英文essay例子

1， 在essay 里，你不能用第一人称，比如：I，me，mine，my(我）这些你要是一用，就是扣分。 2， we（我们）这只有在指很大一个数不清的集体的时候可以用，比如 ：our humans 我们人类，这样的可以用。要是只是指你和你朋友我们，那样的话不行。3， essay里一定不能有私人用语，比如 stuff 东西，这种说法感觉太私人。4， essay 里的语句一定要很肯定，不能含糊，比如：she is like friendly towards him. 她好像对他很友好。 句子用了 ‘好像’，这就是不肯定。5，essay里的段落一定要有顺序，每个段落里都要先有开头句topic sentence（一个话题），然后支撑句 support sentence， 结合句 linking sentence，总结局 conclusion6，段落里一定要赞成主题的题目，不能跑题7，essay 里不能写缩写字，比如 cause，because 的缩写，不能有

新能源汽车中，发展劲头最强的是欧洲

to Achieve My Vehicle Dream in Europe Vehicles are everywhere.Vehicles can be of different kinds,doing different jobs.A car can take us where we want to go,A truck can carry materials from one place to another.Believe or not,vehicles have been part of our daily life.I like them very much. When I was young,seeing vehicles running on the road,I felt very curious.How could they run?What drove them?The question was in mind as I grew up.I had a dream that I would work in the field related to vehilces when I grow up.I would work out all the problems on vehicles and try my best to improve them so as to make them serve the people better.I would devote myself to the vehicle cause. Europe,which owns the biggest vehicle industry of the world,is an ideal place to achieve my dream.That's why I would like to go there.

写个人陈述需要新意，但是也要和该专业发展挂钩。下面是我的观点，如果你有兴趣，给我留言，我再写。免得写了不对你的胃口，浪费表情。昨天花了大半个小时给一个匿名的人写了四篇文章，然后他居然把题目关了，我气死。你想去欧洲学这个专业是结合几方面分析的结果。（1）可以将你从小对汽车模型、制作等感兴趣，对汽车工业的发展也能如数家珍。但是现在你对汽车感兴趣更因为你对新能源的汽车制造和生产感兴趣。（2）现在的电力汽车很受欢迎，美国欧洲等国都给予了很好的tax policy 退税优惠。但是在众多的新能源汽车中，发展劲头最强的是欧洲。然后我会给你一些例子。（3）去欧洲学汽车也因为亚欧离得近，你不仅想学这个专业，还想掌握市场的走向。你在考虑修商学为第二专业。blablabla...要新颖。要重点突出。抛砖引玉吧。