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无论是在学校还是在社会中,大家总免不了要接触或使用作文吧,借助作文人们可以实现文化交流的目的。那么你知道一篇好的作文该怎么写吗?下面是我为大家整理的英语话题作文9篇,仅供参考,欢迎大家阅读。

定句型,连词成句

这个环节是成文的关键,一定要注意做到:

(1)选用比较有把握的词汇,用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。在熟悉的基础上,鼓励多用高级词汇和结构复杂的复杂句。如表达“为了……”时,可用inorder to do 或 so as todo.也可用sothat引导目的状语从句。

(2)写出的句子要达意,完整,语法正确,合乎习惯,特别是句式、谓语动词形式要有根有据。

(3)表达限定的内容有困难时,就要想到“AllroadsleadtoRome.”这句话,用变通的方法,以达到“曲径通幽”。如要译“他表哥外强中干”这样一句话,表达起来似乎很难,但我们完全可以通过学过的东西将这句话明白贴切地表达出来:Hiscousinlooks strong but in fact,he is rather weak.

(4)尽量避免使用汉语式的英语。例如要表达“她睡得很迟”,不可写成:Shesleptvery late.应该写成:Shewent tobed verylate.因为“sleeplate”表示“睡懒觉”。又如要表达“他一点都不担心他的英语”,不可写成:Heisnot a little worried abouthisEnglish.实际上意思完全相反,表达成“他非常担心他的英语”了。应该是:Heisnot a bit worried about his English. 或:He isnotworried about his English at all.

连词成句,添减相宜

单句写出后,根据短文的内容要求,确定先写什么,后写什么,按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要,重新排列组合已写成的句子,划分必要的段落,一般分成三段。

即:文章的开头(Introduction)、文章的主体(Mainbody)和文章的结尾(Conclusion).这样写成文章的初稿。在连词成句的过程中,还要注意以下几点:

(1)句子或段落间的连接不仅仅是个语言问题,也是个逻辑思维方面的问题,这两者是不能分开的。能注意到这一点,你的文章就能达到条理清楚、层次分明的境界。

(2)为了使句子或段落语义连贯,表达合理准确,可以适当加入一些连接词语。如表达转折可用but,however,otherwise等,表达递进可用and,also,besides,Whatsmore等,表达因果so,therefore,asaresult等,表达对比可用atthesametime,meanwhile,while等,表达让步可用though,although,evenif等。有时还需要加入一些必要的过渡句子以达到承上启下的效果。

(3)仔细推敲在文章的哪些地方可用复杂句。切忌生搬硬套,给人一种为了用复杂句而用复杂句的感觉。要用得自然、得体。要顺应行文的需要,与整个文章浑然一体。

尽量使用我们熟悉的宾语从句、状语从句和定语从句。

检查,修改,定稿,誊写

检查修改是进一步减少疏漏提高质量的最后程序,这时要对照题目要求,认真检查以下几点:

(1)内容有无遗漏或误词,最好一一对应检查。

(2)体裁格式对不对。

(3)句子是否有语法结构错误,特别要检查句子中的冠词、代词、名词复数、动词的时态、语态、主谓一致等方面是否有错误。

(4)句子是否合乎英语表达习惯,是否达意。

(5)书写字迹和标点符号是否规范清晰,词数是否基本上符合要求。经过认真修改润色的短文,即可认真工整地誊写在指定的卷面上。抄好后再速读一遍,力求完美。

经典题例

下面以扬中树人今年3月中考一模试卷的作文为例,谈谈写中考英语作文的具体步骤和应注意的事项。

原题介绍

目前,扬州正在创建(create)全国文明城市(NationalCivilizationCity)。作为一个中学生,我们在学校、在家里、在公共场合等等应该做到哪些才能称得上是一个文明的(civilized)人呢?我们又如何为这个活动作贡献(makecontributionto)呢?请你就此写一篇100字左右的短文。

Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Helping Others in Need. You should write at least 120 words and base you composition in the outline below:

1. 现在,在看到他人遇到困难时,很少有人去伸出援手;

2. 这个现象产生的原因;

3. 我的看法。

A recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years. It’s shocking that 92.5 percent of us are nearsighted now, compared to 78.20% in 20xx, which was already worrying. The same is true for students’ sleeping condition. Nine students out of ten suffer from a lack of sleep at present.

