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OUR NEW YEAR First, we clean our house and sweep away had[换成bad] luck. Then, we paint doors and windows red. It means good luck. We usually decorate the doors and windows with paper cuts. We buy some new clothes. On New Year's Day, we put on new clothes and visit our family and friends. The family[这里family 表示家人,应该用复数 families] have dinner and we eat Jiaozi -- a kind of dumpling, or a sweet rice pudding. At midnight, there are usually fireworks[这一句不完整,可以换成 we usually let off fireworks, 当然换别的句子也可以]. OUR PLANS IN NEW YEAR In my family, everyone has a New Year's plan. My father is going to find a good job and make more money. My mother is going to work hard and look after our family well. My brother and my sister are going to study hard and get good results, and go to a good university[他门只会努力的做这件事, 换成 and study harder to enter a good university 语气上更贴切一些 ]. I am going to get good results, too. And I am going to Disneyland. We are going to go to the Great Wall. 这几个句子,读起来太重复了,虽然语法没错,但是都是 be going to,显得单调可以稍微换几个, 比如最后两句换成 I will surely fulfill my target too, And I shall go to Disneyland for a trip. We also want to travel the Great Wall, because it is a very important scenery, which is full of symbolic sense of china. 最后两句换成这个也可以I AM A GUIDE Hello! Welcome to Nanning. Nanning is famous for [这里要加一个 its]green trees, so it is called Green City. This is a beautiful city. In Nanning the hills are all green and the water is all clear. It has 4 million people. There are lots of skyscrapers in Nanning. So, we like Nanning best. HOW TO GET A GOOD MARK Hi, Jack, Nice to hear from you. You got a bad mark in Chinese[这里要用China]. I am going to give you some advice[这里要用复数advices]. You should do more practice for maths[这里是中国化英文了,你可以说You should practise maths problems more 更规范一些, 你的那个句子语法勉强拼的上,但外国人很少这样用]. Why don't you go to library to read some books about history and Chinese. How about listening to the radio, reading newspaper and watching Chinese films in English [这句你想表达什么? 你想说 Chinese films with English subtitles 带着英文字幕的中文电影是么? 换一下]. You should have[这里用 take] a notebook and write the new works down and read them every day. Try to speak more Chinese in your class. Good luck! Yours, Philip A POSTCARD Dear Mum, Greetings from London! How are you? We are enjoying the school trip. Some people are swimming. Some people are shopping now. At the moment, my friend is listening to music. I am taking photos and eating ice cream. My another friend[应该用 Another friend of mine] is visiting the zoo. Some people are watching ballet now. Most people are playing football and playing basketball. See you soon. WHAT CAN I DO FOR THE GREEEN [打字错误,这里是GREEN ]OLYMPICS? Beijing will hold the 29th Olympics Games. It will be Green Olympics. As students, we must do something for the Green Olympics. We mustn't throw the rubbish away. We can't draw pitures[打字错误,这里是pictures] on the wall. We want to[这里用should 比较贴切] plant more flowers and trees in our country. I think our country will become cleaner and more beautiful than any other country. Many foreign visitors will come to Beijing Olympics Games. I love Beijing. I love China. MY SCHOOL DAY I go to school at seven o'clock. I have breakfast at half past seven. Lessons start at eight o'clock. We have Chinese, English, History and Maths. I have lunch at five past twelve. I often play football in the afternoon. I have dinner at half past six. In the evening, I do my homework at eight o'clock. I go to bed at ten o'clock. 你的英文还不错

欢迎方便的时候来中国广西南宁翻译是：Welcome to Nanning, Guangxi, China