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英语学习资料:2016年专四作文考前密押:乘客可以在地铁上吃喝吗?2016年专四作文考前密押:乘客可以在地铁上吃喝吗?2016年4月23日专四开考,小编特为考生准备了10篇考前密押新题型作文,这是目前市面上唯一的新题型押题作文,希望助广大考生一臂之力。上班族早上奔赴工作地,往往没有时间解决早餐,这个时候是在地铁上吃东西还是忍受着饥肠辘辘也要维护秩序呢?押题4乘客可以在地铁上吃喝吗?题目要求:Recentlyinmanycities,suchasShanghai,NanjingandWuhan,passengersarenotallowedtoeatordrinkonsubways,andviolatorsshallbefined.Shouldfoodanddrinksbepermittedonsubways?ThedebatehasbeenraginginChinaforalongtime.Governmentsandpassengersshowdifferentattitudes.Readcarefullytheopinionsfrombothsidesandwriteyourresponseinabout200words,inwhichyoushouldfirstsummarizebrieflytheopinionsfrombothsidesandgiveyourviewsontheissue.Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,contentsufficiency,organizationandlanguagequality.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.YESAccordingtothelawsandregulations,itemsthatposethreatstothesecurityofpassengerscannotbetakentothesubway.However,foodanddrinkswilldonoharmtothepassengers’safety,andthereforeshouldnotbeforbidden.Besides,itiseverycitizen’srighttoeatanddrinkduringpublictransportation.Thisrightshouldnotbedeprivedofbythegovernment.Whenpassengershavetotravelonsubwaysfornearlyonehour,itisnecessaryforthemtoeatsomesnacksordrinksomewater.Iffoodanddrinksareforbidden,itwillcauseinconveniencetosomeelderlypassengersandchildren.Inaddition,manyyoungpeoplehavetoeattheirbreakfastonthesubwaywhentheygotoworkinthemorninginordertosavetime.Thenewregulationwillalsoaffecttheirnormallifeandwork.NOItiseverycitizen’sresponsibilitytobuildacleanandhealthypublicenvironment.Somepassengersbringfoodanddrinkstothesubway,andleavelittereverywhere.Thisinappropriatebehaviormakesthesubwaylookmessyanduntidy.Forcitizensandtouristswhotravelonthesubway,theywillinevitablyhaveaterribleimpressionofthiscity.Thesubwayisarelativelyclosedspace,andthereforeanyunpleasantsmellcaneasilyspreadinsidethesubwayandcauseunfortablefeelingsamongpassengers.Somefoodanddrinks,suchasthesteamedbunsorsomeothertraditionalChinesebreakfast,oftencarrystrongsmell.Althoughforpeoplewhoareeatinganddrinking,itisofnoharm,forothers,theunpleasantsmellmaymakethemfeelsick.审题思路:本题讨论最近多地出台的地铁上不允许吃东西的政策。在具体行文方面,考生应首先简要概述正反方观点。然后阐述自己的观点:不鼓励在地铁上吃东西,政府可以呼吁大家养成好的行为习惯,但是,吃东西是大家的权利,不能强制性地被剥夺。最后总结全文。高分范文:ShouldPassengersEatandDrinkonSubways?Inrecentyears,eatinganddrinkingonsubwayshasbeenfoundmoreandmoremon,whichhastriggeredmanyproblems.Thus,somecitiesforbidpassengersdoingthisandviolatorswillbefined.Alongwiththisnewregulationesaragingdebatewheretwooppositeattitudeshavebeenshown.Somebelievethateatinganddrinkingdoesn’thavedirectrelationtothesafetyofthesubwayoperationanddoesnotviolateanylawsandregulations.Otherswanttocurbthisbehaviorsoastomakethepublicenvironmentcleanandtidy.AsfarasIamconcerned,eatinganddrinkingonthesubwayisindeednotaproperbehavior,butitisalsonotreasonabletodeprivecitizensofthatright.Ontheonehand,eatinganddrinkingonthesubwayshouldbediscouraged.Thegovernmentshouldattachmoreimportancetoeducatingcitizensandappealforcultivatedandeco-friendlybehavioronpublictransportation.Announcementandposterscouldbeusedtoencouragepeopletocreateabetterenvironment.Ontheotherhand,itiseverycitizen’slegalrighttoeatandnoonecandeprivethemofthat.Withregardtothepregnant,theelderly,thesickandtheweak,thegovernmentcanallocatespecialroomforthemtoeatanddrinkinsidethesubway.Inconclusion,thebehaviorofeatinganddrinkingonsubwaysshouldbediscouraged,buttherightofcertainpeopleshouldbeprotected.
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can afford it. It doesn’t need any oil, and it can’t cause the polusion. All of these are the good needs compared to the car.In the future, bicycle will be widely used. And it will be in good demand. People will produce much more modern bicycles.Score: 14Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people -- man and woman, old and young -- ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”.注:1. 第一句总写,第二句和第三句分写,最后总写。2. During the rush hour 分词结构开头。3. 破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride. Second, riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents.注:1. Compared with cars 分词结构开头。2. be superior to/ be inferior to 优于/ 低于3. thirst, second, third 英语语言有层次感,信号词4. cheap 便宜,最好用inexpensive5. be good for health 对健康有好处(万能理由)6. Moreover 表示递进In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Since China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions. It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time.注:promising 有前途的 a promising young manScore: 11There millions of bicycles in today’s China. Bicycles are very important means of transport in people’s daily lives. Because to ride a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the rider’s strength, bicycles are popular all over the world, especially in China.注:第一句应该用there be结构Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper. It is more suitable for China as a developing country. And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has. On the contrary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car.I think the population of China’s bicycle will be kept for the long run. Because it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that it’s quality will be improvedI、对比观点选择题:1.有人认为……; 2.另外一些人认为……; 3.谈谈你的观点和看法。(最好写成4段)
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can afford it. It doesn’t need any oil, and it can’t cause the polusion. All of these are the good needs compared to the car. In the future, bicycle will be widely used. And it will be in good demand. People will produce much more modern bicycles.Score: 14Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people -- man and woman, old and young -- ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”.注:1. 第一句总写,第二句和第三句分写,最后总写。 2. During the rush hour 分词结构开头。 3. 破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride. Second, riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents.注:1. Compared with cars 分词结构开头。 2. be superior to/ be inferior to 优于/ 低于 3. thirst, second, third 英语语言有层次感,信号词 4. cheap 便宜,最好用inexpensive 5. be good for health 对健康有好处(万能理由) 6. Moreover 表示递进In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Since China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions. It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time.注:promising 有前途的 a promising young manScore: 11 There millions of bicycles in today’s China. Bicycles are very important means of transport in people’s daily lives. Because to ride a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the rider’s strength, bicycles are popular all over the world, especially in China.注:第一句应该用there be结构Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper. It is more suitable for China as a developing country. And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has. On the contrary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car.I think the population of China’s bicycle will be kept for the long run. Because it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that it’s quality will be improvedI、对比观点选择题:1.有人认为……; 2.另外一些人认为……; 3.谈谈你的观点和看法。(最好写成4段)