There’re another two facts that shouldn’t be ignored. Two years ago, about one third of the students were in the trouble of overweight, and less than one third of them had problems in mental health. However, both numbers have risen to 50% or so within the past two years.

In view of the serious health condition, immediate steps should be taken before it’s too late. To begin with, the amount of homework should be properly controlled. Moreover, school should provide students with necessary knowledge on health and satisfy their needs for recreation. It is equally important that students should get rid of their unhealthy habits, become more efficient in their study and lead a healthy life.

Today is the lunar December eighth day - the laba festival. The laba festival in China has a long tradition and history, on this day drink the laba laba rice porridge, do is the most traditional people all over the country, is also the most pay attention to the customs.

At night, dad with red jujube, lotus seeds, beans, peanuts, black beans, wheat berry, lily, eight kinds of material such as rice stayed up the whole pot of delicious rice porridge.

Mom put porridge is good, in the table. I use the spoon gently drew a few times in a bowl, good let it cool faster. Then, scoop a spoonful of their mouth. Porridge boil rotten rotten, quickly melted in your mouth. I said to my father: "dad, you can endure to laba rice porridge is really nice." The father said, "you drink a bowl of laba porridge, you will happy auspicious." Listen to father said these words, I feel very warm and happiness.

myfamilyI love my family, because I have a happy family.

My father is an English teacher. His name is Jacky. He is thirty-eight. He likes playing basketball. What’s my mother jobIs she a teacherYes, you’re right! My mother is very kind and nice, she is thirty-seven. My mother is always laborious work. I love my parents!

On Saturday and Sunday, I often go to the library and play the piano, My father go to play basketball. Sometimes, we watch TV and listen to music at home.

I love my family. Because I’m very happy to live with my parents together!

以"My Chinese Teacher"为标题写一篇字数为80-100之间的英语短文。提示内容如下:

1.孙老师今年36岁,中等身材。

2.她关心。热爱学生,工作认真负责。

3.她语文课讲得生动。有趣。

参考范文:

My Chinese Teacher

Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher,Ms Sun. Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.

Ms Sun is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.She works very hard. She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office. She tries to make her classes lively and interesting. And we enjoy her lessons very much.

Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us. And we're getting on well with each other. But she is very strict with us in our studies.Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese. All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.

询问学习外语的建议

假设你叫李华,你的英国笔友Linda为了来中国参观奥运会而报名参加了汉语培训班学习汉语。她最近写信向你询问学习外语的建议。请根据下列提示和你学习英语的体会给Linda写一封回信。

注意:

1.回信需要包括全部要点;

2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;

3.字数60左右。

Dear Linda,

I'm very glad that you'll come to China to watch the Olympic Games. I know it isn't easy to learn a foreign language,but I have some ideas that may help.

___________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in China.

Yours,

Li Hua

参考范文:

Dear Linda,

I'm very glad that you'll come toChinato watch the Olympic Games. I know it isn't easy to learn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help.

Firstly, it's very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later. Secondly, try to catch every chance to practice speaking, both in and out of class. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. Then try to listen and read more in Chinese. What's more,you'd better plan your time well and study it regularly every day.

Above all, you should be confident in yourself and don't give up whenever you meet with difficulty. I'm sure you will succeed through your hard work.

Best wishes and looking forward to meeting you inChina.

Yours,

Li Hua

The Ways for Students to Relax:适当方式放松自己

中学生学习时间长、压力大,专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。你代表班级在一次 "The Ways for Students to Relax"的学校座谈中与二(1)班的Terry讨论了这一话题,请根据他的观点和你自己的观点,用英语给你的外籍教师Mr. Griffin写一篇有关这次讨论的汇报材料。

His ideas & Your ideas

1. Watching TV …

2. Playing computer games …

3. Hanging out with friends …

注意:

1. 开头和结尾已经写好;

2. 可以适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的话语,使内容连贯

3. 所写内容必须包括上面表格中他的`观点和你自己至少三个观点

4. 词数:70字左右。

Mr. Griffin,

Recently I have had a discussion about The Ways for Students to Relax with Terry, a student from Class One Grade Two.

__________________________________________________________

Yours,

Terry

参考范文:

Mr. Griffin,

Recently I have had a discussion about The Ways for Students to Relax with Terry, a student from Class One Grade Two.

As we study too long every day, every student should choose ways to relax. In his opinion, the best ways are watching TV and playing computer games. He also believes that sometimes hanging out with friends isn't a bad way.

