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更正在括号处注明，总共十处错误！ One day, Mrs Hong went to the car park to get her car. When she got to the car park ,she (finds改成found) that someone had stolen (his改成her) car. So she rushed to the police station and told the police about it. (So改成However), the next morning, the car was in its usual parking (places改成place) in the car park. Inside the car was a note, "We are sorry that we stole your car. We really needed it for an emergence trip (加入to) the hospital. Please (receive改成accept) these two tickets for Saturday's show at the Great Theater ". Mrs Hong's husband said,"Criminals are a lot more (politely改成polite) now. They are educated people". So they (go改成went) to the show. When they returned (去掉back) home, there was nothing (leaving改成left) in the house except a note, "Hope you will enjoy the show!"
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布丁的信仰
One day,Mrs Hong went to the car park to get her car.When she got to the car park ,she FOUND that someone had stolen HER car .So she rushed to the police station and. told the police about it.So , IN the next morning,the car was in its usual parking places in the car park .Inside the car was a note,"We are sorry that we stole your car .We really NEED it for an emergence trip TO the hospital.Please receive these two tickets for Saturday's show at the Great Theater ".Mrs Hong's husband said ,"Criminals are a lot more POLITE now . They are educated people".So they WENT to the show . When they returned back home ,there was nothing LEFT in the house except a note ,"Hope you will enjoy the show!"大写的，我希望我是对的
