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一、引言
英语写作教学是初中英语教学的一项重要内容,也是学生掌握比较薄弱的一环。我们应抓好基本功的训练、开展形式多样的写作训练、进行行之有效的讲、评、改,以切实有效地提高学生的英语写作技能。
二、抓好基本功的训练
写作是语言的输出,应建立在语言材料输入的基础上,如果学生没有关于主题信息的知识输入,没有正确的英语词法、句法、语段和语篇结构特征等知识,就很难实现正确的语言输出。俗话说:“巧妇难为无米之炊”。因此,要想写好作文,就必须抓好基础。
1.听写练习
听写每个单元的重点单词、短语和句子。听写练习既能练听又能练写,一方面检验了听的理解,另一方面也有助于提高写的速度及准确性,还可巩固所学内容,为写作打下坚实的基础。
2.说的练习
每节课前几分钟,可采用值日生报告制,内容不限,可以是读过的小故事、也可以是自己的习作;教师也可就上节课所学内容进行一连串的提问,或让学生把所学对话改写成短文等。通过这种说的练习,让学生注意时态、语态、人称和前后的逻辑关系,从而为写作打下基础。
3.词组识记以及固定表达句型背诵
在教学中要求学生多识记词组。词组就是单词根据语用实际形成的一种约定俗成的固定搭配。如果想写出或说出地道的英语,就要用那些约定俗成的词组。例如,表达吃药的词组是“take medicine”而不是“drink medicine”或“eat medicine”。记住词组have a good time意义及用法, 写作中就不会出现“I played happily” 汉语式的错误了。英语中有许多比较固定的表达方式,如:I am afraid that„. It is hard to„等,掌握了它们,对学生写作大有裨益。
4.五种简单句的句型结构训练
五种简单句是指以下基本句型:SV、SVP、SVO、SVOC、SVOO。英语中千变万化的句子归根到底都离不开这五个基本句型,因此对这五个基本句型的训练就尤为重要。
三、开展形式多样的写作训练
1.英汉互译练习
每个单元都有一两个重点句型,让学生进行英汉互译,可进行两种语言的对比,提高学生对英语语言的敏感度,从而在写作中有意识地避免母语干扰,正确使用英语语言。
2.仿写
教师容易围绕句型设计小作文,鼓励学生阅读后仿写相似题材和内容的文章,这样的写作就不会出现结构混乱、内容空洞的现象,对增强学生的自信心、提高写作能力大有帮助。如Unit 4 What would you do?这一单元主要句型是I would „if I had a million dollars,我设计这样的作文题:假如你中了一百万的彩票你将会怎样做?同学们写出的作文就比较成功了。
3.充分利用教材进行写作练习,培养写的能力
Go for it! 以单元编排,每个单元一个话题,每个单元都由易到难,最后落实到以话题为主的书面写作上来。这些话题生动有趣,贴近学生生活,题材广泛,给学生以发挥的空间和余地。每个学生可根据个人特长以及自己对同一事物的不同见解,写出与众不同、富有个人特色的作文来。
4.对写作主题加以讨论,并整理、组织成文
在写作教学中开展讨论,能使学生懂得该写什么,怎么写。在讨论过程中,学生可以集思广益,互相借鉴,综合集体的智慧,降低写作的难度,学生就不觉得无话可说,无字可写了。例如,Go for it!第九册Unit 15 We are trying to save the manatees! 学完之后,要求学生写一篇环保从我做起的作文。首先让学生以四人一组进行讨论,要求学生把观点写下来。并列出写作提纲以及可能用到的词语、句式、时态等。学生经过讨论后,独立成文。在学生写作的过程中,不断巡视,回答他们的各种问题,并提醒他们注意句与句间的衔接。学生写完后,让两位学生在黑板上板书作文,师生共同修改,然后作为范文,其他同学重写并上交。
5.写日记
鼓励学生大胆运用所学习过的词汇、语法、句型去表达自己想表达的东西。在写作中要一气呵成,有时甚至可用汉字代替没学过的英语词汇。这种写作不受条条框框的约束,能大大提高学生的写作兴趣。
四、进行行之有效的讲、评、改
1.只写不评、不改,学生就会容易失去写作兴趣。但由于学生在书面表达中的错误不尽相同,因而批改时工作量非常大,一次作业的批改常常需要很多时间才能改好。这样就会出现拖延讲评的现象,使训练的效果降低。为了更好地调动和发挥学生的内在潜能,提高发现问题和解决问题的能力,教师可以让学生互批互改。通过互批互改,同学之间可以互相学习,取长补短,遇到自己弄不清、拿不准的问题可以在小组之间商量、讨论,或请教教师,直到得到满意的答复。
