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英语周记格式
英语周记格式
周记的基本格式是写明日期(包括星期,年,月,日,气候),标题,主题内容,末尾写上署名.
日期的格式:
星期，年,月，日，天气
eg:
July 15,2007 Sunday Sunny
上面的那个是美式表达的日期
也可以用英式表达:15 July,2007 (15th July,2007)
注意:日期专业上来说最好不要缩写
标题即你想写的题目
主题内容:段落
署名
具体如下:
eg:
July 15,2007 Sunday Sunny
(My Happiest Day )
Today is Friday. It is my thirteenth birthday. I got up very early in the morning and put on my new clothes happily. My parents bought me the new clothes as my birthday presents. I went to school earlier than before. I invited many of my classmates to come to my birthday party in the evening.
Evening came at last. Many of my classmate came to my home. they bought me lots of beautiful presents. they all said,"Happy birthday to you!" We sang birthday songs happily.then my parents brought out a big birthday cake, saying, "We love you for ever. Happy birthday!"
At the end of the party, we ate the birthday cake and some other delicious food. How happy I was!
It was Sunday. Our teacher Mr Zhu led us to a park nearby.Usually we go to the park to spend our holiday. But today we went there to take part in voluntary labour.
We got there at nine o’clock. Mr Zhu divided us into three groups and then we began working.
the students in Group One planted trees and watered flowers. the studentsin Group Two were busy collecting litter left by the tourist. they also cleaned the benches in the park. I was in Group Three. We went to the children’s playground and cleaned all the equipment there. We worked very hard.
At about eleven we finished working. We met at the gate of the park. We all felt tired but very happy.
【写作指导：写作细节应该注意哪些问题】
1、选用典型细节。
细节描写在文章中不是越多越好，细节描写要能抓住典型细节，而应选择具有代表性、概括性、能反映深刻主题的事。这样才更具有广泛性，有利于突出文章中心，从而给人留下更为深刻的印象。比如，鲁迅在《祝福》里几次写到鲁四老爷“皱一皱眉”，这种面部表情的细微变化，便深刻地暴露出封建绅士厌恶寡妇、维护旧礼教的反动立场和丑恶灵魂。
2、细致观察事物。
要使得描写生动形象，在观察事物过程中，我们要调动自己的各种感官，对事物作非常细致的观察。每个人都有不同的性格特征，所以每个人说话、做事都会以不同的方式体现出自己的性格。我们要做的，就是认真地去观察，然后把它积累下来，作为写作的素材。写人是这样，细节描写用于写景、状物时，则要把握住景物的特征和变化。
3、细节描写要服从表现中心的需要，力求使细节具有深刻意义。
细节描写是一种以小见大的方法。细节的分量虽轻，容量却大，在我们选择细节的时候要从细微处着手、从大处着眼、小中见大，让小的细节反映人的`思想状况、社会风貌。
4、细节描写必须典型真实。
所谓真实，是指细节描写能够精确而又惟妙惟肖地反映现实生活中的人事的特征。所谓典型，是指描写的细节，具有广泛的代表性，能够通过个别的、细小的事物，反映一般与全貌，由现象揭示本质。比如朱自清在《背影》中对父亲爬月台时吃力样子和动作的描写，突出了父亲对我无私的爱，让每个读者感动不已。他的成功之处在于对父亲动作的细致观察和准确地表达。
5、精心锤炼词语。在细节描写中，我们要选择恰当的词语，以期以少胜多，乃至一字传神。
6、巧妙运用修辞。运用比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞格，可以增强语言的生动性，变抽象为具体，使无形变为有形。
7、善用标点符号：
鲁迅的小说《故乡》塑造了一个深受剥削压迫的淳朴农民的典型形象——闰土。小说在闰土的语言细节描写中，巧妙地借用标点符号，来表现闰土这二十多年来的变化。共有六句，其中却有了9个省略号，给人印象特别深的有这样两处：(1)见到“我”时，“闰土态度恭敬起来，分明的叫道：‘老爷!’……”(2)当“我”问他景况时，“他只是摇头，‘非常难，第六个孩子也会帮忙了，却总是吃不够……又不太平……什么地方都要钱，没有定规……收成又不好’”。第一句写闰土的变化，一声“老爷!”破坏了他们往日素朴的友谊，在他们情感交流之间，“已经隔了一层可悲的厚障壁了”。一个省略号，真实而细腻地表现了闰土矛盾、痛苦的心理及令人为之惋惜的悲哀的变化。第二句分明是写闰土性格变化的社会根源，省略号显示了他的声音低微，又断断续续，有说不出道不明的苦。而这苦正是“饥荒，苛税，兵，匪，官，绅”把他折磨成一个“木偶人”，使他走向麻木迟钝的深渊。这省略号里，浸透了闰土的血泪，包含了无数的人生辛酸悲凉。
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周记的基本格式是写明日期(包括星期、年、月、日、气候)，标题，主题内容，末尾写上署名。
日期的格式：星期，年,月，日，天气
eg:July 15,2007 Sunday Sunny
上面的那个是美式表达的日期
也可以用英式表达:15 July,2007 (15th July,2007)
注意:日期专业上来说最好不要缩写
标题即你想写的题目
主题内容:段落
署名
范文：
英语周记（一）
i went to visit the great wall with my friends during the summer vacation. we went there by bus. it took us about two hours to get there. it was hot and windy that day. there were thousands of people. when we saw a group of foreigners,we went up and talked with them. we told them lots of history of the great wall. they were very surprised when they saw that our english were exellent and we knew a lot about the great wall's history. they thanked us a lot and we really had a good time. we felt proud of ourselves and being chinese.
