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在平时的学习、工作或生活中,大家都有写作文的经历,对作文很是熟悉吧,借助作文人们可以反映客观事物、表达思想感情、传递知识信息。相信许多人会觉得作文很难写吧,以下是我为大家整理的英语话题作文8篇,欢迎大家借鉴与参考,希望对大家有所帮助。

Failure is a common thing in one‘s life。 Almost everyone experiences failure in his life。 When one fails in his attempt in doing something, he often feels upset。 Some people may yield to failure and flinch from it。 But others will stick to and achieve the final success。

Success is what everyone expects。 It may lead to fame and glory。 When one suc ceeds in doing something, he gets so excited that he often neglects all the unsuccessful at tempts he has done。

As the old saying goes, "Failure teaches success。" It is true that failure is an impor tam factor toward success。 The way to success is full of various difficulties and obstacles。 Many important inventions or discoveries were achieved after hundreds of failure。 And only those successes which have been achieved after many failures are really valuable and praiseworthy。

在人的一生中失败是常事。几乎每个人在一生中都失败过。当一个人打算做某事失败时,他常常感到沮丧。有些人会屈服于失败而畏缩不前。而另外一个人却坚持不懈并取得最后成功。

成功是人人都期待的,成功可以使人成名、荣耀。当一个人在做某事时成功了,他是那么高兴以致常常忽略了他曾经做过的那些没有成功的事情。

正如俗话所说,“失败是成功之母。”失败是走向成功的重要因素,这是毫无疑问的。成功的道路上充满各种困难和障碍。许多重要的发明和发现是经过数百次失败才成功的。只有经过许多次失败后取得的成功才是真正有价值和值得称赞的。

1、(福建宁德)健康饮食关系到青少年的身心健康成长。请根据以下提供的内容和提示词,以"Healthy Eating"为题写一篇作文.

提示:1.健康饮食的'重要性(important, energy); 2.良好的饮食习惯(keep a balanced diet); 3.健康饮食的益处(make…..stong)

Healthy eating is important for us in our daily life. Food can give us energy and help us build up our body. What and how should we eat to be healthier? First, we should have enough clean food each meal. Second, it's important to keep a balanced diet. Different kinds of food provide us different nutrition we need every day. Third, we should have a regular meal. In this way, we'll be strong and healthy, and we'll do well in our study.

2、根据中英文提示,写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的稿件。(字数不少于60词,英文提示词供选用)

有写学生不爱吃学校的午饭,常到校外去吃他们所喜欢吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他们的身体健康。"英语角"打算针对这个问题展开讨论。请你准备一篇讨论稿,谈谈你的看法和建议。

参考词汇:not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer

范文:

We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn't delicious. So they often go out of school to buy something they like to eat. But I'm afraid it's bad for their health to eat lunch outside because some of the food they buy isn't healthy enough.

In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.

The cartoon is simple but thought-provoking. As is vividly shown in the picture, there are two passengers sitting in a bus. One of them is a male, who is sitting cross-legged and smoking. The whole bus is filled with the black smoke. While the other one is a female, who is sitting in front of the man and covering her nose with a tissue to prevent the harm of the secondhand smoke. There is no doubt that the picture implies that the secondhand smoke exists everywhere and it is hazardous.

This phenomenon has an undesirable impact on our daily life. Firstly, it does harm to and sacrifices our physical and mental health. What’s worse, it is the main cause of lung cancer and about 10% people die of it every year. In addition, our environment and ecosystem will be severely polluted and thus it hinders our sustainable and scientific development. Were the situation to continue, we would pay a high price.

Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic and effective measures to control this situation. Firstly, we should appeal to the government to make strict laws and regulations to ban smoking in public places. As for ourselves, we should take practical actions to stop smoking and protect our living environment. Only in this way can we have opportunities to expect a beautiful world and a bright future to come.

Different people have different views on success. Some hold that making a great deal of money means success. Others argue that holding an important post in the government means success. Still others believe that having a high academic title at a famous university or a research institute means success.

In my opinion, success means brilliant achievement in our work. In other words, no matter what we do, making outstanding contributions to the development of our country and bringing help and happiness to others is success.