However, I'm not quite agree with him. In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a good way to help us relax. I think listening to music and playing sports are good ways because they can help us keep healthy. I often play Pingpong after class and I find it really helpful to both my health and my study. Besides, I think chatting with our friends isn't a bad way. I think it can help me get on better with my friends.

That's all and best wishes for you!

Yours,

Terry

Ellen看到大家都对自己的未来充满期待,感到特别高兴。为了鼓励大家学好英语,他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请 根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况,以"My English Learning"为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件,要求至少涉及其中的三个问题,并且不能出现你的真实姓名和校名等。

提示:

When did you start learning English(in … /…years ago)

How do you learn English(listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day…)

What is difficult to learn(listening, grammar…)

What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well(watch English movies, sing English songs…)

参考范文:

English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old.

But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes and watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot.

In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries.

I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.

对作弊现象的建议

目前,学生考试作弊现象严重,请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议。 原因:1.考试太多太难 2.自身勤奋不够 3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上 4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴

看法与建议:1、作弊有害;2、要做人诚实,学习发奋;3、学校应减少考试。 要求:1、字数80-100;2、围绕要点可适当发挥;3、文章开头已给出,不计入总字数。

At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit--cheating in examinations.

参考范文:

At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit - cheating in examinations.

There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not

hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.

In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.

My home village is a small one. It’s in Yuxian county of Shanxi Province. Small as it is, it’s very beautiful.

There are many hills around my home village and they are more beautiful than some big mountains. In spring, we can fly kites which are made by ourselves on the top of the hills. The kites fly very high.In summer, the trees are green and the grass is green, too. It is green everywhere on the hills. There are so many wild apple trees on the hills. The wild apples are nice to eat. In autumn, the corns under and around the hills are ripe. So we eat them almost every day. In winter, when it snows, all the ground is covered with snow. We can play with snow and sometimes we eat the clean snow with sugar. In my hometown the sky is blue, the air is clean, the water is sweet and the people are very friendly. I love my hometown!

我的家乡是位于山西盂县的一个小村庄。它虽然小但非常美丽。

家乡被群山环绕,这些小山甚至比大山川还要美丽。春日里,我们在山巅放飞自制的风筝;夏天里,漫山遍野是长得绿油油的草木,各种野果美味诱人;秋日里,山下和山周围的玉米熟了,我们几乎天天能尝到新鲜的玉米;冬日里,雪花飘飘,大地银妆素裹,我们玩雪,有时还就着糖吃几口干净的白雪。我的家乡天空蔚蓝,空气清新,水儿甜美,人们好客。我爱我的家乡。

Which is more important, wealth or health? Different people have different opinions.

Some people prefer wealth, holding that money can not bring everything, but without it, one can do nothing. In order to accumulate more money they can do anything. However, other people regard health as more important. Once health is lost, it is no use having a lot of money.

As far as I am concerned, I love wealth, but I value health more. Everybody wants to live a happy life. So they try their best to earn money which can ensure they lead a comfortable life, but if happiness and comfort are achieved at the cost of their health, how can they be happy? Without health money becomes meaningless.

In my opinion, no one agrees that a wealthy person without good health can be happy. So, just do our best to keep healthy.

Today is a special day for me. I graduate from middle school. Yesterday, I attended the high school entrance exam and I think I did very well in the exam. I am sure I can be admitted by the best senior school in my city. This morning, a big graduation ceremony is held in my school. All graduates and our teachers attend to it.

Our president makes a speech in the ceremony, wishing us a good future and hoping us to come back school often. After the ceremony, we go back to our classroom to spend the last time together. We are reluctant to each other. I hope we can keep our relationship forever.

Do you like watching TV during the summer vacation? Why?

Which place do you like to travel most? Why?

How do you spend your summer holidays? Can you say something about your school life?

What birthday present will you give to the members of your family? Why?

What’s your favourite TV programme?

