凹凸威小姐
My mother's birthday is coming soon. In May. I'm going to make a cake for my mother. I'm going to sing a song to him. My family wants to tell him thank you. I'm going to tell him a story.
一一欧巴桑
妈妈的生日(my mother's birthday) my mother’s birthday is in winter. its february 25th.our family was happy. my brother and i went to birthday cake store and bought a big birthday cake for her. my aunt gave flowers to her. she’s very happy. at night we all went to a five stars restaurant. the food was very good. after dinner we gave the cake to mother. she’s very happy. we said “happy birthday” to my mother. i love my mother.
康茂暖通
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my mother’s birthday is in winter. its february 25th.our family was happy. my brother and i went to birthday cake store and bought a big birthday cake for her. my aunt gave flowers to her.
she’s very happy. at night we all went to a five stars restaurant. the food was very good. after dinner we gave the cake to mother. she’s very happy. we said“happy birthday”to my mother.
i love my mother.
我妈妈的生日在冬天。二月25th.our家庭幸福。我和哥哥去了生日蛋糕店，给她买了一个大生日蛋糕。我姑姑给她送花。她很高兴。晚上我们都去了一五星级饭店。食物很好。晚饭后我们把蛋糕给了妈妈。她很高兴。我们对妈妈说“生日快乐”。
我爱我的妈妈。
逍遥黑猫
We think positive thoughts and the world becomes a brighter place. Or we decide who we want to be and become that person. With each passing moment, we are given innumerable opportunities to create change using nothing more than our awareness. In the span of a single second, our lives can change immeasurably because energy moves at a pace more rapid than anything we can consciously fathom. Though we may not at first be sensitive to the vibrational shifts taking place, our choices are ultimately at the heart of these transformations.
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