To achieve success, we should, first of all, have a clear long-term goal in our life. Besides, we should have short term goals in different periods of life. As we know, it is these short term goals that make our long-term goal possible. Second, we should be both perseverant and hardworking. Whatever we do, there are always two possibilities: success and failure. We should never lose heart when we come across difficulties or when we are confronted with failure. Instead, we should learn from our experience, build up our confidence and work even harder and smarter towards our purpose. Third, we should follow the examples of those who are successful and learn from them. Finally, we should try to get along well with our classmates and colleagues. We should care for each other and help each other in our study, our work and our life, because team work is of great importance in the realization of our dream.

If we can follow these principles, we will certainly achieve remarkable success in our life.

For most of us today ,(1).From above ,we can find that the reasons why (2) are as follows.The primary reason ,i think, is (3).Second,(4).The third reason, actually ,is (5).The significance for (6) 。Therefore ,(7).

注释:(1)人们针对XX的态度和举措(2)归纳现状(3)第一个原因(4)第二个原因(5)第三个原因

(6)重申造成现状的最重要原因(7)我的建议我写的模块(4)的相应的作文

pollution

most of us today (recognize that environmental pollution has been a greatly serious problem . lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air .many fish die of poisonous water . thousandsof people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas . therefore ,environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases that are disabling ,or bringing death not only to human beings ,but also to wild life .)from above ,we can find that the reasons why (environment are polluted more and more seriously) are as follows.

the primary reason ,I think , is (the reason of harmful substances into environment . for example ,to prevent insects ,farmers make use of great amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests . however ,they pollute air ,water and land ).second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make environment polluted badly ).the third reason actually is (the result of a growing population in the world . everyday , so much litter and waste are poured out from houses ,also pollute the environment ).the significance for (controlling pollution ) noted that it‘s high time that more effective measures should be taken .therefore ,(new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants from factories . moreover ,in the households ,there is an obvious need to reduce litter and waste . let‘s make our good efforts ,and the world will be a safer place to live for us ).

用英语谈谈你对电影的看法:

Of all kinds of movies, I like comedies best. I think they're interesting. My favorite actor is Jackie. I like his movie King of Comedy. I think it’s a successful comedy. For action movies, I like The Lord of the Ring best. It’s exciting. I like documentaries because they’re true stories. I like only some thrillers. Many thrillers are scary and boring.

在各种各样的电影中,我最喜欢喜剧片。我认为它们很有趣。我最喜欢的演员是成龙。我喜欢他的电影“喜剧之王”。我认为这是一个成功的喜剧。至于动作片,我最喜欢“指环王”。它令人兴奋。我喜欢纪录片,因为他们是真实的故事。我只喜欢一些恐怖片。许多恐怖片都太恐怖和无聊。

请你用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的周末生活:

I have a good weekend. On Saturday morning,I do my homework. After lunch, I go shopping with my mother. At about five o’clock, I go to play basketball with my friend. On Sunday, I watch a football game on TV. I often help my mother do housework. I watch TV with my parents in the evening. Then I go to bed at nine o’clock. I’m very happy on weekends.

我有一个美好的周末。星期六早上,我做我的作业。午饭后,我和我的母亲去购物。大约5点,我和我的朋友一起玩篮球。星期天,我在电视上观看足球比赛。我经常帮助妈妈做家务。晚上我和我的父母看电视。然后我在九点钟去睡觉。周末我很快乐。

以 My Favorite…为题,写一篇短文:

My favorite subject is English. I like it because it is interesting. I have English every day. I can speak a little English. I join the school English club. Every afternoon I go there to talk in English. I can see English movies and read English books. I think it is useful for me. I want to learn it well. I like English very much.

我最喜欢的科目是英语。我喜欢它,因为它很有趣。我每一天都上英语课。我会讲一点英语。我参加了学校的英语俱乐部。每天下午我去那里用英语交谈。我可以看英文电影和阅读英文书籍。我想这对我来说是有用的。我想学好它。我非常喜欢英语。

There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil. The polluted air does great harm to people’s health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What is more, vegetation had been greatly reduced with the rapid growth of modern cities.

