xiaoshu20061
particular 指具有特殊性的细节
detail 指需要独立考虑并与整体信息相关的细节
minutia 指非常小或琐碎的细节
punctilio 指拘泥形式并严格遵守的细节
specific 指需要详细说明的细节
小宝cute
he is very (handsome)他非常...(帅)he has (hazel eyes)他有...(一双淡褐色的眼睛)he got (hazel eyes)他有...(一双淡褐色的眼睛)he has (a round face) with (small eyes)他有...(一张圆脸)和...(小眼睛)以下是我们班同学作文中的片段(都是鬼故事):A swirling black flash was glimpsed through the trees. Black robes and a long hooded cloak, walking steadily towards the bunch of children. They huddled together, filled with the sense of despair. The cloaked figure circled them. A gasp went up as a boy saw a glinting object sliding from the figure’s waist. He continued to trundle relentlessly towards them. Then he stopped. The black cloak swayed in the discomforting, chilling breeze. Then he spoke.The oldest, was on the edge of the pack. “Thwack”. The slimly built boy swayed dramatically. His arms limp and his face drained of blood. Drained of life. The blood trickled down from his mouth to his chin. He fell to the floor, a sharp pinecone needle embedding itself in his glazed, open eye. It was only then they saw the sharp knife stuck in the back of the slim boy’s head. They looked up. They saw them. They were surrounded. No chance of surviving.“What? What do you mean?” I demanded. “What I mean is that I do not want you to suffer.” I didn’t understand, I really didn’t. He said “The reason I don’t want you to go is because they took my soul. My soul and the souls of fifty others on the day of the 7/7 bombings”. I ran, I couldn’t take it any more. I kept on running and I didn’t stop. There seemed to be trains everywhere, moving, derelict, abandoned. I ran faster and faster, jumping and bounding up and over sleepers and old tracks. Then I saw him. Him and the fifty others.“No, nothing…” Suddenly, all the light had gone, except the candle, the candlepower was wavering unruly in the darkness; outside the house, the wind was howling loudly and forcefully, bump into the window, trying to break the window, once…twice…and the third time, the window had been broke, the white curtain was swinging. The wind had come in to the house; it broke the offbeat silence inside.“That person…?” His gaze glued onto the man before him. Then, it was as if a lock had clicked open, his gaze now moved onto the other figure. There, standing next to him was an angelic looking woman. She had waist length wavy, russet coloured hair. Her long dressing gown hung loosely from her body. He tried very hard to remember where he had seen her but was snapped out of his thoughts as he heard another sorrowful, mournful cry.He gaped as he saw him grasping a knife tightly in his grip. His hazel eyes glowed as he forced himself up closer and closer to her. His hand rose higher and higher. The corner of his mouth curled up into a smirk. Her lip body fell onto the ground. Her eyes no longer begged for forgiveness but gazed, dull and lifeless, the scarlet blood-oozing out from the fatal cut on her white neck. The vicar dropped to his knees. A gush of wind blew, sweeping the clouds away, revealing the black, velvet blanket and the silver rimmed moon.Light pierced the gloomy rooms, cutting through the darkness. A bony figure moved beneath the bed sheets in one of the rooms. A skeletal head peeked from under the crimson stained covers, his eyes alive with fear. His legs emerged, cuts covering them. He suddenly ripped the bed sheets off, violently throwing them to the ground. He stood up, his face was distorted from slashes and bruises. He had nothing on except for a pair of ripped jeans.The man nudged him towards the door whilst loosening his grip slightly. He tried to wriggle free but the man had a tight grasp around him. The man angrily kicked the flaking door open, the harsh sunlight blinding them. He violently pushed the boy to the ground and focused on his eyes reading his thoughts. He suddenly looked pleased with himself, as if he had come to a decision. His hand fumbled in his pocket, searching for something.The grey haze covered the silent countryside and a few crickets could be heard chirping, along with the rustling of the parched leaves. Miss Swan was standing under an old oak tree, waiting for her partner at her part time job. She looked to her right but only to see the depressing fog hiding the green landscape. She felt a hand on her shoulder and she swiftly turned her head to meet a pair of brown eyes.Suddenly, she heard a faint sound of heavy breathing coming from the reflected image in the mirror. She peered at the glass saw herself breathing hard, it was so real she felt as though she really did have a difficulty breathing. Her eyes were glued to the mirror and stuck to her reflection. It was growing dark. She heard a bang from down stairs but couldn’t move. She didn’t know what was going on. The mirror was causing her to hallucinate, suffocating her. Suddenly she felt two hands dragging her away from the glass. Mark’s face was pale as he watched Mary struggle to get her breath back.
