静静的娇儿
年北京卷第一节：情景作文某学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表2中任何一个数据中反映的情况写出你的一个看法。词数不少于60。生词：图表chart 第二节开放作文（满分15分）请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。Xiao Ming tells you that he had 100 yuan yesterday morning, which he put into the pocket of his jacket. He spent 40 yuan yesterday afternoon. But now when he reaches into the pocket of his jacket, he finds only 10 yuan. 范文：第一节：He is wondering what has happened to the rest of the money. As his friend, you suggest to him three or four differ ent possibilities concerning the missing money. Chart 1 shows the daily average amount of time the students of the school spend on different after-class activities. The students put the most time－93 minutes－into their homework, and next in line is watching TV, which takes up 46 minutes. They put in about the same amount of time listening to music and working on the computer, 34 minutes and 30 minutes each. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework. As is shown on Chart 2, only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities. I think the school should encourage the students to do more exercise after class. This way, they may be healthier and more energetic. 第二节：Maybe you forgot you had spent the money on something else yesterday afternoon. It’s also possible a pickpocket stole your money while you were shopping. Or maybe you lost it on your way home. And one last possibility is you haven’t lost it at all－You put on a different jacket this morning, and you happened to leave 10 yuan in the jacket earlier. So the missing money still must be in the other jacket, the one you were wearing yesterday! 2005年北京卷第一节：情景作文美国中学生Jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。2．词数不少于60。Dear Jeff, I’m Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing. Best wishes, Li Hua 第二节开放作文（15分）请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。In your English class, the teacher shows this picture of a little boy looking into a mirror, and asks the class to discuss it. Your classmates have different understandings. Look at the picture carefully and tell the class how you understand the picture. Write what you would say on the next page. 范文：第一节：Dear Jeff, I’m Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing. While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun. If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience. Best wishes, Li Hua 第二节We can see in the picture a little boy standing in front of a mirror. He’s letting his imagination fly. What he sees in the mirror is not his physical self but what he will be like in twenty years. Although he is small and short now, he believes he will grow up to be a tall and strong young man like Yao Ming, who he admires. I think this picture tries to tell us that we should always look into the future with hope and confidence.
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在日常生活或是工作学习中，许多人都写过作文吧，作文是经过人的思想考虑和语言组织，通过文字来表达一个主题意义的记叙方法。作文的注意事项有许多，你确定会写吗？下面是我收集整理的高三英语作文，欢迎大家借鉴与参考，希望对大家有所帮助。
I like reading in my free time. I've read all kinds of books which are written by many famous writers from all over the world. But I like a Chinese writer best. His name is Xu Zimo.
Xu Zimo was born in a big family. His parents were good at writing and his father taught little Xu by himself. When Xu Zimo was very young, he was interested in reading. Fables, stories or novels were his favorites and he often nearly forgot eating and sleeping.
When Xu was about six years old, he began to write some short stories. He was always practising writing and he did better and better. But he still kept on reading, because he always believed that “Reading makes a full man, a ready man and an exact man.”
When he grew up, his life dream came true. He became a world-famous writer. Not only Chinese but also people from other countries worshiped Xu Zimo. His writing was enjoyed by all the people. Everybody thought that Xu's works were so nice and great. From his writing, people can understand a lot. I have learnt that if someone wants to be a great person, he must work hard!
Now, let's enjoy one of Xu's verses:
On Leaving Cambridge Again Quietly I leave, Just as I quietly e, I quietly wave, Saying goodbye to the bright clouds of the western sky.
What is the most important thing in the world? I think it is health.
You can take away our money, house, car, or even our clothes and we can survive. But if our health was taken away, we would surely die. That is why we always try to eat in a healthy way and exercise regularly.
In order to eat healthily, I usually avoid eating food high in fat, like French fries or cookies. I also eat little meat. I eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit which are full of vitamins.
Taking exercise every day helps us build a strong body. Regular exercise is an important part of keeping me healthy.
