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怎么写个好的开发信标题,毅冰的帖子中已提到过开发信标题的写法,见解独到:举个例子吧,假设我是做太阳能灯的公司DEF Co. Ltd,目前公司最大的客人是美国的Home Depot,尽管可能是通过贸易商做的,不是直接合作,但是完全可以当作一个开发新客人的筹码!如果我要写一封开发信给美国的ABC inc(名字是编的),我从google上了解了一些这个公司的信息,知道他们是美国的进口商,有做太阳能灯系列,希望能试着开发这个客人,我一般会这样写主题,“Re: ABC inc/Home Depotvendor-solar light/DEF Co., Ltd.” 其中,ABC inc代表了客人的公司名,你在写给他的主题上首先加上他公司名,表示对他们公司的尊重;Home Depot vendor-solar light明确表示你是北美第二大零售商Home Depot的太阳能灯供应商,既表明了实力,也勾起他的兴趣;最后的DEF Co., Ltd.代表自己公司。这样一来,假设你找对了人,这个正是ABC公司太阳能灯的buyer,又或者是他的某一个主管,突然某一天收到这么一个主题的邮件,哇,homedepot的供应商找上来了,太棒了,应该看看是不是有合作机会,是不是比原有供应商更好?他打开邮件的概率会非常非常大!再说了,这个主题设置的还有一个好处,就是客人即使暂时不回你邮件,只是放在收件箱里,但是将来某一天他突然想让你报报价,很容易就能找到这封邮件!只要关键词输入home depot,保证一下子就找到。 以上毅冰的初衷也是给大家提供一个思路,大家思维也不要太模式化。结合自己的想法,就是好的。一点争议:关于标题加上 RE: FW:最近我也很困惑,因为我的一个客户说,Re: FW: 这些标记你不要随便用,因为人们不喜欢欺骗性。如果打开以后根本这个人不认识,或者这个人准备推销,那么邮件读了个开头就被会删除。如果你和对方素不相识,那么可能你的开发信要经过几次转手才能到采购的邮箱中。而这途中被删除的可能太高。所以我现在发开发信,标题我已经开始注意尽量不用RE: FW: 开头。客户给了我一个建议,比如:Exciting Update from PIS Company– Walmart Approved Supplier 我觉还不错!----来自福步论坛无纺布塑料S的分享。
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英文开发信如果写的有特点的话,在外贸上也许能够开发更多客户呢?下面是我给大家整理的外贸英文开发信范文,供大家参阅!
Dear Sir,
This is XX from a manufacturer specializing in producing XXX in China.
We have been in this industry for over 10 years,please have a look at our website:XXX,you will find there are many products same as the ones you displayed.
Anyway,you could find some other items which you can also put on your market.
Any inquiries on the XXX please do not hesitate to contact us.
We are looking forward to establish win-win business relations with you.
Many Thanks & Best Regards
Hello ,
You are quite correct I am extremely busy every day and I would imagine so other business men. I have talked to other men in similar business to us and they also regard all the emails they receive everyday from suppliers around the world as a waste of time and annoying.
I’m not sure if I can help you but I have a few suggestions re email marketing.
• If you send emails to new companies I would include a list of customers that you currently export to in various countries
• I would also include customer testimonials from your buyers. This are very powerful and give you credibility.
• Try to word your email differently from all the other suppliers. They all look and sound the same so most of them will be deleted or ignored immediately
If you want to be noticed and if you want your email to be read you must be different and create an email that is interesting and will catch the attention of your prospective customer. If you don’t then you will be rejected just like all the others. Remember that companies like us and others who import product are very concerned about quality control of products.
Unfortunately China has gained a reputation as a supplier of cheap but poor quality products. Price is always important but it is not the MOST important part of a product.
Regards,
I would like to introduce myself. I am Stone Lee and I represent Efront Digital Textile company in Hangzhou, China. We are glad to know that you are a large retail enterprise in USA to deal with …… I was referred by friend in USA retail business who is familiar with your corporation.
As a professional manufacturer, I would like to introduce our products to you and offer you a quote.
We are a manufacturer of household textile products, including chenille bedspread, Spanish bedspread, tapestry wallhanging, throw, tapestry cushion, chenille carpet, upholstery fabric and more which are all digital jacquard machine weaved by import looms(16 in total from German and Italy). The catalogue I attached includes just some of our high quality products. Please visit our website at
We have passed through ISO9001:2000;ISO14001:2004;ecological textile certification.It would be our pleasure to begin a business relationship with you and supply your stores with our quality products,.
Sincerely yours,
We owe your name and address to the Commercial Counselor’s Office of the Swedish Embassy in Beijing who have informed us that you are in the market for Textiles. We avail ourselves of this opportunity to approach you for the establishment of trade relations with you.
We are a state-operated corporation, handling both the import and export of Textiles. In order to acquaint you with our business lines, we enclose a copy of our Export List covering the main items sup pliable at present.
Should any of the items be of interest to you, please let me know. We shall be glad to give you our lowest quotations upon receipt of your detailed requirements.
In our trade with merchants of various countries, we always adhere to the principle of equality and mutual benefit. It is our hope to promote, by joint efforts, both trade and friendship to our mutual advantage. We look forward to receiving your enquiries soon. Yours faithfully, Encl.
Wish you enjoy a great day!
We get your name and email address from your trade lead on that you are in the market for ball pen. We would like to introduce our company and products, hope that we may build business cooperation in the future.
We are factory specializing in the manufacture and export of ball pen for more than six years. We have profuse designs with series quality grade, and expressly, our price is very competitive because we are manufactory, we are the source. You are
welcome to visit our website which includes our company profiles, history and something latest designs.
Should any of these items be of interest to you, please let us know, We will be happy to give you details.
As a very active manufactures, we develop new designs nearly every month, If you have interest in it, it`s my pleasure to offer news to you regular.
Best regards,
Dafu Wong
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This is XX from a manufacturer specializing in producing XXX in China.
We have been in this industry for over 10 years,please have a look at our website:XXX,you will find there are many products same as the ones you displayed. Anyway,you could find some other items which you can also put on your market. Any inquiries on the XXX please do not hesitate to contact us.
We are looking forward to establish win-win business relations with you.
Many Thanks & Best Regards
Good day! This is Mickel from China. We are writing to you to establish long-term trade relations with you.
From your company web,we get to know that your company is an influence company in your business and are dealing with razor barbed wire.We would like to take this opportunity to introduce our company and products.
We are a leading company with many years' experience in wire mesh export business. Our products are razor barbed wire,which enjoy popularity in Middle East & Europe markets.You may also visit our online company introduction, which includes our latest product line.
Should any of these items be of interest to you, please let us know. We will be happy to give you a quotation upon receipt of your detailed requirements.We look forward to receiving your enquires soon. Sincerely,
Mickel Liu
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英文开发信模板如下所示。
1、最简洁开发信模板。
here, exporting with good quality and low price in US。
Call me, let's talk details。
Rgds。
2、简洁开发信模板。
We, Co. Ltd, is professional in precision machining for nearlly 10 years, covering high precision machining parts, casting parts, metal parts, etc。
Hope to establish business relationship with you!Should you wanna know more about our company, pls visit 。
Any comments, that'll be appreciated。
Thanks。
3、没反应,持续骚扰模板。
Dear。
Sorry to trouble you again。
Please find my mail below。
Could you please kindly check by return today? Because we'll be on holiday from May.1st to 3rd。
Thank you in advance。
Best regards。
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