纠错英文

1.the去掉2.listening to music3.when 改成 since4.to watch 改为watching5.didn't 改为 haven't6.went to7.my friends8.will改为 am9.应改为： I like fast cars，especially Ferraris.10.in sixth floor改为 on the 6th floor 11.are 改为is12.are改为is ,persons改为people13.skins 改为skin14.watch 改为watching15.because改为as16.computers programming改为 computer games17.died改为death18.

恩？是给别人的情信吧，写的很有水准，应该没什么错，你可以用翻译网翻译看看，注意一点翻译出来的文体可能不一样，别着急，因为英语有倒装句，如what is this?中文：这是什么？而翻译的可能是：什么是这个。祝你成功！

第一个句子的结构不完整，甚至不能称之为句子

Another 85 billion for built or upgraded facilities to treatment of urban garbage.

这段话找不到一个谓语动词，在英语中一句话当中必须有谓语动词才能完整构成一个句子，第一个翻译显然没有，第二个翻译中的will be是句子的谓语动词；

要求翻译的部分“新建或者升级垃圾处理设施”，我们可以先将其拆分为“形容词+名词”的部分，意思就是这句话的中心语是facilities；

所以这个句子我们可以这样翻译：

With another 85 billion fund used for  garbage disposal ,  new facilities and upgrading infrastructure can be applyed .（这句话的谓语动词是由情态动词can +be 构成）

我的修改（其实，诚意是最重要的，如果她对你还有情，即便有小错误，她也会感动的。祝有情人终成眷属！）Ing.sorry about that night.i know i hurt you.i cann’t leave you .i tried to forget you .but i can't make it.nobody can tell me the reason.i think it is just beause i really love you and care you .after i left lastnight.i started to miss you .missed you everytime when i was working or walking.i don't know how to express all of theseI am sorry .sometime i think i'm really a fool.my English is poor.I even want to slap my face .when I realise that I made you sad.i still love you so much.at that time .you said i made you cry.my heart is so painful.but i can't speak out.I am so sorryi love you .i'm waiting for your coming back all the time.and for that we were together again.i want you to stay by my side, all the time.i swear.i will embrace you tightly.console you when you are sad .and smile when you are happy.I was painfulwhen i was tryping this message.please.ing.forgive me .I will never do that again.Ing.i miss you .

第一句话，for是介词，肯定不可以直接加build和upgrade的，非常不通顺。纵观全局的意思是：另有850亿用于建设或升级城市垃圾处理设施。应该是850亿是被用于~~，是被动的语气，第一句是直译了，是汉式英语。

1.A thief entered the room. 2.A thief climbed into his house. 3.He ran as quickly as he could. 4.He came downstairs slowly. 5.He had done his homework before he went out. 6.She went on holiday after she took the examination. 7.The thief dropped the torch. 8.His voice is sweet.I like it.

TodayIreceivedacallfromTHMASONLOGISTICSLTDandtheyadvicedmetosendthegoodstotheirwarehousefortheywouldarrangetheshippmentforme.

1. I like food, especially the spicy food.remove "the"2. I like listening music."listening to"3. I have worked at AD when I was 17 years old."since" NOT "when"4. To watch movies is an interesting thing for me."watching movies"5. When I lay down on my bed I realised I didn’t do my homework."hadn't done my homework"6. Last Saturday I went my best friend’s wedding ceremony.went to7. One of my friend isn’t likely to get married.my friends8. I will probably go to abroad this vacation.go abroad 9. I like fast cars. Especially I like Ferraris.I like fast cars, especially Ferraris.10. I live in department in sixth flooron the 6th floor11. My neighbourhood are very friendly.is very friendly12. There are eight persons in our class.OK.13. My mother and I have same good skins.skin14. I like watch cartoons which have an interesting background.I like watching cartoons with interesting backgrounds.15. It is an interesting thing for Anna to watch movies because it is a way to relax.Watching movies interests Anna because it is a way to relax.16. He likes computers programming.computer programming17. He was died when I arrived.had died18. He likes eating spicy food in Sichuan province.or "spicy food from Sichuan"19. She is very crazy about playing basketball.OK.20. I like playing tennis which made me excited.I like playing tennis, which makes me excited.21. I like the pop music because the music can make me feel warm when I feel upset.I like pop music because it makes me feel warm when I'm upset.22. I want to be an independent person who won’t rely on anybody.does not rely 23. He likes read science books.reading24. Eating spicy food is my favourite particularly Sichuan spicy food.especially 25. I have ever worked for Adidas.omit "ever"26. My mother and I have same good skins.skin27. I like sport especially playing basketball.omit "playing"28. She got married with him when she was only 20.OK 29. He met with accident on his way to home. OK.OR " had" instead of "met with"