枫中落叶
This morning, my foreign teacher Robert and I went to the park by taxi. On 【1.seen改成seeing】 the beautiful trees and flowers, Robert couldn't wait to take pictur. It was at the moment 【2.when改成that 】we found his camera gone. He searched all over his bag but just couldn't find 【3.one改成it】. Suddently it came to me 【4.加上that】he might have left it in the taxi. 【5.lucky改成luckily】, we found【6. 去掉out 】the ticket and immediately got【7. in改成to 】the taxi company.About half an hour【8. late改成later】 ,the dirver returned with the camera. Both of us were grateful 【9.for改成to 】the driver.Rober and I 【10.enjoy改成enjoyed】 ourselves during the rest of the day 。这貌似是你发的第二遍？虽然文章稍微不太一样
一个人淋着雨
1.as-while while连接两个同时发生的动作.as没有这个功能.2.rings-变过去时. 整篇都是过去时.3.me-my 这里是"我的",不能用宾格.4.a-the phone是特指,就是自己用这个,a表示泛指,不知道具体哪部电话.5.room和full中间加 was be full of 固定句型.6.opening-opened 没啥好解释的啊,过去式,跟前面的turned照应.7.in-to to one's surprise出乎某人的意料之外,固定句型.8.没看出有错.9.about去掉 tell sb...告诉某人.. 中间没有介词.10.which去掉
我知道你会
第一行，if和in去掉第二行，notices改成noticed 第三行，any改成some，最后的the改成a 第四行，great改成greatly，after改成before 第五行，Sometime改成sometimes，the改成what 第六行，and改成but
雯香识女人coco
第二行：make 改为 makes 第五行：删除been 第六行：not 后的the 改为 a 第八行：subject 改为 subjects ; something 改为nothing 第十行： us 改为 me ； me 后面加 to 第十一行：helps 改为 helped 第十二行：in 改为 on 第十五行： which 改为 where
duduzhu1986
One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as the 1.as->when telephone rings．I went to answer it immediately． 2.rings->rang She Was my close friend，Lisa. When we were talking 3.she->It on a phone．the fire alarm sounded．I ran back to the 4.a->the kitchen．The room full of smoke and the beef was badly 5.room 和 full之间加was burnt．I quickly turned off the gas，opening all the 6.opening->opened windows．and then went out of the house．In my 7.In->To surprise，two fire engines were outside my house．I 8.正确 Was rather worried．I told about the firemen that it 9.about去掉 was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke． 10.careless->carelessness
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