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在平平淡淡的日常中,大家都不可避免地要接触到作文吧,作文可分为小学作文、中学作文、大学作文(论文)。那么一般作文是怎么写的呢?下面是我为大家整理的英语话题作文6篇,仅供参考,希望能够帮助到大家。

Only in the baby from crying wah—wah, that we invoke the first words whispered parents learn to walk the first time to walk small foot staggering along。 The first time carrying a bag to school, the first test scores back, the first from their parents 。。。 。。。 maybe you've never noted this many times in the first, in the growth of this long road to the parents how much to pay into the How much love。 Every time you smile, every success, and even failed every time, every mistake in the minds of parents will never forget, to accompany you around, give you the support of silence 。。。 。。。

We come from? To hear this issue, I am sure you will say that parents bring us up in the world。 Yes ah, the day thirteen years ago, our parents with tears, smiles and happiness to greet our arrival。 We came to the world from the moment that many parents have a heavy work — to take care of us。 Although this is a heavy burden, but the baby's "Wah—Wah" bring to the nursery, we grow up, parents spend much of the effort and sweat, how many days and nights weaving, parents have no complaints。

Small, I always love their parents as a matter of course, because I do not understand the hard work their parents do not know。 Now, I grew up, and I know with a heart of Thanksgiving to appreciate their parents, should take care, the responsibility of your parents。

But how many people is to give top priority to the parents then? Some people always complain about their parents to do Oh, no, that does not, the behavior of parents and practices of selectivity, to accuse, or even directly contradict with their parents! Some people do not know their own physical health status of parents, parents do not remember their birthday, and some even their own parents in the work units which do not know, to think of it, parents pay so much for our energy and efforts ah!

When we are confronted with difficulties, to devote all of the people to help us parents。

When we are wronged, to be patient to listen to our cry of the people, are the parents。

When we make mistakes, we can not hesitate to forgive us, and parents。

When we succeed, would like for us to celebrate, to share with us the joy of the parents。

Now we are far in the field study, we remain concerned about their parents。

Life is not imagined as the perfect parents for their hard that we can not understand, although we can not live with their parents to share the hardships of a difficult start, but we can be less in their daily lives for their parents to worry about。 When parents fall ill, we should be taking responsibility, taking care of their parents? To know that even if an interest in words, even a good hot bowl of instant noodles themselves, their parents, who will comfort the hearts of our anxiety in every possible way。

Thanksgiving heart of life is better, life is like a piece of white paper, with the heart of Thanksgiving, this paper will be pink。 Thanksgiving embrace of life, the background paper is also pink, and will have a better life。

If today is my last day of life, we are the first thing to do is to return education to take care of me my parents! "The water—en, when the springs of newspaper。" Parents not to mention the efforts we have not just "drop", but a vast ocean。

Thanksgiving, although it is an act of the verb, but it needs more action, more importantly, needs to be done in good faith。 To put it simply, Thanksgiving is gratitude, gratitude from the heart。

Without friends, life is not worth living. But what kind of person can be accepted as friend? Lots of people are classmates and aren't friends. Lots of people are lovers but aren't friends. You can appreciate or admire someone, but that doesn't make them a friend. If their attitude is "for better or worse," if they stick with you through thick and thin, that's when you can tell it's friendship. 注意:1、120字数左右。2、不要过多引用上述提示。

The term, friend, covers a wide range of meanings. It can be a nodding acquaintance, a comrade, a partner, a playmate, a brother, etc. As life is full of obstacles and conflicts, we need friends to give us supports to get through tough times, we also need friends to give us warnings to go against danger. True friends share not only joy but, more often than not, they share sorrow and difficulties.

With friendship, life is happy and harmonious. Without friendship, life is hostile and unfortunate. I have friends in the rank and file. Some are rich and in power. Some are low and common. Some are like myself, working as an ordinary teacher, reading and writing and content with the simple life. To many of my friends, I know what to treasure, what to tolerate and what to share, I will never forget my old friends and keep making new friends. I will not be cold and indifferent to the poor friends and will show concern for them, even if it is only a comforting word.

Everyone knows that April 5th is the Qingming Festival. Yes, today is the Qingming Festival.

My grandfather and I went to the ground first to granny, and grandpa granny swept the grave. We put on the tomb of grass pulled out, pulled out in the tomb planted on several willow and then burned paper money tender. After that, Grandpa asked my grandfather to knock three heads. I wonder, "why do you have to knock three heads?" Grandpa couldn't answer it, and said, "go back and look up the computer by yourself!"

Back when we eat some cold food. I do not understand to ask: "why Qingming to eat cold food? "Grandma told me about the origin of the cold food:" spring and Autumn period, Jin has trouble Xian Chen Jie called, when the monarch after jinwengong in secluded, in a day before Qingming, jinwengong sent to forced meson launch Hill set the mountain on fire, an official, Jie want to be burned down the official results. In the mountains, jinwengong regret, so in second days (Qingming) ordered a national ban on fireworks, only eat cold, after every year, they formed a folk custom of eating cold food in Tomb-sweeping Day." I can't help but wonder, "there was a story like that!"