近年来环境保护仍然有许多问题。最严重的问题之一是严重的空气、水和土壤污染。被污染的空气对人体健康危害很大。污染的水会引起疾病和死亡,更重要的是,随着现代城市的快速增长植被已大大减少了。

To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot. Legislative steps have been introduced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution. Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environmental protection today.

为了保护环境,各国政府做了很多努力。立法措施已经被用来控制空气污染,保护森林资源和海洋资源,制止任何的环境污染。因此,在当今的环保中政府起着最重要的作用

In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through education. Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy into practice, because more people means more pollution. Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.

在我看来,为了保护环境,政府必须采取更具体的措施。首先,它应该让人们充分认识到通过教育意识到环境保护的重要性英语写作。第二,应该付出更多的努力把计划生育政策付诸实施,因为人口越多就意味着污染越多。最后,那些故意破坏环境的人应该受到严惩。我们应该让他们知道破坏环境就是毁灭人类自己。

假定你是李华,你发现生活中会有各种各样的流言(rumors)。对于流言,有些中学生不知道应该如何对待。请你就此问题用英文给报社编辑写一封信,谈谈你对该问题的看法。

内容主要包括:

1.生活中存在着各种各样的流言;

2.流言的危害(影响心情,造成伤害);

3.如何对待流言(无视流言,与传播者交流或不要轻易相信它)。

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数。

Dear editor,

As we all know, there are many kinds of rumors in our daily life. Some of them not only make us feel disturbed but also cause great damage to us.

When we face rumors, I think at first we should ignore them. Rumors will come to an end quickly if we don’t pay much attention to them. In addition, we can communicate with the people who spread the rumors in order to make them realize the harm of the rumors. Last but not least, please remember that rumors will have no effect on our life if we don’t believe them easily.

Yours

LiHua

【参考译文】

亲爱的编辑,

众所周知,日常生活中有各种各样的谣言。他们中的一些人不仅使我们感到不安,而且给我们造成了巨大的伤害。

当我们面对谣言时,我认为首先我们应该忽视他们。如果我们不重视谣言,谣言很快就会告一个底。此外,我们还可以与传播谣言的人交流,以使他们意识到谣言的危害。最后但并非最不重要的,请记住,谣言将不会影响我们的生活,如果我们不相信他们很容易。

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在平凡的学习、工作、生活中,大家总免不了要接触或使用作文吧,写作文是培养人们的观察力、联想力、想象力、思考力和记忆力的重要手段。作文的注意事项有许多,你确定会写吗?下面是我为大家收集的英语话题作文8篇,欢迎阅读,希望大家能够喜欢。

As is shown above, in the middle of the cartoon stands + 主题词,which symbolizes + 主题词的另一种表达,+ 同位语即主题词第三种表达 + 表示主题词动作的非谓语动词. The drawer‘s intention seems to be highly self-evident and the meaning causes us to be thought-provoking. It is therefore safe to draw the conclusion that + 主题词 + is not a blessing but a curse.

Not only I, but also the best poets and philosophers also insist that the problem has long plagued the people‘s social life. Obviously, I can think of no better reasons for the question other than the following two. Initially, human being’ s fearless curiosity about everything new has led some of them into this marsh. Additionally, our education in the harmfulness of this issue has been far from adequate to build the individuals ’sound resistance to this issue. Just as an old Arab proverb has it, there is a growing tendency for the public in the west to think the significance of + 主题词.

From what has been discussed above, the most important thing is not to say, but instead to do. Chinese citizens are expected to enhance their awareness that it is an indispensable part for the construction of harmonious society. The local and central authorities, not only chinese but also foreign ones, in coordination, are obliged to do something useful, only through these action can have a glorious future.

英语六级作文题目:

Limiting the Buying of Cars or Not?

1. 对于北京限制购车,有人赞成

2. 也有人表示反对

3. 你的看法

[英语六级作文范文]

Limiting tbe Buying of Cars or Not?