我是梅干啊
【细节】detailsparticularsminutiaspecifics【例】细节决定成败。The devil will be in the details.希望能帮到你!满意请采纳^_^
juan娟娟123
我即刻伸手折断了蝴蝶的一支翅骨,又将风轮掷在地下,踏扁了。论长幼,论力气,他是都敌不过我的,我当然得到完全的胜利,于是傲然走出,留他绝望地站在小屋里。---鲁迅<风筝> 他已在客厅里,衣服上全是褶皱,我突然地朝他大吼:为什么不脱衣服就睡?!吼完了才愚蠢地意识到,为什么我就忘记了临睡前帮他脱呢?我无比羞愧地转过身去,给他拿了梳子梳头,他顺从地坐下来,任我帮他整理黑硬的短发,又将毛巾浸了水,笨拙僵硬地给他擦脸,刮掉新长出来的胡子。 ----<终于承认你已经老去> 他用两手攀着上面,两脚再向上缩;他肥胖的身子向左微倾,显出努力的样子,这时我看见他的背影,我的泪很快地流下来了。我赶紧拭干了泪。怕他看见,也怕别人看见。我再向外看时,他已抱了朱红的橘子往回走了。过铁道时,他先将桔子散放在地上,自己慢慢爬下,再抱起橘子走。到这边时,我赶紧去搀他。他和我走到车上,将橘子一股脑儿放在我的皮大衣上。于是扑扑衣上的泥土,心里很轻松似的。---<背影> 广场上放风筝的人可多了,有站着放的,坐着放的,还有跑着放的。只见他们个个张口仰视,一手拿着线轴,一手拉着长线,眼睛紧紧地盯着自己放飞的风筝。“铃铃”,下班了。我哥哥马上关上了机床,大步流星地奔到了水在头旁,霎时间,那双沾满油污的“黑手”变白了。他三步并作两步地来到车棚,推出了“飞鸽”,左脚刚一蹬自行车的踏脚板,右大腿就跨过了座垫儿,屁股还没坐稳当,就“呼”地蹬起了车,“飞鸽”冲出厂门扬长而去。1、 如果黑板就是浩淼的大海,那么,老师便是海上的水手。铃声响起那刻,你用教职工鞭作浆,划动那船只般泊在港口的课本 。课桌上,那难题堆放,犹如暗礁一样布列,你手势生动如一只飞翔的鸟,在讲台上挥一条优美弧线——船只穿过……天空飘不来一片云,犹如你亮堂堂的心,一派高远。 2,爷爷长着一副古铜色的脸孔,一双铜铃般的眼睛,尖尖的下巴上,飘着一缕山羊胡须。他高高的个儿,宽宽的肩,别看他已年过古稀,可说起话来,声音像洪钟一样雄浑有力;走起路来“蹬、蹬、蹬”他,连小伙子也追不上呢。 3,爸爸长着浓浓的眉毛,一双炯炯有神的大眼睛总是闪着严厉的目光。可能是因为长期从事脑力劳动的原因,额头上那深深的皱纹和他不到四十岁的年龄很 相称。 4、哥哥的眼睛高度近视,处处离不开眼镜,就像个“睁眼瞎子”一样,只要把他的眼镜摘下来,在我面前他就像绵羊一样服服帖帖。一天下午,哥哥要洗头了。他吩咐我给他拿肥皂换水。我得意地想:哼!我先给你跑跑腿,然后再治你。一会儿,哥哥伸长了脖子,把肥皂沫打得满头满脸都是。我一看时机到了,就悄悄地把哥哥的盆拿走了。哥哥搓完后去洗头,一捧水,捧了个空。他忙去找,可刚一睁眼,肥皂沫就杀得他直流眼泪。他像盲人摸路一样,东摸摸,西摸摸,好容易才摸起了毛巾,把眼一擦,可眼睛还是模糊的,就去找他的眼镜。 5、小毛头长得很小,头只有我的大洋娃娃那么大;脸圆圆的,红红的,像只大苹果。她睡得很甜,两只眼闭得紧紧的,像两条线;两根眉毛像两只弯弯的新月;小嘴巴经常一动一动,好像在吃奶。她浑身被小被子包住,还用绳子扎紧,一动也不动。 6,妹妹今年十岁,读小学三年级。