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Welcome (to)come to Putian . Putian is in the center of Fujian province, which is a beautiful city having over three million people .I have heard from Sam that its population is bigger than Dallas' in the US. However, Putian just could be called a small city (of) China , since there are many cities bigger than it. Similarly to any other cities in China , Putian is having more and more big and modern buildings. Besides ,it has many natural and cultural sceneries. Allow me to show you .Firstly for every new one, he or she shouldnot miss to visit Meizhou island. Meizhou island is the sea goddess Mazu`s hometown. So there are many beautiful temples for Mazu. This is a statue of Mazu, it is 14 matters tall . And this is an endless expense of golden beaches. Last term all of my classmates went there . We chased each other on the beach and we played with water in the sea. We had a good time .

改change; transform; revise; alter

楼主你写的好Chinglish哦。偶帮你全修改过了，希望能帮助你。Welcome to Putian. It is located at the center of the Fujian province which is a beautiful city with over three million people.I have heard from Sam that its population is more than the Dallas` in US. However, Putian can only be called a small city in China because there are many cities which are much bigger than it. Putian is similar to any other cities in China because more and more large modern buildings are being built. Also,it has many natural and cultural sceneries. Firstly, all the newcomers should visit the Meizhou island which is the hometown of the sea goddess Mazu. There are also many beautiful temples for Mazu. This is the statue of Mazu and it is 14 matters tall. That is an endless expense of golden beaches. Last term, all of our classmates went there. We chased each other on the beach and played with the seawater. We had a good time .

modify

change 英[tʃeɪndʒ] 美[tʃendʒ] vt. 改变，变更; 交换，替换; 兑换; 换衣服（床单）; vi. 改变，转变; 交换，互换; 换衣，更衣; n. 变化，改变; 交换，交替; 零钱，找头; 代替物; [例句]The ambassador appealed for a change in US policy大使呼吁美国在政策上作出改变。

to alter; to change; to modifyalteration; changes; modification

用modify就可以了！

你写的好Chinglish哦。我帮你全修改过了，希望能帮助你。

Welcome to Putian. It is located at the center of the Fujian province which is a beautiful city with over three million people。

I have heard from Sam that its population is more than the Dallas` in US. However, Putian can only be called a small city in China because there are many cities which are much bigger than it。

Putian is similar to any other cities in China because more and more large modern buildings are being built. Also,it has many natural and cultural sceneries。

Firstly, all the newcomers should visit the Meizhou island which is the hometown of the sea goddess Mazu. There are also many beautiful temples for Mazu. This is the statue of Mazu and it is 14 matters tall。

That is an endless expense of golden beaches. Last term, all of our classmates went there. We chased each other on the beach and played with the seawater. We had a good time。

中古英语

从8世纪到12世纪，古英语通过语言接触逐渐转变为中古英语。中古英语往往是随意定义为开始英格兰的征服由法国诺曼公爵征服者威廉在1067年，但它从1210-1550期间进一步发展。

首先，在第8和第9世纪英伦三岛北部地区的北欧殖民的浪潮把古英语与激烈的接触古斯堪的纳维亚语，一个北日耳曼语言。在约克的丹尼劳地区讲的东北古英语中，北欧的影响最大。时至今日，这些功能在苏格兰语和北英语中仍然尤为突出。

然而，标准化英语的中心似乎在林赛附近的中部地区，以及在公元920年林赛（Lindsey）重新并入盎格鲁-撒克逊政体后，北欧语的功能便从那里传播到了英语版本中，而这些语言并未与北欧语者直接接触。如今，在所有英语变种中，挪威语影响力一直存在的要素是以th-（他们，他们，他们的）开头的代词组，这些代词以h-（即他，他，hera）代替了盎格鲁-撒克逊人代词。

不知道楼主说的更改是动词还是名词，动词有：1.alter vt.改变Has she altered her mind?她改变主意了吗?修改The tailor altered the jacket to fit me.裁缝将夹克修改得合我的身。【俚】阉割,去势vi.改变,变样The city has altered almost out of recognition since I left there five years ago.自从五年前我离开以后,那座城市已变得几乎认不出了。2.change vt.(使)改变;更改;使变化[(+from...to...)][(+into)]On second thoughts he changed his mind.进一步考虑后,他改变了主意。换;交换,互换[(+for)]We changed seats in the interval.中间休息时,我们交换了一下座位。换(衣服);替(婴孩)换尿布或衣服;给(床)换床单She changed the baby often.她不时地给婴孩换尿布。兑换(钱)[(+for/into)]Let me change the dollar bill for coins.让我把这张美元的纸钞换成硬币。换乘(车等)You'll have to change planes at Seattle.你得在西雅图换乘另一架飞机。vi.改变;更改;变化[(+from...to...)]In fall the leaves change from green to brown.秋天,树叶由绿变成褐色。更衣[(+out of/into)]He changed into a new suit.他换上一套新的西装。换车In New York, you'll change for Boston.你在纽约换车去波士顿。换档[(+up/down/into/to)]n.变化;变更;变迁[C][U][(+of/in)]Many changes have taken place since then.自那以来,发生了许多变化。改变一下[S1]I think a change might do you good.我想换换环境也许对你有好处。更换;替换[C][(+in/of)]零钱;找零[U]"Here's your change," said the saleswoman."这是你的找零,"女店员说道。【口】绝经(期);更年期[the S]3.modify vt.更改,修改We have to modify our plan a little bit.我们得对我们的计划稍加修改。缓和,减轻He has modified his demands.他已降低了他的要求。【语】修饰A noun sometimes modifies another noun.一个名词有时候修饰另一个名词。上面3个动词对应的名词为：alteration; changes; modification希望能帮到你，呵呵 ^_^