Beijing has placed strict restriction on the number of newly purchased car in the city and the policy bas sparked heated discussion. Some people support the policy, saying it,s a powerful method to cope with the severe traffic congestion in the capital. With cars increasing drastically in the past few years, severe traffic jams occur not only in rush hours but at any time of the day now.

Others, however, aie strongly against the limitations. They argue that the great number of official cars,which are frequently used, is a big factor causing traffic congestion. But the policy mainly aims at private cars and has no dear restrictions on the use of official cars. Besides, car purchase limitation would hinder the development of China's automobile industry,and more people would lose their jobs as a result.

Personally, I think the restriction of buying and use of cars, official cars incladed, is inevitable and just a matter of time for Beijing. If the number of cars is not limited, there will be a huge disaster for the environment, road resources, the travel demands of normal people and the improvement of living standards..

用英语介绍你的一日三餐:

Hello, everyone! I don’t like sports, but I like eating very much. I eat a lot food every day. For breakfast, I like milk, eggs and bread a lot . For lunch, I like French fries, chicken, hamburgers and apples. For dinnerr, I like fruits, vegetables and rice.

嗨,大家好!我不喜欢运动,但我很喜欢吃。我每天吃很多食物。早餐,我非常喜欢牛奶,鸡蛋和面包。午餐,我喜欢薯条,鸡肉,汉堡包和苹果。对于晚餐,我喜欢水果,蔬菜和米饭。

以My Day为题写一篇英语短文:

I get up early at six every day. After doing some morning exercises, I read English for twenty minutes. At seven I have breakfast. After breakfast I take my schoolbag and go to school. Our class begins at eight, and we have four classes in the morning. After lunch at 12 o’clock, I take a short rest in the classroom. We have three more classes in the afternoon. After school at five , I go back home. I often help my mother do some housework. Sometimes I watch TV. After dinner, I begin to do my homework. Then I take a shower. I go to bed at nine thirty.

我每天早上六点起床。做了早操后,我读英语20分钟。七点吃早餐。早饭后,我带上我的书包去上学。我们的课在八点开始,早上我们上4节课。12点吃完午饭后,我在教室里稍微休息一下。下午,我们还有3节课。5点放学后,我回家。我经常帮我的妈妈做一些家务。有时候我看电视。晚饭后,我开始做我的作业。然后我淋浴。我九点半上床睡觉。

摘要:话题写作:有关 信心与希望 话题

例:1、生活中困难不可避免,面对困难需要信心

2、试举一例说明信心在学习(考试、生活等)方面的作用

3、你对困难的态度 It is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world wit

高考英语话题作文:有关信心与希望

例:1、生活中困难不可避免,面对困难需要信心…

2、试举一例说明信心在学习(考试、生活等)方面的作用…

3、你对困难的态度…

It is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties. When we are faced with them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence. With confidence, we can find sometimes the question is not as hugeas we imagine.

Take most of us for example, the entrance exam to college seems to be a horrible monster. Accordingly, some people give up, some persist. In my eyes, with confidence, right assessment of the difficulties, as well as full preparation, try and exert your strength, and then we will overcome all problems and challenges. On the whole, I believe we youngsters should face the difficulties in right manner. And nothing is impossible, brave it out and just do it!

do you know how we can keep a healthy lifestyle? now let me tell you. we should de exercise every day. for example, we can run in the morning and play ping-pong in the evening. we should eat healthy food every day. we try to eat a lot of vegetables and fruits. and we shouldn’t eat too much junk food, because it is not good for our health. at night, we can drink some milk.

but we shouldn’t drink coffee. we should get up early and sleep early. and we shouldn’t watch tv and surf the internet for too long time. we should sleep nine hours every night.

a good healthy lifestyle helps us get good grades. good food and exercise help us to study better.

i have a healthy body, because i have a healthy lifestyle. i exercise every day, usually when i come home from school. my eating habits are pretty good. i try to eat a lot of vegetables. i eat fruit and drink milk every day.

but i never drink coffee, because my mom says, it is too bad for my health. i love junk food, too. but i eat it only once a week. i sleep nine hours every night. good food and good rest can help me to study better! and my healthy lifestyle helps me get good grades!

