傻喵喵123
1.第一句were改成are。讲述现在发生的动作2.第二句改为aswellas,他们在城市中有很多机会也有很多困难asgoodas是“像……一样“或”像……一样好“的意思。.AaswellasB.A.B也一样3.第三句opportunity改成复数opportunities。4.第四句brighter前面加个a。goodeducation那里没错，但感觉句意上来说bettereducation可能更好5.第六句affordtolive6.第七句helpthem7.最后一句happily
Angelcat930
Once upon a time there was no tea at all in England. People there used to drink a light (1) beer. No coffee or milk but (2) large glasses of beer stood (3) on the breakfast table! When tea was (4) first brought to England, an old couple got some as a special treat. But they did not know how (5) it should be used. They cooked the leaves in (6) hot water, and spread them on a piece of bacon which (7) they were going to have (8) for dinner. They ate the leaves, and throw the tea away! However (9), tea is becoming so (10) popular as coffee and milk in England today.
飞雪樱子
Getting rid of the bad habit of procrastination is now my goal in life. My first step was(改成is) to set small targets what（改成that） can be reached realistically. For example,I plan to set a timetable for my study. So after school,I will put finishing homework in the last(改成first) place. Additionally,I will make a list of my important task(改成tasks) including their due dates but(改成and) follow my schedule strictly. I will avoid find(改成finding) excuses for putting them off. At (此处加the)same time,I will ask for (去掉这个for)my friends and parents to help me. By achieving this(改成these) small targets,I have confident(改成confidence) that I will overcome procrastination.