2.教师将学生所犯典型错句整理并写在黑板上,让学生找错。这样做,学生参与的积极性大增,对典型错误印象较深。并逐渐掌握一些基本写作技巧:不可逐字翻译,不可用中文思维串联英语词汇,有时还要利用分解、简化、意译等手段来表达。如:当我还是个孩子时,我父母非常喜欢我。“When I was a child, my parents very love me。”(正确表达:When I was a child, my parents loved me very much.) 废寝忘食He wastes sleep and forgets meals when he studies. (正确表达: He forgets to eat and sleep when he studies)。
3.进行范文与较差文章的对比讲评,通过讨论文章结构、句式表达及行文的流畅性等,让学生掌握英语文章的布局谋篇:开始部分说出文章的要点;正文部分围绕主题开展叙述、讨论;结尾部分对全文的总结和概括。避免使用单一句型,注意句式表达的多样性以及正确使用衔接词,使行文流畅通顺。
一、背景知识介绍。
书面表达是写的一种途径,是英语交际的重要组成部分。初中阶段对于英语写作的要求,实际上是“有指导的写作“(Guided Writing)。它通过提供情景(文字、图画、表格),让学生用学过的英语语言来描述事物或事件并表达一定的思想,以此达成和检验对所学英语语言知识的实践应用能力。客观地说,书面表达一直
是我们英语教学的一个难点,也是学生应试的一个难点。
从初中英语教学实际情况来看,英语写作是得分最为薄弱的一个题项。究其原因,一是学生写作练习的时间少,二是教师平时缺乏对学生进行系统的写作知识的指导。(比如,如何用词、句、组段、谋篇等)。这些原因造成了学生从最初不会写盲目写到不愿写。惧怕写,直至最后拒绝写的恶性循环。针对这一现象,我进行了一次如何提高学生写作能力的课堂实践。写作的材料取自于仁爱版英语八年级(上)“Unit 1 ,Topic 1,Section D ,3 Written work”。教师旨在通过与学生谈论他们熟悉的话题“sports”,搜索学生头脑中有关运动的信息,通过阅读本话题,获取有关运动的一些信息,指导学生如何写My Favorite Sport ,从而达到
写作的目的。
二、教学课时:1课时(45分钟)
三、教学方法:写作的方式很多,本课运用其中之一的方式:提问的方式来教学
写作,并用小组合作、讨论形式来完成写作任务。
四、教学目标:总结一般将来时:be going to + do sth.的用法;
培养学生以提问的方式来写作的能力;
谈论自己所喜欢的体育活动、体育明星及自己梦想的职业;
培养学生热爱生活,热爱运动。
五、教学内容:描述和谈论了一些体育运动项目,介绍了自己最喜欢的体育明星及自己梦想的职业。
六、教学重点:培养学生一种写作能力---提问的方式来写作。
七、教学过程:
Step 1.Warm-up活动:通过听一首英语歌:“The more we get together,the happier we’ll be.”
【设计说明】目的是活跃气氛,为引出今天的话题做准备。
Step 2.Revision ①使用头脑风暴法(brainstorm)让学生想出一些和sports 有
关的单词短语和句子。
【设计说明】目的是激活学生头脑中和写作话题运动相关的去酝酿写作的思路,
供拟稿阶段(drafting stage)选择有写的价值和意义的东西时参考。 ②根据下列所给提示介绍你最喜爱的运动(四人一小组活动)。
(1)Name ? (2)What sports ? (3)Why ?
(4)How often ? (5)Player ? (6)looks(外貌)
(7)personality(性格) (8)His / Her dream……
【设计说明】目的是了解一些有关运动的信息,为引出今天的话题写作做准备。
Step 3.Pre-reading
写作的方式很多,本课运用其中之一的方式:提问的方式来教学写作,先设置几个问题,让学生回答,然后将答语运用相关的连词串起来,再在必要的地方添加一些句子。What sports do you like? What’s your favorite sport? Why? How often do you do it? Who is your favorite player? Why do you like him /her?
【设计说明】目的是教会学生一种通过提问方式来写作的技巧。
Step 4.While-reading,读本话题,了解与运动有关的内容,完成表格的要求:
Name What sports Why How often With
whom Looks Personality Dream
【设计说明】也可采用表格的形式列出,使学生思路清晰,目的明确。
Step 5.Post-reading
引导学生讨论:Do you like doing sports ? Why?