It's a lot to harvest today.

写作教学一直是高中英语课堂教学中较为棘手的问题。本文以一次主题写作活动教学环节为例探讨英语主题写作活动与学生运用单元目标语言的能力之间的关系,以下是“英语话题作文教学设计”希望能够帮助的到您!

一、研究背景

我国中学英语写作教学一直是令师生感到头痛的问题。尽管教师和学生在写作方面做了很多努力,但英语写作仍然属于薄弱环节。究其原因,一是教材编排问题。在现行的教材中,写仍然体现为巩固听、说、读的手段,没有作为知识在教材中系统阐述。实际上写作不仅是巩固和强化知识和技能的手段,其本身还具有知识体系属性。而这种知识体系在教材设计中没有得到重视,使得写作总是处于边缘化状态。二是不少教师对写作训练的认识存在误区,认为写作训练仅是一种巩固与练习的手段。绝大多数教师认为英语写作教学“高耗低效”,对短期快速提升学生的英语学习成绩贡献不大,觉得英语写作教学可有可无,对此不够重视。教师的教学思想和行为无形当中会影响学生对英语写作的态度、观念和评价,致使学生普遍对英语写作缺乏热情、信心和积极性。三是写作知识学习和技能训练缺乏有效的教学策略和模式)。大多数教师的教学模式是:教师布置写作任务――学生课外独立完成――教师独自批改――教师念范文――学生背范文。教师对学生习作的反馈往往只是一个分数,有时也画出学生的语言错误,但大多数学生只关心分数的高低,对教师的反馈往往看一眼就塞到书包里去了,类似甚至同样的错误在以后的写作中依旧出现。

二、主题写作活动的定义及概述

主题写作活动是以一定的话题为中心,以单元目标语言为依托,围绕单元目标词汇和语言结构展开的话题性写作活动。在课堂教学实践中,主题写作活动是以拓展单元目标语言为出发点,以培养学生的英语写作能力为重点,以提高学生的英语写作能力为重点,以提高学生的综合语言运用能力为目的的写作活动。

主题写作活动是检验学生是否理解和内化单元目标语言知识的重要而有效的途径之一,也是实现语言交际和语言运用的途径之一。主题写作不仅是基础性的更是能力性的,要求学生对单元目标语言进行再理解、内化、提取和综合,最终转化为综合语言运用能力。在这个过程中,教师要给予方法指导,帮助学生再次理解、巩固单元基础语言结构,全面提升语言运用能力。

三、主题写作活动的意义

确立正确的英语写作教学观念,改变中学英语写作教学的薄弱状况,是主题写作活动的意义所在。在高中英语写作教学中,发展学生的主题写作能力,有利于培养学生思维的广阔性、深刻性和创造性,全面提高学生的综合语言运用能力,为学生的终身学习和全面发展奠定基础。教师要从教学实际出发,寻找方法和突破口,改进写作教学的方法和技巧。教师要善于对课程资源进行挖掘,以顺应不断更新的课程要求,让主题写作成为巩固和促进基础语言学习、提升学生写作能力的有效途径。

(一) 确立正确的英语写作教学观念

英语写作具有动作技能和智力因素相融合的学习认知属性(Reid, 1993)。学生的英语写作能力必须有写作知识的指导,让学生知道如何写,并在写作过程中将知识转化为能力。许多教师认为,只要学生动笔写作就能提高写作水平,因此一味地要求学生练习写作,但又不教给学生写作知识。学生经过一段时间的努力写作能力仍没有明显提高时,往往会失去写作兴趣。还有些教师认为,学生语法学好了,词汇量大了,阅读面广了,写作水平就会提高,因此在英语教学中花在写作知识学习和训练上的时间远不如听说和阅读的训练多。这些是误导英语写作教学的错误观念。英语写作是动作技能和智力因素相融合的学习结果,在教学实践中二者不可偏颇。

(二) 弥补中学英语教材写作部分的不足

目前绝大多数英语教材在知识学习和技能训练方面都比较关注听、说、读的活动设计,写的活动通常作为巩固环节安排在每个单元或者模块学习之后。写作活动只是要求学生根据课文内容以及提供的相关句型和词汇写作,然而这种写作任务实际上是要求学生对课文进行机械模仿。为什么要这么写?这么写的知识要求有哪些?这些关键性的问题教材没有涉及。这就需要教师补充相关知识。为了弥补教材设计的不足,教师应根据不同的写作教学目标要求,结合写作内容、写作方法、写作文体,补充相关的写作知识和写作策略。在布置写作任务之前或者在写作训练当中,先进行相关的写作知识指导。

