal in life. My first step was(改成is) to set small targets what(改成that) can be reached realistically. For example,I plan to set a timetable for my study. So after school,I will put finishing homework in the last(改成first) place. Additionally,I will make a list of my important task(改成tasks) including their due dates but(改成and) follow my schedule strictly. I will avoid find(改成finding) excuses for putting them off. At (此处加the)same time,I will ask for (去掉这个for)my friends and parents to help me. By achieving this(改成these) small targets,I have confident(改成confidence) that I will overcome procrastination.
小兔子lucky
The story took place in Amsterdam, Holland in 【the】early 1940s after the German Nazis had occupied most of Europe. The Nazi party ruled German【Germany】 from1933 to 1945. One of their key policy【policies】 was to kill all the Jews in Europe.If any persons known to be Jews was【were】found ,they would be send 【sent】to concentration camps farther east,most【mostly】 in Poland.Families were separated but【and】 transported in trains .For much【many】 days,they go【went】 without food,water,sanitation or fresh air.To avoid this terrible fate ,some Jewish families went into hiding,often under【with】 the help of non-Jewish friends.
爱吃哒小胖纸
The story took place in Amsterdam, Holland in (定冠词 the) early 1940s after the German Nazis had occupied most of Europe. The Nazi party ruled German (德国应该用 Germany) from 1933 to 1945. One of their key policy (应该用复数 policies) was to kill all the Jews in Europe.If any persons known to be Jews was(应该用复数 were) found ,they would be send (被动式sent) to concentration camps farther east,most (应该是副词 mostly) in Poland. Families were separated but (表示并列应该用and) transported in trains .For much (可数名次用 many 修饰) days,they go (过去式 went) without food,water,sanitation or fresh air.To avoid this terrible fate ,some Jewish families went into hiding,often under (应该用with,固定搭配) the help of non-Jewish friends. 全文正确的说法是:This is a true story. It took place in Amsterdam, Holland in the early 1940s after the German Nazis had occupied most of Europe. The Nazi Party ruled Germany from 1933 to 1945. One of their key policies was to kill all the Jews in Europe. If any persons known to be Jews were found, they would be sent to concentration camps farther east, mostly in Poland. Families were separated and transported in trains. For many days, they went without food, water, sanitation or fresh air. To avoid this terrible fate, some Jewish families went into hiding, often with the help of non-Jewish friends This diary was written during the time when Anne and her family moved to escape from being killed by Nazis.
猪猪钕神
更正在括号处注明,总共十处错误! One day, Mrs Hong went to the car park to get her car. When she got to the car park ,she (finds改成found) that someone had stolen (his改成her) car. So she rushed to the police station and told the police about it. (So改成However), the next morning, the car was in its usual parking (places改成place) in the car park. Inside the car was a note, "We are sorry that we stole your car. We really needed it for an emergence trip (加入to) the hospital. Please (receive改成accept) these two tickets for Saturday's show at the Great Theater ". Mrs Hong's husband said,"Criminals are a lot more (politely改成polite) now. They are educated people". So they (go改成went) to the show. When they returned (去掉back) home, there was nothing (leaving改成left) in the house except a note, "Hope you will enjoy the show!"
wumeiyan01
was改为is,what改为which,put finishing改为finish,task 改为tasks,but改为and,find改为finding,this改为these,confident改为confidence
那份噯隻許伱甡
担心别人给你的答案不完全正确,心里多少还是没底对不对?我给你找到题目的原文了,保证100%正确,o(∩_∩)o...哈哈。这道题目来自一篇阅读材料:The story took place in Amsterdam, Holland in the early 1940s after the German Nazis had occupied most of Europe. The Nazis Party ruled Germany from 1933 to 1945. One of their key policies was to kill all the Jews in Europe. If any persons known to be Jews were found, they would be sent to concentration camps farther east, mostly in Poland. Families were separated and transported in trains. For many days, they went without food, water, sanitation or fresh air. To avoid this terrible fate, some Jewish families went into hiding, often with the help of non-Jewish friends.(后面的权作参考吧,你的题目里面没有出现)This diary was written during the time when Anne and her family moved to escape from being killed by Nazis.我就不详细解释了,慢慢品味吧,^_^。