写作教学一直是高中英语课堂教学中较为棘手的问题。本文以一次主题写作活动教学环节为例探讨英语主题写作活动与学生运用单元目标语言的能力之间的关系,以下是“英语话题作文教学设计”希望能够帮助的到您!

一、研究背景

我国中学英语写作教学一直是令师生感到头痛的问题。尽管教师和学生在写作方面做了很多努力,但英语写作仍然属于薄弱环节。究其原因,一是教材编排问题。在现行的教材中,写仍然体现为巩固听、说、读的手段,没有作为知识在教材中系统阐述。实际上写作不仅是巩固和强化知识和技能的手段,其本身还具有知识体系属性。而这种知识体系在教材设计中没有得到重视,使得写作总是处于边缘化状态。二是不少教师对写作训练的认识存在误区,认为写作训练仅是一种巩固与练习的手段。绝大多数教师认为英语写作教学“高耗低效”,对短期快速提升学生的英语学习成绩贡献不大,觉得英语写作教学可有可无,对此不够重视。教师的教学思想和行为无形当中会影响学生对英语写作的态度、观念和评价,致使学生普遍对英语写作缺乏热情、信心和积极性。三是写作知识学习和技能训练缺乏有效的教学策略和模式)。大多数教师的教学模式是:教师布置写作任务――学生课外独立完成――教师独自批改――教师念范文――学生背范文。教师对学生习作的反馈往往只是一个分数,有时也画出学生的语言错误,但大多数学生只关心分数的高低,对教师的反馈往往看一眼就塞到书包里去了,类似甚至同样的错误在以后的写作中依旧出现。

二、主题写作活动的定义及概述

主题写作活动是以一定的话题为中心,以单元目标语言为依托,围绕单元目标词汇和语言结构展开的话题性写作活动。在课堂教学实践中,主题写作活动是以拓展单元目标语言为出发点,以培养学生的英语写作能力为重点,以提高学生的英语写作能力为重点,以提高学生的综合语言运用能力为目的的写作活动。

主题写作活动是检验学生是否理解和内化单元目标语言知识的重要而有效的途径之一,也是实现语言交际和语言运用的途径之一。主题写作不仅是基础性的更是能力性的,要求学生对单元目标语言进行再理解、内化、提取和综合,最终转化为综合语言运用能力。在这个过程中,教师要给予方法指导,帮助学生再次理解、巩固单元基础语言结构,全面提升语言运用能力。

三、主题写作活动的意义

确立正确的英语写作教学观念,改变中学英语写作教学的薄弱状况,是主题写作活动的意义所在。在高中英语写作教学中,发展学生的主题写作能力,有利于培养学生思维的广阔性、深刻性和创造性,全面提高学生的综合语言运用能力,为学生的终身学习和全面发展奠定基础。教师要从教学实际出发,寻找方法和突破口,改进写作教学的方法和技巧。教师要善于对课程资源进行挖掘,以顺应不断更新的课程要求,让主题写作成为巩固和促进基础语言学习、提升学生写作能力的有效途径。

(一) 确立正确的英语写作教学观念

英语写作具有动作技能和智力因素相融合的学习认知属性(Reid, 1993)。学生的英语写作能力必须有写作知识的指导,让学生知道如何写,并在写作过程中将知识转化为能力。许多教师认为,只要学生动笔写作就能提高写作水平,因此一味地要求学生练习写作,但又不教给学生写作知识。学生经过一段时间的努力写作能力仍没有明显提高时,往往会失去写作兴趣。还有些教师认为,学生语法学好了,词汇量大了,阅读面广了,写作水平就会提高,因此在英语教学中花在写作知识学习和训练上的时间远不如听说和阅读的训练多。这些是误导英语写作教学的错误观念。英语写作是动作技能和智力因素相融合的学习结果,在教学实践中二者不可偏颇。