当大部分学生都持肯定观点时进一步思索,What’s your favorite sport ? Why? How often do you do it? Who is your favorite player? Why do you like him/her?
【设计说明】通过讨论为下面事实写作埋下伏笔,提供铺垫。
Step 6.While-Writing.
教会学生运用提问的方式来写作的格式,同时提供关于运动、选手和原因的一些
精彩句子,为学生写作提供素材。
【设计说明】培养写作能力,提供写作素材。
Step 7.Post-writing. 提供写作标准
要求学生根据这个标准,修改自己的佳作.
(1)Do you use the tense ,spelling ,punctuation ,Capitalization correctly?
(2)I s your composition complete ?
(3)Is your composition coherently(连贯地)written?
(4)Can you describe it clearly ?
(5)Are there any complex sentences in your composition?
【设计说明】目的是通过自改,有助于他们提高书面表达中的语言准确性,提高
了学生通过自己独立思考,来解决问题的能力。
Step 8.Share the writing.
点评两篇学生习作,选自一位基础较好的同学和一位基础一般的同学的作文。教师根据上述提供的写作标准,详细点评两篇习作的篇章结构和句法功能。 【设计说明】目的是使学生尽力领会教师对文章的点评,培养学生选词和用词的能力,
指导学生多模仿好文章的优点。
八、教学反思:
通过这一系列的活动,充分调动了学生的动手,动口,动脑,以及协同工作能力,让他们得以全身心地投身于老师所安排的各项活动要求中,并能在活动中发现自我,表现自我。从而真正达到了寓教于乐的教学效果。这节课后,绝大部分学生能够通过写作方式之一提问的方式来写作,并能自如地运用be going to + do sth.
句型。
就整节课而言,有两个精彩片段更值得与同行们分享。使用brainstorming培养学生在英语写作中自主学习的能力。1.围绕话题:“ My Favorite Sport ”进行Brainstorming。2.当学生完成careful reading之后,围绕话题:My Favorite Sport
教师通过两个问题进行引导。
①Do you like playing soccer? Why?
②What’s your favorite sport?
当然,任何事物都有两面性。虽然这节课不失为一节成功的英语课,但它也有值得改进的地方。一方面,学生在小组合作过程中有一部分学生不开口,做享其成。这时就要老师进行适当的调整学生,力求做到每个小组中都有优等生、中等生、学困生。另一方面,由于一部分学生的胆怯害羞心理,他们说话比较轻,以至于部分同学听不到或者听不清,从而造成课堂的暂时紊乱。这就要求教师多鼓励学
生,不时的帮助学生克服胆怯害羞心理,大胆开口。
总之,写作是一个由浅入深、由易到难、由简到繁的训练过程,任何一个环节出问题都会影响对学生写作能力的培养,只要我们思想上重视,训练方法得当,经
过初中三年持续有效的训练,定能达成《2011版新课程标准》中的要求,从而为学生进一步学好英语打下扎实的基础,为学生在中考中取得满意的成绩。
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编写教案要依据教学大纲和教科书。从学生实际情况出发,精心设计。下面是我给大家整理的初中英语教学案例范文,供大家参阅!
Language focus:
1.Useful expressions
on Bondi Beach; great fun; fail; need practice; leave for; by the way; on business; so far; travel to. . .Time flies
2. Present Perfect Tense
Properties: Recorder; Overhead Projector; Pictures.
Teaching Procedures:
Ⅰ. Showing aims
Get the students to know what they will learn in this lesson and what they will do in this class:
1. Master some useful expressions
2. Practise the Present perfect Tense
3. Practise speaking English
Ⅱ. Revision
1. Check the homework.
2. Revise the passage "surfing". Ask one or two students to retell the story in front of the class.
3. Revise the Present Perfect Tense. Get the students to make dialogues in pairs, then have some of them act out their dialogues to share with the class. Pay attention to the use of the Present Perfect Tense.
III. Presentation
Speech Cassette. Play the tape for the students to listen and repeat. Then in groups, have the students read and act out the dialogue, ask several pairs to perform the dialogue for the class.
Note: such great fun; Time flies; on business. They may be explained in Chinese.
Explain the difference between "such" and "so" (such + nouns, so + adjectives)
IV. Practice
Part 2. Go through the dialogue with the students. Then get the students to ask and answer in pairs. Remind the difference between "have / has gone to" and "have / has been to"
V. Practice
Each student interviews a student or a teacher by asking the following questions:
What places have you been to in China?
