高小贱大琪琪
Hi!My name is XXX. I am ten years old . I at XXX primary school . I like play football and read a book. My dream is scientists . Thank you !嗨！我叫XXX。我的年龄是10岁，在XXX学校上学.我喜欢踢足球和看书。我的梦想是当个科学家。谢谢！ ———————————————————————————————————————————I like play football and read a book.【分明就是病句，like doing会吗？不会就算是like todo总会吧！ a book读一本书，难道你就喜欢读一本书啊！】My dream is scientists【复数？！你有几个啊！记住你只有一个】at XXX primary school 【在某个学校介词用in，p和s大写】 像你这种作文只能的40分（满分100）病句一堆，没有形容词修饰，给你40算高了，不会写，就不要误导小朋友
恶狼追月
Hello everyone! My name is Allen, I'm six years old. I have been studying at OK English school for two months. I like watching KAKU cartoons and car toys. I also like sports. My favourate sport is basketball. Candy is the best food for me, how about you?大家好，我叫Allen,今年六岁了，我在OK英语学校学习英语2个月了。我喜欢看KAKU动画片，喜欢汽车玩具。我也很喜欢运动，我最喜欢的运动是篮球。糖果是我最喜欢的食物，你呢？
雪野在宁
My name is Allen. I am nearly six years old. I have been learning English at...English School for two months. I can speak a little English now. I like watching Kaku cartoon. I like doing sports and playing toy cars,too. I often play football with my father. I am good at football. My favorite food is candy. My parents often buy me lots of candies. I know eating too much candy is bad for my teeth,but I can't stop eating the candy.
小琳仔仔
hello，everyone！My name is xxx.l am ten years old.l'm in xxx Primary school. l like playing football.And l also like to read books .l have a dream.l'd like to be a scientistbecause l like making experiments,so l will listen to teachers carefully.And l want tobe friendly to others.That's all.Thank you.大家好！我的名字叫xxx。我十岁了。我在xxx小学。我喜欢踢足球。我也喜欢看书。我有一个梦想。我想成为一位科学家因为我喜欢做实验，所以我会认真听老师的。并且我会友好的对待大家。我的讲话完了。谢谢。~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~我无良了~~
麻辣宝宝彩
Hello,everyone.My name is ALLEN.I`m six.I study English for two months in XXX English school.I like sports and car toys.I also like watching KAKU.My favorite food is suger.不要说有创意和新颖了，我现在还担心有没有错别字呢，将就着用吧，1分钟内肯定能说完。哈哈