她那红扑扑的脸蛋上,一双水灵灵的大眼睛适着聪明伶俐的神色。乌黑的头发下,两条弯弯的眉毛,像那月牙儿。她那一排雪白的牙齿当中,缺了颗门牙,一笑起来,就成了个豁牙巴,十分逗人喜欢。 7,小菊到今年已经十四岁了,但是她的身体长得不高,手臂依然那么细小,颧骨照旧凸出,十个指头像一束枯竹枝,仿佛一折就会折断似的;因为她十分消瘦,所以看起来她的身体轻飘飘的。小时侯,家里的屋顶上,有一个小阳台,我和哥哥就在阳台上放风筝。阳台上的风很大,风筝拿在手里,只要抖几抖,就会摇头摆脑地飞起来了。这时候,哥哥就喊:“快!放线、放线!”于是我马上就用右手,把缠在纸筒上的线拉出来。哥哥急了:“这么慢!”一下把我手里的纸筒抢过去,一手抓住纸筒的一端,让另一端对着风筝飞的方向。一刹那见,纸筒上的线,就咿咿呀呀地一圈又一圈的飞了出去。仔细一看,风筝飞走了,飞到了里我们几百米的空中,而纸筒上的线,都没了…… 我最喜欢打篮球,今天我又和小伙伴们一起打篮球。开始了,我接过球,一个跨下过了第一个防守队员,又一个变向运球过了第二个,又一个转身过个最后一个防守队员。只见我两腿微曲,好象在找感觉,然后腾空而起,一手抓住球,像一只猛虎,朝蓝筐越去……“进了!!!”随后而来的是本队的欢呼声…… 两段,行吗?回答者: sxtw - 江湖少侠 六级 1-23 13:34母亲说完,立刻又坐了下去,立刻又弯曲了背,立刻又将 头俯在缝纫机上,立刻又陷入了忙碌……回答者:潇洒★永恒 - 试用期 一级 1-23 19:20我即刻伸手折断了蝴蝶的一支翅骨,又将风轮掷在地下,踏扁了。论长幼,论力气,他是都敌不过我的,我当然得到完全的胜利,于是傲然走出,留他绝望地站在小屋里。---鲁迅<风筝> 他已在客厅里,衣服上全是褶皱,我突然地朝他大吼:为什么不脱衣服就睡?!吼完了才愚蠢地意识到,为什么我就忘记了临睡前帮他脱呢?我无比羞愧地转过身去,给他拿了梳子梳头,他顺从地坐下来,任我帮他整理黑硬的短发,又将毛巾浸了水,笨拙僵硬地给他擦脸,刮掉新长出来的胡子。 ----<终于承认你已经老去> 他用两手攀着上面,两脚再向上缩;他肥胖的身子向左微倾,显出努力的样子,这时我看见他的背影,我的泪很快地流下来了。我赶紧拭干了泪。怕他看见,也怕别人看见。我再向外看时,他已抱了朱红的橘子往回走了。过铁道时,他先将桔子散放在地上,自己慢慢爬下,再抱起橘子走。到这边时,我赶紧去搀他。他和我走到车上,将橘子一股脑儿放在我的皮大衣上。于是扑扑衣上的泥土,心里很轻松似的。---<背影> 广场上放风筝的人可多了,有站着放的,坐着放的,还有跑着放的。只见他们个个张口仰视,一手拿着线轴,一手拉着长线,眼睛紧紧地盯着自己放飞的风筝。 1、 如果黑板就是浩淼的大海,那么,老师便是海上的水手。铃声响起那刻,你用教职工鞭作浆,划动那船只般泊在港口的课本 。课桌上,那难题堆放,犹如暗礁一样布列,你手势生动如一只飞翔的鸟,在讲台上挥一条优美弧线——船只穿过……天空飘不来一片云,犹如你亮堂堂的心,一派高远。 2,爷爷长着一副古铜色的脸孔,一双铜铃般的眼睛,尖尖的下巴上,飘着一缕山羊胡须。他高高的个儿,宽宽的肩,别看他已年过古稀,可说起话来,声音像洪钟一样雄浑有力;走起路来“蹬、蹬、蹬”他,连小伙子也追不上呢。 3,爸爸长着浓浓的眉毛,一双炯炯有神的大眼睛总是闪着严厉的目光。