Have you ever been to…?
How many times have you been there?
When did you go there?
How did you go there?
What interesting things did you do there?
Do you want to go there again?
Then ask the students to write a short passage about the interview, get one or two students to read for the class.
VI. Practice
Have the students give their own answers to the questions in the book.
Ask the students to ask and answer in pairs.
VII. Workbook
Do Exercise I with the class. First have the students do it individually, then check with the whole class.
The answers are: have got; Have been; went; gave; Have taken; took; be; has gone
Do Exercise 3 with the whole class. And get the students to learn the sentences.
VIII. Summary
Exercises for class
Translate the following sciences into Chinese.
1. 他在哪儿?他已经去了北京。
2. 他去过北京几次?
3. 不管他说什么,我都不会相信。
4. 你刚才做家庭作业了吗?还没有。
5. 他已经到美国去旅游了。
6. 不管你走到哪儿,我都会记得你。
IX. Homework
Finish off the exercises in the workbook.
Language Focus:
Useful expressions:
a 12 - year - old schoolboy; try to; cross; channel; fail; set off; slow down; go on swimming, a big crowd of; wait for; be proud of; speak highly to.
Properties:
Recorder; Overhead Projector; Pictures
Teaching procedures:
I. showing aims
Get the students to know what they will learn in this lesson and what they will do in this class:
1. To master some useful expressions.
2. To revise all the contents of Unit 2.
3. To go through Checkpoint 2.
4. To train their listening ability.
5. To train their writing ability.
II. Revision
1. Revise "have / has been to" and "have / has gone to". Ask: Where is he? Get some of the students' answers with: He has gone to. . .
S1: He has gone to the office.
S2: He has gone to the hospital. .
S3: He has gone to Beijing.
Then ask: How many times have you been to Beijing?
S1: I've never been there.
S2: I've been there twice.
S3: I've been there three times.
Make sure the students can ask and answer correctly.
2. Revise the sports words. Divide the class into four groups and have a competition, say out the words as quickly as possible. See which group can say the most quickly and say the most words.
III. Listen
Listening Casette. Play the tape twice for the students to listen and do Exercise I in the workbook. Then play the tape again, and check the answers with the class.
IV. Word Puzzle
Ask the students to find the words in groups of the four. Get one student to share his or her answer with the whole class and check with them. The answers are: skiing; swimming; skating; boat-racing; diving.
V. Presentation
Part 3. Speech Cassette. Play the tape twice for the students to listen and repeat. Then ask the students to read the passage by themselves. Try to find the answers to the following questions:
1. Who was the youngest swimmer to cross channel?
2. Which channel did he cross first?
3. When did he first cross the channel?
4. Where was the channel?
5. Why did he slow down?
6. How many hours did it take him to cross the channel?
7. Did he cross the channel alone?
8. How did his parents feel when he arrived the beach?
Note some useful expressions on the blackboard: a-12-year-old schoolboy; cross the Qiongzhou Channel; fail; his dream came true; step into; slow down; go on swimming; another; a big crowd of people; be proud of; not only … but also … ; Have the students retell the story.
VI .Writing
Get one student to act as Li Lida and the other students act as journalists. Make an interview, then write down a passage about the interview. The journalists can ask questions like:
1. Do you like swimming?
2. When did you swim?
3. Do you often swim?
4. Were you afraid while you were crossing the channel?
5. Do your parents like you to swim?
6. How do you like when your dream comes true?
VII. A poem
Speech Cassette. Get the students to read the poem after the tape and help the students understand the poem. Ask them to learn the poem by heart.
VIII. Checkpoint 2
Go through Checkpoint 2 in the usual way. Explain any problems that the students may have. Get the students to go over the grammar notes.
IX. Workbook
Do Exercise 3 in class, and check the answers in pairs. The answers are: E; A; D; C; B
Do Exercise 4 individually and practise the dialogue in pairs.
Work on Exercise 5 as homework.
X. Summary
Exercise in class
Fill in the blanks with "so" and "such"
1. He was ________ tired that he can't climb the hill.
2. She is __________ a kind girl that everyone likes her.
3. The classroom is ___________ beautiful.
4. There is ___________ a clever monkey in the tree.
5. My mother is - busy, she can't go with you.
6. There are __________ many books here, I like them very much.
7.I have ___________ an honest daughter. I like her very much.
