lula不是luna
文章是essay...article..你还没有那么高的水平sothis is my essay, please make any necessary correction.
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楼上的那个感觉有点奇怪,我觉得还是这样说比较好:If there has been some mistakes,would you please correct it? (英文中委婉的建议会比较有礼貌一些。)希望能够给你带来帮助,有英语问题欢迎一起探讨噢~O(∩_∩)O