(二) 弥补中学英语教材写作部分的不足

目前绝大多数英语教材在知识学习和技能训练方面都比较关注听、说、读的活动设计,写的活动通常作为巩固环节安排在每个单元或者模块学习之后。写作活动只是要求学生根据课文内容以及提供的相关句型和词汇写作,然而这种写作任务实际上是要求学生对课文进行机械模仿。为什么要这么写?这么写的知识要求有哪些?这些关键性的问题教材没有涉及。这就需要教师补充相关知识。为了弥补教材设计的不足,教师应根据不同的写作教学目标要求,结合写作内容、写作方法、写作文体,补充相关的写作知识和写作策略。在布置写作任务之前或者在写作训练当中,先进行相关的写作知识指导。

四、主题写作活动应遵循的原则

要让主题写作活动发挥最大功效,学生就必须有一定的语言知识积累,才能在写作中提取相关语言素材,为主题写作提供最基础的语料,为系统而持续的主题写作活动打好坚实的语言基础。

(一) 话题内容相关性原则。

要利用单元话题来活跃学生的思维,话题的选择就要有一定的针对性。主题写作要贴近学生的生活,与学生的学习经验、能力和水平相当。教材为学生进行主题写作提供了语料和方法策略指导,有很强的指导性和示范性,脱离了单元话题的写作难以提高学生的写作能力,也就达不到巩固单元目标语言的效果,更无法全面提升学生的综合语言素质。

(二) 趣味性原则。

由于中学生正处在求知欲最旺盛的年龄段,往往对自己熟悉或感兴趣的内容比较关注,因而教师要善于利用各种活动和形式,激发学生对主题写作的兴趣。当学生的兴趣被激活时,学生写作才有内驱力和创造力,才能发挥最佳水平,写出好作文。

(三) 思维创新性原则。

要让习作体现学生独立的思想、语言和风格,不被教材提供的语言素材所限制,教师就需要在主题写作教学过程中注意培养学生的发散性思维,培养学生对语言的灵活运用及准确表达的能力。创新的过程也是综合语言素质全面提升的过程。

(四) 方法多样性原则。

在确定了写作主题后,写作活动不仅是在教材范文基础上的模仿写作,还可通过多种方法推进,如翻译语句、连句成段、选词填空等。写作完毕,教师可引导学生进行班级大讨论,推荐优秀习作,同学在欣赏学习优秀习作的同时进行小组讨论并质疑,提出改进意见,说出自己对话题的理解,从而培养学生积极的思维能力和语言运用能力(杨文娟,20xx)。

五、主题写作活动课堂实践案例探析

(一) 教材分析

目前笔者所在地区采用的是新编北师大版高中英语教材。这套教材一大优点在于其语言材料的组织都是围绕某个主题展开的。每单元有一个主题,下面每一课都有自己的话题,对于这些话题学生都较感兴趣,有话可说。这样的教材编排特点适合开展主题写作活动。每个单元的前三课或四课是单元话题下的基本词汇、短语、句型和语法项目的学习,Communication Workshop是对单元知识的扩展和综合运用,通常有基于单元话题的写作指导及任务。学生获得的单元基础语言知识以及他们运用语言知识的准确和熟练程度,完全可以通过话题写作活动来检验和强化,而且主题写作活动可以体现语言学习的价值和意义。

(二) 主题写作教学实例

下面结合新编北师大版高中英语教材第7模块,第21单元的主题写作教学案例进行探析。

本单元的话题是人类生物学,通过单元学习,学生应能够流利地运用单元目标词汇和基本句型来讨论有关人类科学的相关话题。食物、健康和医学是人类生存和发展中永恒的话题。学生对人类科学有较为浓厚的兴趣,所以此单元话题下的写作围绕人类发展展开,贴近学生的生活,易于激发学生的写作兴趣。学生对单元主题词汇和基础语句已经有了一定的掌握和积累,能够用单元基础语言材料组织语句,表达自己的想法。教师在指导学生进行主题写作时,完全可以依托单元话题语料。

克隆人是在人类生物学发展到今天无法回避的话题,但具有极大争议性,这种本身有争议的话题正适合本单元Communication Workshop的写作要求Learn to write a discursive essay,此文体要求学生第一段介绍话题,第二三段分述反面观点及正面观点,最后一段给出个人观点。但由于克隆人在现实世界中还没有出现,同时又远离学生生活,因此为了给学生带来更直观的感受,教师最好课前布置所有同学回家观看电影《逃离克隆岛》,这部电影探讨了科隆人及其引发的道德问题。

