我生长在某地英语

He was born in Shanghai on March 5,1988shanghai和on之间不应有逗号 March 5 , 1988需要逗号隔开，另外逗号会把一个整句断成两个单句，不要乱用March 5 读的时候 (the) fifth the 是不读出来的。知道就行了。另外要培养自己的语感，做题就快了。

He was born on March 5, 1988, in Shanghai.He was born in Shanghai, on March 5,1988. 都行。