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Success has been an important motivation in the progress of human work. There is no doubt that success can encourage us to work harder. As a matter of fact ,the consequence of success can bring faith.in our mind .But what qualities contribute to be successful in work ?However,most people are confused about it. I hold the opinion that honesty plays an important role in it..For example when we are students ,our teacher always tell us never to cheat in any exams even if you can not pass the exam. What matters most is whether you are an honest and reliable man.As a matter of fact, a leader always thinks highly of those people who are honest. What is more., honesty dramatically narrow the gap between people, which is impossible happening to dishonest people. On the contrary,being dishonest does do great harm not only to others but also to yourself. Take the case of fake milk powder for example.The reason why so many babies get sicks there is that all of them drink the fake milk,which contains harmful substances that badly affected their health. To our great relief ,the producers got accused and punished for all the serious consequences in the end..你自己对照一下，按原文意思更改。不当之处，请谅解！能力有限。

For an interviwee,during the interview,he/she can get the chances to show himself/herself to get the job that he want.That is first step towards success of person in the society.Besides,interview can broaden their horizons and enrich their mind or even change their life.(再丰富两句关于面试给面试者带来的好处) In addition, interview can bring the interviwee a good opportunity to know more about the company that he/she is interested in, and also can let the interview know more about him/her. On the other hand,The advantages for an interviewer are,first of all,he/she may have a chance to choose some talents by interview.In addition,interview is a good manner for getting the variety of information about interviewee.such as experiences,education or hobby.At the same time,(再丰富两句关于面试给面试方带来的好处).the interviewers have multiple considerations based on the what interviewee can bring on the table since it is face to face interview so that interviewers have , at least, the first image of the interviwee. On this word,a job interview is a bridge to link interviewees to interwiewers.（补充“面试提供了双方沟通了解的一次机会，给双方都带来了好处，是一种互利的活动”的英译）a job interview that brings benefits for both interviewer and interviewee, is a good chance to communicate each other. It is a Mutually beneficial relationship between them.