课堂上教师首先利用大量的与主题相关的图片、电影片段等创设谈论克隆人的氛围,让学生用英语表明自己对克隆人这一科学话题的态度。这一活动激活了学生写作所需的话题词汇,可以作为写前的热身。从交际功能的角度讲,这样的听、说形式的语言活动,不但不会冲击主题写作活动,反而与主题写作教学是相互统一、相互促进的。

在完成上述活动后,教师引导学生通过小组合作写一段话介绍克隆人话题并过渡到Should Human Cloning be allowed?这一主题上。这一活动调动了学生的写作积极性和主动参与意识,在轻松活跃的氛围中强化了其对概括技巧的理解和运用,学生的语言储备和发散思维得到充分激活,他们更加愉悦和主动地参与主题讨论,为下一步的写作活动做好前期准备。

在完成上述活动的基础上,通过课本P99的Writing Help引导学生通过小组协作完成a discursive essay的后三段提纲,要求第二三段分别写出中心句及至少两个论据。基于小组活动的写作练习实际上帮助学生搜集有说服力的论据并克服对写作的畏难情绪,让他们有信心完成写作。这种形式的写作训练强化了学生的语言运用技能,帮助学生初步完成单元写作要求,培养学生的写作思维和写作能力。

教师可以要求学生在写完提纲后,同伴间相互交换检查,检查内容包括拼写、用词是否准确,句式是否准确,语法是否准确,语言表达是否流畅、丰富等。互评可以鼓励学生间健康向上的竞争,激发竞争意识,促使每个学生尽力提供最好的作品,并且纠错之一的过程有时语言知识的再现和再复习过程,能够使学生在交流中得到更多的帮助,收获不同的语言思维和语言表达方式,补充和丰富自己的语言学习。

在提纲写作的基础上,引导学生利用Writing Help中的格式要求(正式与中立的风格),以及Communication Workshop中的连接词(although, even though, however, therefore, while)独立完成写作任务。此写作活动充分强化了有关连接词的理解即运用,提高了学生的写作能力。

学生最终完成习作后,将学生的作文张贴在教师里,让学生互相批阅。学生互相批阅能激发他们主动寻找差距的意识,也是对单元目标语言再理解、再巩固的过程。学生从另外的角度反思自己习作中的语言运用,强化语用意识和语言运用能力。教师在学生批阅完后,可再作进一步检查。这属于指导性主题写作。通过教师不同程度的引导和帮助,学生将自己要表达的思想通过一定的逻辑组织后用文字表达出来。

这种主题写作练习可以是独立完成,也可以是小组合作,方式可以灵活多样。指导性主题写作是介于模仿性写作和自由写作之间的过渡性写作,学生在进行大量的模仿性写作练习和指导性写作练习后,才能掌握一定的写作技巧,从而进行自由写作。指导性主题写作可以帮助学生从原始的模仿性单元语料学习过渡到具有创造性的.基础语言运用,提升综合语言运用能力。

六、结束语

随着课程标准对学生写作技巧要求的提高,写作教学的地位越来越重要,每一位教师都在摸索写作教学的可行方法。有些教师认为,写作就是让学生坚持不懈地写;有些教师认为,写作就是要套用各种范例;还有些教师认为,学生必须多背才能写好作文。这些方法都有一定的可行性和效果。提高学生的写作能力必须建立在一定的基础上,如学生的写作兴趣、写作愿望、成就感等。要想满足学生的这些心理需求,教师就必须从挖掘课程资源入手,设计主题写作活动,让学生在轻松活跃的写作氛围中主动运用单元目标语言,同时教师要善于发现学生习作中的闪光点和不足之处,让学生在展现自我的过程中提高英语写作能力。

Displaying Wealth Online

Nowadays, it is not rare to see people displaying their wealth on the Internet. Some post pictures of luxury goods, such as brand clothes and bags, luxurious automobiles or jewelries. Some write about their experiences in which a lot of money is spent.