我和我的伙伴在夏令营期间去了长城,我们是乘汽车去的,经过两个小时才到的那儿。那日日气很热,风也很大,许多许多的人,当我们看到一群外国人的时候,我们上去和他们攀谈。我们告诉他们许多关于长城的故事,他们非常惊讶我们的英语是如斯的好,而且我们还懂那么多关于长城的故事。他们非常感谢我们,而我们也度过了愉快的一日。我们为自己是一名中国人而感到很自豪。
英语周记（二）
it was sunny and very hot today. i got up early and helped my parents cook breakfast. then i washed the dishes and cleaned the room. after a short rest i did my homework in the morning. in the afternoon i went swimming in the nearest swimming pool with my friends. it was really cool to swim in such a hot day. i surfed the inter and read a storybook in the evening. i really had a busy and interesting day.
今日日气晴朗相对热。 我起得很早,帮父母做早饭。然后我洗碗打扫屋子。休息一会后我上午做作业。 下午我和伙伴去我家最近的游泳池游泳。 在如斯炎热的夏日游泳确实的很棒。 晚上我上网、看故事书。我今日很忙过得很有趣。
英语周记（三）
i went to the home for the aged with my friends on july 30th.as soon as the eldly people saw us, they were all happy. 1.we sang songs and danced for them. then we helped the worker clean the rooms and washes the clothes. they praized us a lot and said that we were good boys. although we felt tired, we had a good time.
我在七月30日和伙伴去了敬老院。那些老年人一看到我们就非常欢快。我们给他们唱歌、跳舞。 然后我们帮助那里的工人们打扫房间、洗衣服。他们夸赞我们是好孩子。尽管我们感到很累,当我们过得很愉快。
英语周记（四）
i live very happily today in the morning, it is very fine then i climb the mountain with family, the air on the mountain is very fresh, the flowers plants and trees on the mountain all seem extremely beautiful. coming back home in the evening, family and i sat and watched tv together, we are returning and eating the fruit while chatting, the whole family is happy and harmonious.
今日我过得非常开心早上,日气非常好于是我和家人一起去登山,山上的空气非常清新,山上的花草树木都显得格外美丽。晚上回到家,我与家人坐在一起看电视,我们还一边聊日一边吃着水果,全家其乐融融。
英语周记（五）
i went to summer camp on vacation. on the first day, we went to a beautiful beach. it was a sunny and hot day, so we went swimming. the water was warm and we had great fun. then the next day, we went to the mountains. there were many trees and i really enjoyed them. on the last day, we had a great party. we sang and danced happily. we didn’t want to leave(离开) the friends and the teachers. i hope i can go to summer camp again next year.
我去夏令营度假。第一日,我们去了美丽的海滩。这是一个阳光和炎热的一日,所以我们去游泳。水是温暖的,我们有很大的乐趣。然后第二日,我们去了山区。有许多树木,我非常喜欢他们。在最后一日,我们有一个伟大的党。我们欢快地载歌载舞。我们不想离开(离开)的伙伴和老师。我希望我能够去夏令营明年再次。
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