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批改如下，供参考。Most of us found Mrs. Li, our English teacher, strange on Teachers' Day. She did not receive a single greeting card from us students. She had never thought a complete surprise would be waiting for her.All my classmates and I began to design the activity's strategy long before Teachers' Day .The different task was delivered to different classmates .In an effort to give the teacher a surprise, we decorated every inch in the classroom and spared no effort in doing it .Considering the money was limited,we arranged two parts in this activity :Giving flowers and singing songs .Entering the classroom ,the teacher got a complete surprise.From the picture,we can see the activity is successful.I think that the activity can end with flying colors owing to everyone's effort .I can see everyone's passion and patience from the process.No one can deny the fact that the activity can keep our team spirit.亲：只要紧扣要点，尽量避免语法上的错误，单词拼写错误，那就OK了。祝你进步！