People have different responses to this phenomenon. Some say that it is people’s right to share their possessions or experiences with others on the Internet, as

long as the things are legal and the experiences real. However, some criticize that the rich people are too arrogant. What’s worse, there are also a few who are not actually rich but put fake photos only to satisfy their vanity.

In my opinion, sharing is a good thing, and it is exactly the spirit of the Internet. But people should make careful choice on what they are sharing. After all,showing off is not very nice, not to mention faking.

老师燕子去了,又在来的时候;杨柳枯了,有再青的时候;桃花谢了,有再开的时候。然而,时间去了,却再也没能复返。

以前,对于我这个一脸稚气的一年级新生而言,同学是陌生的,老师是陌生的,一切都是陌生的;现在,对于我——一个即将毕业的小学生来说,离开母校、与大家分别是那样不舍,内心里只剩下依依不舍。难忘班上同学一张张熟悉的笑脸,难忘一同玩耍的姐妹们,难忘亲爱的母校,更难忘来时的尊尊教诲。难忘,一切都是那样难忘……

对于即将毕业的我来说,小学毕业,无疑将是我人生的第一个转折点。现在,我只祈求时光能不能不要飞逝,让我好好回忆六年小学生生活的点点滴滴。

上学期学校举行的冬季运动会,可能是因为这是我们小学生涯最后一次运动会,大家想让自己大显身手的欲望“更上一层楼”了,更加踊跃的报名。拔河作为人气最旺的项目之一,我当然不会错失良机。

比赛当天,参加把何必三的同学们一个个摩拳擦掌,声势浩大,耀武扬威的走上pk台。呀!我们的对手怎么回事六(5)班呢?oh my god!六(5)班的同学一个个人高马大,而我们班的主力军之一费芳琳同学很不幸得了胆结石,去医院做手术了……怎么办,我们只剩下了体格较为瘦弱的的队员了,我们拼得过他们吗?没办法,我们只能背水一战了,与他们展开“殊死拼搏”。

随着嘹亮的哨音响彻云霄,属于班与六(5)班的啊“战斗”拉开了帷幕。“六(3)班加油!六(3)班加油!”啦啦队员们鼓足了气拼命地呐喊着。我不知是因为听到了啦啦队员的助威,还是怎样,感到热血沸腾,像是得到了某种强大的力量。我拉着绳子,想把绳子朝我所在的地方靠近,两只手被绳子了的火辣辣的疼,为了班级的荣誉,这点疼算什么。我看见绳子上的红布条正一点点的向我们班的“战区”靠近,心中感到无比欣慰,刚准备再加一把劲,谁知六(5)班的同学一下爆发了。第一轮他们赢了。可怜的我们呢,太认真了,大多都摔倒在地上,揉着各自疼痛的身躯,踉踉跄跄地爬起来,准备第二轮比赛。“老虎不发威,你当我是hello kitty”大家的斗志被点燃起来。比赛开始后,各自的能力纷纷展现出来,鼓足了劲拉绳子,呐喊声助威声也是此起彼伏,绳上的红布条似乎也同意乖乖的跟我们“回家”……随着结束哨音吹响,张校长庄重的宣布了这轮比赛的结果:“六(3)班胜利!”“耶!”属于我们的笑声在操场上空飘荡。大家欢笑着,蹦跳着,好似这次比赛铁定就是我们赢一样。可惜,好景不长,我们终究不敌强敌,与六(5)班的较量以失败告终,在年级中排名第四。虽然,我们输了比赛,但我们赢了志气,赢了骨气。

如果说小学生活如一片汪洋,那么这件事就如汪洋中毫不起眼的一滴小水滴,不过正是千千万万个如这样的小水滴,才有了我们绚丽多姿的小学生活。

天下没有不散的筵席。

在操场上,我们一起笑过、哭过、努力过,风雨的洗礼把我们对班级的爱更加赤裸裸的表现了出来,化作丝丝真情洒落在这片肥沃的土地上,直至开花结果、花开花落。

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