可能是因为长期从事脑力劳动的原因,额头上那深深的皱纹和他不到四十岁的年龄很 相称。 4、哥哥的眼睛高度近视,处处离不开眼镜,就像个“睁眼瞎子”一样,只要把他的眼镜摘下来,在我面前他就像绵羊一样服服帖帖。一天下午,哥哥要洗头了。他吩咐我给他拿肥皂换水。我得意地想:哼!我先给你跑跑腿,然后再治你。一会儿,哥哥伸长了脖子,把肥皂沫打得满头满脸都是。我一看时机到了,就悄悄地把哥哥的盆拿走了。哥哥搓完后去洗头,一捧水,捧了个空。他忙去找,可刚一睁眼,肥皂沫就杀得他直流眼泪。他像盲人摸路一样,东摸摸,西摸摸,好容易才摸起了毛巾,把眼一擦,可眼睛还是模糊的,就去找他的眼镜。 5、小毛头长得很小,头只有我的大洋娃娃那么大;脸圆圆的,红红的,像只大苹果。她睡得很甜,两只眼闭得紧紧的,像两条线;两根眉毛像两只弯弯的新月;小嘴巴经常一动一动,好像在吃奶。她浑身被小被子包住,还用绳子扎紧,一动也不动。 6,妹妹今年十岁,读小学三年级。她那红扑扑的脸蛋上,一双水灵灵的大眼睛适着聪明伶俐的神色。乌黑的头发下,两条弯弯的眉毛,像那月牙儿。她那一排雪白的牙齿当中,缺了颗门牙,一笑起来,就成了个豁牙巴,十分逗人喜欢。 7,小菊到今年已经十四岁了,但是她的身体长得不高,手臂依然那么细小,颧骨照旧凸出,十个指头像一束枯竹枝,仿佛一折就会折断似的;因为她十分消瘦,所以看起来她的身体轻飘飘的。 小时侯,家里的屋顶上,有一个小阳台,我和哥哥就在阳台上放风筝。阳台上的风很大,风筝拿在手里,只要抖几抖,就会摇头摆脑地飞起来了。这时候,哥哥就喊:“快!放线、放线!”于是我马上就用右手,把缠在纸筒上的线拉出来。哥哥急了:“这么慢!”一下把我手里的纸筒抢过去,一手抓住纸筒的一端,让另一端对着风筝飞的方向。一刹那见,纸筒上的线,就咿咿呀呀地一圈又一圈的飞了出去。仔细一看,风筝飞走了,飞到了里我们几百米的空中,而纸筒上的线,都没了…… 我最喜欢打篮球,今天我又和小伙伴们一起打篮球。开始了,我接过球,一个跨下过了第一个防守队员,又一个变向运球过了第二个,又一个转身过个最后一个防守队员。只见我两腿微曲,好象在找感觉,然后腾空而起,一手抓住球,像一只猛虎,朝蓝筐越去……“进了!!!”随后而来的是本队的欢呼声……一弯姗姗来迟的月儿颤巍巍地爬上空中,顽皮地朝着人们微笑着,溶溶的月光披在两位重归于好的朋友身上。此刻,他们肩并着肩,手挽着手,在铺满月色的沙滩上漫步。杨悦在讲着题,玲玲挺得是那么认真,小河的水为她们伴奏,奏成一曲和谐的“夜间小曲”,在空旷的夜空飘荡,她们后面的沙滩上,留下两行整齐均称的脚印,也留下了她们走过的路…… 行不行啊!硪打了好久啊!
花花only
I have a best friend.Her name is jane .she is outgoing,so she has many friends.but i am very shy.Jane always says "Don't be shy!".but I still keep it .She is good at English ,but my English is not good.So she ofen hlep me with my English!I want to say "thanks"to her.I think she is a very good girl.
