善美梅子
Yesterday was my birthday, so some of my classmates sent me presents. Mother prepared a tea party for me. I invited all of them to come and take part in it. The tea party began at half past six. There were cold drinks and refreshments. We ate, talked and laughed. We felt that we were the happiest men in the world. Time passed quickly. In a twinkling, the clock on the wall struck nine. We could not but say Good-bye to one another.
Yesterday is my six-year-old birthday. It is important to me as I can go to primary school after my birthday. It means that I grow up. I got up very early at that day. My mother just smiled at me and said nothing. I felt a little down. But I recovered with excited soon and then I went out to play. Everything in my eyes is so beautiful. When I got home about five o’clock, my mother gave me a surprise. She prepared a party for me and invited all my friends. She also gave a lovely schoolbag to me as my birthday present.
I’m so happy that day.
fengzhenpeng
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my mother’s birthday is in winter. its february 25th.our family was happy. my brother and i went to birthday cake store and bought a big birthday cake for her. my aunt gave flowers to her.
she’s very happy. at night we all went to a five stars restaurant. the food was very good. after dinner we gave the cake to mother. she’s very happy. we said“happy birthday”to my mother.
i love my mother.
我妈妈的生日在冬天。二月25th.our家庭幸福。我和哥哥去了生日蛋糕店，给她买了一个大生日蛋糕。我姑姑给她送花。她很高兴。晚上我们都去了一五星级饭店。食物很好。晚饭后我们把蛋糕给了妈妈。她很高兴。我们对妈妈说“生日快乐”。
我爱我的妈妈。
sanmoyufeng
妈妈的生日(my mother's birthday) my mother’s birthday is in winter. its february 25th.our family was happy. my brother and i went to birthday cake store and bought a big birthday cake for her. my aunt gave flowers to her. she’s very happy. at night we all went to a five stars restaurant. the food was very good. after dinner we gave the cake to mother. she’s very happy. we said “happy birthday” to my mother. i love my mother.
