小嘟嘟呀呀
我，憨态可掬，行动缓慢。有着一对小小的耳朵，当冬天来临，穿上厚厚的毛冬装，那小小的耳朵就显得若隐若现了。色调会根据分布的区域而变化，从近乎全黑到棕色和灰色，再到红色和淡棕色……相信你们已经猜到了。没错，我就是称霸天下的——棕熊。我们棕熊家族个个憨态可掬，行动缓慢。但是我们的嗅觉极佳，视觉也极好。我们憨态可掬的外表的很像熊猫，但是毛色还是不相同的。我们喜欢吃益虫、野猪……不过，我们特别喜欢吃迁徙的鲑鱼。在鲑鱼迁徙的过程中我们用灵敏的眼睛与手合作，就轻而易举的把鱼给抓住了，这可是我们的“极品佳肴”呀！我们在森林里无忧无虑的生活着。可是，人类来了之后，宁静被打破了。人类大量地砍伐森林，我们的家园被毁了。在迁徙的过程中，人类还捕捉我们。许多同伴都被抓了，他们还把我们的胆汁给取下来，手掌来做药。我们成了他们餐桌上的‘佳肴’了。
吾色真人
Hello,everyone.My name is ***,I'm * years old.I'm in Grade* Class* . I like .(这句可以写成你喜欢的东西) I'm from****.That's all, thank you !
爱吃奶糖的鱼
Respected teacherI call XiongCuiTing, 18 this year, I was 55 height meter high a student. Studying in shaoguan vocational senior high school, enter oneself for an examination of the university architecture. I study hard in high school grades during. In studying constantly improve themselves, my hobby is widespread, like animals, especially for pet care, love reading. I have a happy family, my mother, sister in real estate company work in school. In the study, my mother always supported my education, my, self-improvement, self-reliance and become a contribution to society. I like the outgoing personality, and conversation. I have many friends. The students in the class is welcome. If you can attend university, I study hard, for countries. Do contributionMy English is not good enough, but reading university, I will continue to improve ourselves and enrich myself to reach a higher level. Here is not only learn knowledge, to learn the life philosophy. Make yourself to make greater contribution to the society, and thank you for listening to the teacher's!
姹紫嫣红NEI
Dear Sir, My name is Xiong Cuicui, 18 years old this year, 1.55 mtres high. I, who am a student of grade 3 in high school, now study at Shaoguan Vocational High School and have applied for your school's architecture specialty. During my study at high school, I have studied assiduously and my achievements in all subjects are above-average. In the course of study, I am advanced unceasingly. My hobby is broad and I like animals so much that I have deep interest in pet nursing. During my spare time I browse widely. My family lives a happy life. My mother works in a real estate company and my sister studies in Grade 2 in high school. All through my life time, my mother always supports me and educates me in order to make me improve myself and support myself so that I can become a person who has contribution to society. With an outgoing nature, I like to chat with my schoolmates. I have so many friends that I am very popular with all my classmates. If I can be admitted to your school, I will work hard so that I can contribute to the country. I do my best to learn English in order that I can make even more progress when in the future, I study at university,(这里我把你的原文稍微修改了，不要说自己英语不好。) where I can study not only knowledge but also life philosophy to make myself devote to serving society. Thank you. 给你提几点建议： 1、我作为一位从事高考工作多年的老师认为你的这份自荐书有些不足，如果你是练笔的话，那就另当别论了。 2、作为自荐书，你要充分说明你要报考的专业的理由。你说你要报考建筑专业，但你根本没谈你有什么这方面的兴趣和爱好。 3、自荐信对于无关的东西是没必要谈的，但你说了好些于你要求报考的专业无关的话。 4、自荐信主要是谈自己的能力和优点，最好不谈不足，但你却说自己英语不好，给看你自荐信的搞录取工作的老师很不好的印象。 5、希望你在好好斟酌一下，主要写自己在对于建筑方面有什么兴趣与爱好，与这无关的话一句话都不要说，(比如喜欢动物之类跟建筑根本风马牛不相及的东西。家庭成员好像也没必要介绍。)并且具体点，越具体越能打动搞录取的老师的心。 6、写完后可以继续找我给你翻译。
chunping1988
The High school teacher has given you a good translation of your Chinese introduction, and some advice is very important to you. If you are patient to put the translation version down and recite them,it will be good for your performance in your interview. However, you'd better not present yourself by speaking out what you have written. The translation is just a helper for you to get through smoothly. Wish you have a good interview...
