阳光明媚1618
关于旅行的英语作文5句话：
I go to a interesting place，there are lots of peopel.I see many beautiful flowers,and there are many animals.I see some tigers,they are very scary.I also see two elephints,they are petty heavy and big.
译文：我去了一个有趣的地方，那里有很多人。我看到许多美丽的花，那里还有许多动物。我看到一些老虎，它们非常可怕。我还看到两只大象，它们又小又重又大。
写英语作文的注意事项
1、要增加闪光点，但是请注意：就算考生在作文中设置了语言亮点，也并不意味着一定会被“伯乐”发掘。阅卷速度很快，阅卷老师根本没时间去"解构"过于复杂的倒装句、从句套从句。但是语法、拼写错误太多，会使一切语言点失效。没有人会相信错误连篇的人有能力使用高难句型。
2、视觉评判：干净整洁、字迹漂亮。养成良好的习惯。写字太难看、卷面混乱会使一切语言亮点失效。没有人会相信几乎从不写英文字的人有能力设置英语的语言亮点。
3、不要直接套用万能模板。考研作文阅卷，事实上是一个反模板化的过程。阅卷人读了很多毫无个性、高度雷同的模板作文，脑子里会形成一中反模板化的情结：生搬硬套的模板句，哪怕包装得再华丽，也不会多看一眼；原创而切题的句子，哪怕朴实一点，也能够令考官感动。
qianmian1015
正文：
This month, I will travel to Changsha and Zhangjiajie with my two friends, which is supposed to be a seven-day trip. We will set out on 10th, June.
这个月，我要和我的两个朋友一起去长沙和张家界旅行，为期7天左右。我们会在6月10日出发。
Now, we have prepared many things, snacks and medicines included. Firstly, we will go to Changsha by plane. The tickets are cheap, so it’s a good choice to save time.
现在，我们已经准备了许多东西，包括零食和药品。首先，我们会坐飞机去长沙，机票很便宜，所以这是节约在路上时间的好选择。
We will stay there for two days. The main goal staying there is to enjoy the delicious food in Changsha. My friend has prepared a map of must-tries and I believe they must be good. Then we will go to Zhangjiajie by train. It’s not so far from Changsha, taking about five hours to get there.
我们会在长沙待两天，主要目的是品尝长沙美食。我的朋友准备了长沙美食地图，我想那必定很诱人。接着，我们会坐火车前往张家界。张家界离长沙不太远，只需5个小时的车程。
技巧：
1、 文字要连贯。 除了要用 however, and 等连词外,遇到并列的事情时,要用“in the first place?? in the second place?? the last but not least important??”这样的连接词。否则 不得分!用“in the first place”代替“firstly”可增加很多字数。
2、 采用高级的句式。 如主语+插入语+谓语+宾语:Nanning, my hometown, is??. Native to China, Panda is lovely. 又如:Can I send you the money via web? Since my university, which is located in Nanning, is far away from the down town area, and I’m fully occupied by studies. (英国人都恨不得把所有的信息在一句话里说完。
不象中国人,细言慢语,层层展开。所以翻译时,一句英语可以翻成四句汉语。) 特别是在文章开头第一段,如果用上定语从句或状语等,就拿高分了。
皇冠家具厂
Last weekend , I visited the Great Wall with my parents . we started early in the morning and went there by car . When we got there , seeing the Great Wall in front of us ,had a sense of pride .then we began to mount the Great Wall , enjoying the warm sunshine and beautiful scenery all the way .when we reached the top of it ,I was deeply moved by what the ancient people had done . we were all impressed by the splendid view .meanwhile , I remembered an old saying "one who has never been to the Great wall is not a true man ".
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