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1.句子要正确:Do you know where is the People's Park is?(注:从句要用陈述语序,不能用疑问语序。)2.句子要平行:In my spare time I enjoy listening to populer music and collecting stamps.(注:enjoy 的两个并列的宾语都用动名词。)3.句子要连贯:After you enter the park by the main gate,walk straight on till you come to a stream.Cross the steam and turn right.(注:使用after,till,and等过渡词,使句子连贯。)4.句子要有逻 辑性:I was very interested in computer and won first prize late year.(注:因为后半句的结果“去年获奖”用了过去时,所以前 半句的原因“对电脑感兴趣”也必须用过去时,尽管至今仍非常感兴趣。)5.句子要避免 过多重复:After walking for a while you'll come to a hill.Walk round to the other side of the hill.There you'll see a lake. (注:使用不同的句式而避免过多重复“You will”)6.句子要避免 头重脚轻:The main subjects were Chinese,maths,English,plysics,chemistry and computer.(注:通过主表交换的方法;若真正主语为从句 不定式短语、动名词短语时,可用形式主语it.)7.句子要避免 汉语式英语:In my spare time, I enjoy swimming---或I'm fond of swimming---或my favourites are swimming---或my hobbies are swim- ming---(注“业余爱好”不能写成“spare lover”,“lover”是“情人”的意思。)注意:段落的使用句式要错落有致,不要单调重复。要穿插使用祈使句和I'm sure等主观想象句,再辅以时间状语从句与非谓语动词、长句与短句 的交替使用,使文章更具可读性。
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