What＇s more, I think friends are an important part of one＇s health. Many studies show that people with a wide range of social contacts get sick less than those who don＇t. I always feel better when I am with friends than when I am alone. When I am with my friends, I always laugh. Laughing is also an important part of health. I like to laugh with my friends.
By eating properly and exercising regularly, I can keep my body at a proper weight and keep healthy. By spending time with my friends, I can keep my mind as well as my body happy. these things sound easy to do, but not many people can manage them. I think a strong will is necessary if we want to keep healthy.
What is the most important thing in the world? I think it is health.
You can take away our money, house, car, or even our clothes and we can survive. But if our health was taken away, we would surely die. That is why we always try to eat in a healthy way and exercise regularly.
In order to eat healthily, I usually avoid eating food high in fat, like French fries or cookies. I also eat little meat. I eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit which are full of vitamins.
Taking exercise every day helps us build a strong body. Regular exercise is an important part of keeping me healthy.
What's more, I think friends are an important part of one's health. Many studies show that people with a wide range of social contacts get sick less than those who don't. I always feel better when I am with friends than when I am alone. When I am with my friends, I always laugh. Laughing is also an important part of health. I like to laugh with my friends.
By eating properly and exercising regularly, I can keep my body at a proper weight and keep healthy. By spending time with my friends, I can keep my mind as well as my body happy. These things sound easy to do, but not many people can manage them. I think a strong will is necessary if we want to keep healthy.
一、试题回顾分析
今年全国卷作文命题思路和前几年相比变化不大，仍然采用是应用文考查形式，列举提纲要点，体现了高考(微博)命题的稳定性。材料如下：
假如你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(learningcenter)的'帮助。按照学校规定，你需要提前预约。请按下列要点写一封信：
1 本人简介
2 求助内容
3 约定时间
4 你的联系方式(Email: [email protected]， Phone: 1234567)
注意：词数100左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam，
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Look forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
题示材料对写作范围作了较明确限定。但仍给考生留出了一定的发挥空间，有利于考生充分展示自己的英语书面表达能力。
这次英语作文试题采用了以往的书信形式，考生在复习和模拟训练时见过不少，并不陌生，同时题材属于校园生活，要求考试对学习困难进行求助，贴近学生生活，因此总体难度不高。英语作文没有唯一的固定标准答案，只要书写工整、要点齐全、词句准确，就能拿到满意的分数。
二、把握评分标准
高考评分原则及标准是考生平常写作训练的指导原则，在高考进行写作的规范，也是阅卷老师给分的重要依据和标准。
(一)评分原则：
1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。
4、评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
(二)评分标准：
第五档(21-25分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的
覆盖所有内容要点。
应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
journeyjasm
您好，按照前面5个段落的语义，您的第一段落除了主语以外其余的并没有问题。因为续写第一段的 we（指的是这位 special education teacher 和 David，尤其后面强调了 each other，指的是两个人）两个人坐了下来聊天，所以写了（我们）会被判断为（离题），但给他糖果，开始越说越多，突然间流泪，问原因，说没有勇气，然后鼓励（这时又变成了【我】，而不是【我们】）；续写的第二段，主语尽管是 I（这位 special education teacher）但后面写了 with the other runners, 所以使用了（我们再次给他鼓励）应该是没问题的。但（提升了大卫对跑步的兴趣）这里和给出的5个段落和续写第一段落有冲突。David 一直都有兴趣，所以在校内的他积极的参与培训，每一次都跑，尽管是最后一名，但他都跑到了终点，表示 David 缺乏的不是（兴趣），而是（面对校外同学）的勇气。您的续写第一段和第二段没有写到（面对校外同学）所产生的的惧怕，也就表示其中的一个重点没有写到。还有一个就是校内的同学知道 David 的情况，所以从来没有把 David 当做是患有特殊疾病的人；但校外同学并不知道这一点，导致教练问了 David 是否要参加，也把参与与否的权利给了 David 自己决定，而 David 最终刚开始的决定是不参与。这里也是可以发挥的一点，为什么 David 刚开始选择了不参与，他犹豫什么，或是害怕什么。
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