8. The flowers are __________ beautiful, don't pick them.
Answers: 1. so 2. such 3. so 4. such 5. so 6. so 7. such 8. so
XI. Homework
Finish off the exercises in the workbook.
教学目标
教学目标与要点
1.能够运用过去时态来谈论过去的经历和运用现在完成时来谈论由过去开始,与现在相联系或有影响的经历。
2.学习和归纳有关环境和污染方面词汇,且能够正确运用它们来描述所见所闻。
3.进一步学习现在完成时态,特别是它的时间状语的表达法:for…或since…
4.归纳总结哪些动词是延续性动词,哪些是非延续性动词,以及它们之间的转换。特别是与一段时间连用时只能使用延续性动词。
5.培养自己的环境意识,养成良好的行为举止,能运用所学知识来报道周边的环境问题。
素质教育目标
1. 完成本单元语法现在完成时的学习,注意for与since的用法。
2. 熟练掌握本单元相关词组和短语的用法。
3. 引导学生了解优美的环境对人类健康的重要性,以养成宣传及保护我们生活、工作、学习环境的良好习惯。
4. 通过学习本单元,能使学生理解过去时与完成时,并能灵活运用相关知识。
5. 通过各种教学手段,如声音、图片、动画、电视、网络等,让学生在了解环境保护知识的基础上,提高表述、思考、总结相关此类知识的能力。
6. 引导学生尝试运用不同的学习工具、学习方法、媒体素材等进行学习和提高。
Language Focus:
1. some useful expressions:
waste water; Greener China; Good idea; be afraid; a member of; a book on the environment
2. some useful sentences:
How long have you been a member of Greener China?
I've been with Greener China for a year.
How many English words have you learned since you came here?
About one thousand.
Properties: Pictures:TV; Overhead Projector; Recorder
Teaching Procedures:
I. Showing amis
Get the students to know what they will learn in this lesson and what they will do in this class:
1. To master some useful expressions.
2. To learn the grammar: the Present Perfect Tense.
3. To make the similar dialogues freely.
4. To know that they should protect the environment and make our world more beautiful.
II . Revision
Revise the grammar; the Present Perfect Tense. Ask: Have you ever been to the Great Wall? How many times have you been there? Get the students to ask and answer in pairs. Then ask several pairs to act out their dialogues.
III. Presentation
Present this dialogue:
A: Where have you been?
B: I've been to a paper factory.
A: What did you do there?
B: I saw the worker making paper there.
Present this dialogue with one student as an example, then ask the students to practise this dialogue in pairs, and get some of them to act out the dialogue.
IV. Practice
Put up a picture of a paper factory on the blackboard, get the students to talk about the factory, for example; " This is a paper factory, it makes paper, but it also makes smoke and waste water. I found the smoke was put into the air and the waste water was put into the river near it. The river has become very dirty. Lots of fish have died." Have the students talk in groups of four and then ask some of them to read out their report to share with the whole class.
V. Read and say
Part 1. Speech Cassette. Play the tape twice for the students to listen and repeat. Ask the students to read the dialogue in groups of three. Then read for the class. Get the students to read the dialogue individually again and find the answer to the following questions:
1. Where has Hu Lan just been to?
2. Why has the river near the factory become dirty?
3. What has happened to the fish in the river?
4. What does Greener China want to do?
5. Why are they going to write to the TV station and the newspaper?
6. Do you take care of the environment? Why or why not?
7. What can you do to improve the environment?
VI. Ask and answer
Read through the dialogues with the students. Ask and answer in pairs. Then make similar dialogues in pairs using the phrases in the box of the book.
VII. Write
Get the students to act as journalists, make an interview. Interview one of their friends. Ask him or her some questions about him or her and his or her family members.
For example: How long have you been in this school?
What subject have you studied?
How many friends have you made?
What's your fathers job?
How long has he been a … ?
What has he done since … ?
Then get the students write a report, have some students read their reports to share with the whole class.
VIII. Workbook
Do Exercise 3 orally with the class. Have the students ask and answer in pairs. Write Exercise 2 in the exercise books.
IX. Summary
Exercises for class
Rewrite the following sentences using the Present Perfect Tense:
Model: He went to Nanjing two days ago.
He has been in Nanjing for two days.
1. They began to study English in 2000.
2. He became a teacher ten years ago.
3. Jim came to China one year ago.
4. He joined Greener China one year ago.
5. My sister bought this book last week.
X. Homework
Talk something about the environment.
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