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商务英语写作范文5篇

商务英语专业方向主要培养具有扎实的英语语言基础和较系统的国际商务管理理论知识,具有较强的.实践技能,能在外贸、外事、文化、新闻出版、教育、科研、旅游等部门从事翻译、管理、教学、研究工作的英语高级专门人才。写作是上午英语考试中的重要部分,掌握一定的技巧才能取得高分, 下面我为大家整理了商务英语写作的范文,供大家参考!

范文1

Dear

Thank you for yourorder. At this time we cannot fill your order due to an unexpectedshipment delay from our overseas suppliers.

We will hold yourorder for arrival of the merchandise, and ship shortly thereafter. Unfortunately, we cannot provide you with a specific shipping date at this time.

Thank you for youranticipated patience in this matter.

范文2

Dear

Because Mr. Jones isout of the office for the next two weeks I am acknowledging receipt of yourletter dated May 20, l983. Itwill be brought to his attention immediately upon his return.

If I may be of anyassistance during Mr. Jones' absence,please do not hesitate to call

范文3

Dear

The [product name and model number] that you mailedto us for repair was received on [date] We will bereturning it to you as soon as the necessary adjustments are made.

We are sorry that youexperienced a problem with our product and want to thank you for purchasing a[name of product]

范文4

Dear

This is to inform youthat we have carefully reviewed your estimate on the parking lotrefurbishing. We are planning to contract with you for this work.

We are unable to letthis contract immediately, as finalapproval of expenditures of this nature must come from the head office in NewYork.

Dear

We have received yourletter acknowledging receipt of the items we mailed to you and noticing us tocancel shipment of your order for those items which are back ordered.

We will be issuing youa refund as soon as we have completed the necessary paperwork for your account.

We would like to takethis opportunity to thank you for shopping through [name] Our new [specify] catalogshould be arriving at your home shortly, and I believe you will be pleased by some of the beautiful choicesour buyers have made this season.

Thank you for yourpatience and understanding and for providing us with the opportunity to be ofservice to you.

范文5

Dear

Thank you for yourkind letter regarding your exceptional treatment by one of our employees. A copy of your letter has been forwarded to the personnel department and willbe included in the employee's file.

So seldom is it that acustomer takes the time to write a letter of appreciation, that I feel moved to reward your initiative.

Please accept theenclosed certificate, which, when presented, will entitlethe bearer to a ten percent discount on the merchandise being purchased at thattime.

This is but a smalltoken of our appreciation of customers such as you, upon whose satisfaction we have been allowed to grow and prosper inthis highly competitive marketplace.

Again, on behalf of our entire organization, a heart-felt thank you.

商务英语沟通写作

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伊斯坦布尔之夜

1.用现代商务语言去替代过时或陈旧的表达商务邮件的目的在于传达信息或者说服对方,而不是参加作文竞赛评选,一定要让对方赞叹你的写作水平不可。为了达到沟通的目的,商务写作做到简洁自然,不说空话套话,用现代商务语言去替换过时或陈旧的表达。2.使用自然、口语化的方式写作商务邮件虽然是书面体,但它与一般的书面体(比如学术论文)不同。现代商务邮件写作提倡语言自然、流畅,就像面对面的口语交谈一样。我们可以在写作中融入一些自己的想法、个性和情感,让读者感觉到作者是一个活生生的人,而不是一台毫无感情的公文机器。3.使用主动语态一般情况下,在商务邮件中使用被动语态会显得语气生硬、官腔官调,使用主动语态则会更加有趣有力。4.多使用动词而不是名词动词名词化(例如将avoid写成the avoidance of)会拉长句子,而且会使写出来的句子不够生动,缺少人情味。我们在写作时要尽量使用动词而不是名词。希望能帮助到你,望采纳!

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