浮生若梦圈
She is a beautiful girl with moist eyes always talking,cherry-lips often cling,and rosy checks so inviting.老师给讲的,只有这个还能发出来吧。with 后面是描述怎么漂亮就可以算细节了
yirendian10
:矮的short 苗条的slim slender 高挑的tall 皮包骨头的 skinny 不高不矮的medium height 苗条的slim 胖的overweight 丰满的plump 短粗的 short and fat • diminutive • 娇小的(形容女子) • graceful /elegant • 优雅的 (用于形容女性) • 虎背熊腰 (专指男性) • tubby(矮胖的) • muscular(强壮的) 脸型 脸型:He has get a baby /round/ slim face瓜子脸oval face 方脸square face 前额:His forehead is high/ broad/rounded/ low/ flat/ narrow/ perfect. 眼睛:Her eyes are big/ bright/ dark/ warm/ attractive/ intelligent. 鼻子:He has a snub/ sharp/ straight/ hooked nose and a square chin. 脸部其他特征:beard下巴上的胡子(络腮胡), moustache 上唇的胡子, clean-shaven胡子刮得很干净的。Goatee山羊胡 眼镜:glasses,spectacles, lens. 浓眉thick eyebrows 双眼皮double eyelids 酒窝:dimple, 红润饱满的嘴唇red and full lips 青春痘acne 胎记birthmark 脸上长痣mole皱纹wrinkle 描述头发 直发straight 板寸头 military cut 波浪卷发wavy 发际线receding hairling 卷发curly ['kə:li] 麻花辫 braided hair 金黄色blond 圆发髻hair in a bun 浅棕色light brown 直发 straight hair 深棕色dark brown 灰发 grey hair 黑色black 棕发brown hair 一个马尾辫ponytails 头发浓密 thick hair 秃发bald [bɔ:ld] 刘海bangs 齐肩的头发shoulder-length hair 描述年龄 approach old age/middle age/the age of boyhood 年近老年/中年/少年 be over age/under age 超龄/未成年 boys of preschool age/teen age 学龄前/十几岁的男孩
PaperwizPx
细节 n. particulars, minutiae, detail 细小的环节或情节) details; particulars; specific; minutia; minutiae:讨论细节问题 discuss (go into) the details (particulars)讨论计划的细节 discuss the details of a plan; go into the particulars of a plan通过细节描写来表现人物性格 portray a character through the description of detail任何细节不得遗漏。 Not a single detail is to be omitted.{纺} snicks
加菲猫爱烤鸭
写作思路:运用细节描写,把男生的外貌描绘出来。
1、Young people sitting under the blooming cherry trees, hair black jade like light luster, neck skin as delicate as porcelain.
少年坐在盛开的樱花树下,头发黑玉般有淡淡的光泽,脖颈处的肌肤细致如美瓷。
2、Bright and white face, with clear edges and corners of cold Jun; dark deep eyes, pan charming color; that thick eyebrows, high nose, beautiful lip shape, all of which publicize the noble and elegant.
光洁白皙的脸庞,透着棱角分明的冷俊;乌黑深邃的眼眸,泛着迷人的色泽;那浓密的眉,高挺的鼻,绝美的唇形,无一不在张扬着高贵与优雅。
3、 With black and vertical hair, slanting sword eyebrows, slender and sharp black eyes, thin and light lips, sharp and angular outline, tall and slender but not rough figure, just like an eagle in the night, cold and aloof, but full of vigor and pressure, isolated and independent, it radiates the strength of being proud of the world.
黑亮垂直的发,斜飞的英挺剑眉,细长蕴藏着锐利的黑眸,削薄轻抿的唇,棱角分明的轮廓,修长高大却不粗犷的身材,宛若黑夜中的鹰,冷傲孤清却又盛气逼人,孑然独立间散发的是傲视天地的强势。
4、A head of dark thick hair, a pair of sword eyebrows is a pair of slender peach blossom eyes, full of amorous, let a person accidentally will fall into. The nose is tall and straight, and the red lips are thick and thin. At this time, the smile is dazzling.
一头乌黑茂密的头发,一双剑眉下却是一对细长的桃花眼,充满了多情,让人一不小心就会沦陷进去。高挺的鼻子,厚薄适中的红唇这时却漾着另人目眩的笑容。
5、A bad smile, even two thick eyebrows are also soft ripples, as if always with a smile, curved, like a bright first quarter moon in the night sky. The white skin sets off the light peach red lips, beautiful and prominent facial features, perfect face shape, especially the dazzling diamond earrings in his left ear, which adds a trace of unruly to his handsome sunshine.
一张坏坏的笑脸,连两道浓浓的眉毛也泛起柔柔的涟漪,好像一直都带着笑意,弯弯的,像是夜空里皎洁的上弦月。白皙的皮肤衬托着淡淡桃红色的嘴唇,俊美突出的五官,完美的脸型,特别是左耳闪着炫目光亮的钻石耳钉,给他的阳光帅气中加入了一丝不羁。