四、主题写作活动应遵循的原则

要让主题写作活动发挥最大功效,学生就必须有一定的语言知识积累,才能在写作中提取相关语言素材,为主题写作提供最基础的语料,为系统而持续的主题写作活动打好坚实的语言基础。

(一) 话题内容相关性原则。

要利用单元话题来活跃学生的思维,话题的选择就要有一定的针对性。主题写作要贴近学生的生活,与学生的学习经验、能力和水平相当。教材为学生进行主题写作提供了语料和方法策略指导,有很强的指导性和示范性,脱离了单元话题的写作难以提高学生的写作能力,也就达不到巩固单元目标语言的效果,更无法全面提升学生的综合语言素质。

(二) 趣味性原则。

由于中学生正处在求知欲最旺盛的年龄段,往往对自己熟悉或感兴趣的内容比较关注,因而教师要善于利用各种活动和形式,激发学生对主题写作的兴趣。当学生的兴趣被激活时,学生写作才有内驱力和创造力,才能发挥最佳水平,写出好作文。

(三) 思维创新性原则。

要让习作体现学生独立的思想、语言和风格,不被教材提供的语言素材所限制,教师就需要在主题写作教学过程中注意培养学生的发散性思维,培养学生对语言的灵活运用及准确表达的能力。创新的过程也是综合语言素质全面提升的过程。

(四) 方法多样性原则。

在确定了写作主题后,写作活动不仅是在教材范文基础上的模仿写作,还可通过多种方法推进,如翻译语句、连句成段、选词填空等。写作完毕,教师可引导学生进行班级大讨论,推荐优秀习作,同学在欣赏学习优秀习作的同时进行小组讨论并质疑,提出改进意见,说出自己对话题的理解,从而培养学生积极的思维能力和语言运用能力(杨文娟,20xx)。

五、主题写作活动课堂实践案例探析

(一) 教材分析

目前笔者所在地区采用的是新编北师大版高中英语教材。这套教材一大优点在于其语言材料的组织都是围绕某个主题展开的。每单元有一个主题,下面每一课都有自己的话题,对于这些话题学生都较感兴趣,有话可说。这样的教材编排特点适合开展主题写作活动。每个单元的前三课或四课是单元话题下的基本词汇、短语、句型和语法项目的学习,Communication Workshop是对单元知识的扩展和综合运用,通常有基于单元话题的写作指导及任务。学生获得的单元基础语言知识以及他们运用语言知识的准确和熟练程度,完全可以通过话题写作活动来检验和强化,而且主题写作活动可以体现语言学习的价值和意义。

(二) 主题写作教学实例

下面结合新编北师大版高中英语教材第7模块,第21单元的主题写作教学案例进行探析。

本单元的话题是人类生物学,通过单元学习,学生应能够流利地运用单元目标词汇和基本句型来讨论有关人类科学的相关话题。食物、健康和医学是人类生存和发展中永恒的话题。学生对人类科学有较为浓厚的兴趣,所以此单元话题下的写作围绕人类发展展开,贴近学生的生活,易于激发学生的写作兴趣。学生对单元主题词汇和基础语句已经有了一定的掌握和积累,能够用单元基础语言材料组织语句,表达自己的想法。教师在指导学生进行主题写作时,完全可以依托单元话题语料。

克隆人是在人类生物学发展到今天无法回避的话题,但具有极大争议性,这种本身有争议的话题正适合本单元Communication Workshop的写作要求Learn to write a discursive essay,此文体要求学生第一段介绍话题,第二三段分述反面观点及正面观点,最后一段给出个人观点。但由于克隆人在现实世界中还没有出现,同时又远离学生生活,因此为了给学生带来更直观的感受,教师最好课前布置所有同学回家观看电影《逃离克隆岛》,这部电影探讨了科隆人及其引发的道德问题。

课堂上教师首先利用大量的与主题相关的图片、电影片段等创设谈论克隆人的.氛围,让学生用英语表明自己对克隆人这一科学话题的态度。这一活动激活了学生写作所需的话题词汇,可以作为写前的热身。从交际功能的角度讲,这样的听、说形式的语言活动,不但不会冲击主题写作活动,反而与主题写作教学是相互统一、相互促进的。

在完成上述活动后,教师引导学生通过小组合作写一段话介绍克隆人话题并过渡到Should Human Cloning be allowed?这一主题上。这一活动调动了学生的写作积极性和主动参与意识,在轻松活跃的氛围中强化了其对概括技巧的理解和运用,学生的语言储备和发散思维得到充分激活,他们更加愉悦和主动地参与主题讨论,为下一步的写作活动做好前期准备。

在完成上述活动的基础上,通过课本P99的Writing Help引导学生通过小组协作完成a discursive essay的后三段提纲,要求第二三段分别写出中心句及至少两个论据。基于小组活动的写作练习实际上帮助学生搜集有说服力的论据并克服对写作的畏难情绪,让他们有信心完成写作。这种形式的写作训练强化了学生的语言运用技能,帮助学生初步完成单元写作要求,培养学生的写作思维和写作能力。

教师可以要求学生在写完提纲后,同伴间相互交换检查,检查内容包括拼写、用词是否准确,句式是否准确,语法是否准确,语言表达是否流畅、丰富等。互评可以鼓励学生间健康向上的竞争,激发竞争意识,促使每个学生尽力提供最好的作品,并且纠错之一的过程有时语言知识的再现和再复习过程,能够使学生在交流中得到更多的帮助,收获不同的语言思维和语言表达方式,补充和丰富自己的语言学习。

在提纲写作的基础上,引导学生利用Writing Help中的格式要求(正式与中立的风格),以及Communication Workshop中的连接词(although, even though, however, therefore, while)独立完成写作任务。此写作活动充分强化了有关连接词的理解即运用,提高了学生的写作能力。

学生最终完成习作后,将学生的作文张贴在教师里,让学生互相批阅。学生互相批阅能激发他们主动寻找差距的意识,也是对单元目标语言再理解、再巩固的过程。学生从另外的角度反思自己习作中的语言运用,强化语用意识和语言运用能力。教师在学生批阅完后,可再作进一步检查。这属于指导性主题写作。通过教师不同程度的引导和帮助,学生将自己要表达的思想通过一定的逻辑组织后用文字表达出来。

这种主题写作练习可以是独立完成,也可以是小组合作,方式可以灵活多样。指导性主题写作是介于模仿性写作和自由写作之间的过渡性写作,学生在进行大量的模仿性写作练习和指导性写作练习后,才能掌握一定的写作技巧,从而进行自由写作。指导性主题写作可以帮助学生从原始的模仿性单元语料学习过渡到具有创造性的基础语言运用,提升综合语言运用能力。

六、结束语

随着课程标准对学生写作技巧要求的提高,写作教学的地位越来越重要,每一位教师都在摸索写作教学的可行方法。有些教师认为,写作就是让学生坚持不懈地写;有些教师认为,写作就是要套用各种范例;还有些教师认为,学生必须多背才能写好作文。这些方法都有一定的可行性和效果。提高学生的写作能力必须建立在一定的基础上,如学生的写作兴趣、写作愿望、成就感等。要想满足学生的这些心理需求,教师就必须从挖掘课程资源入手,设计主题写作活动,让学生在轻松活跃的写作氛围中主动运用单元目标语言,同时教师要善于发现学生习作中的闪光点和不足之处,让学生在展现自我的过程中提高英语写作能力。

根据提示写一篇My English Teacher

Name: Mr.King Age: 31 Years of teaching: 10 Hobby: playing sports, watching Tv , reading . Relation with his students: strict, kind, patient. 评论:teacher, friend

My English Teacher

Mr.King is our English teacher. He is 31 years old. He became a teacher 10 years ago.

He likes playing sports, so he is very strong. He likes reading and watching Tv and he has good knowledge. All of us love to listen to his class because he has a good way to make his lessons interesting. Mr King is kind to us, but very strict with us in our studies. He is patient,too. He is a good teacher and also a good friend.

Nowadays, there are more and more (某种现象) in (某种场合)。 It is estimated that (相关数据)。 Why have there been so many (某种现象)? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows。 The first one is (原因一)。 Besides, (原因二)。 The third one is (原因三)。 To sum up, the main cause of (某种现象) is due to (最主要原因)。 It is high time that something were done upon it。 For one thing, (解决办法一)。 On the other hand, (解决办法二)。 All these measures will certainly reduce the number of (某种现象)。

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