写的还清楚。但考虑这可能是个报告类的东东，稍稍地习惯少完善了一下。欢迎指正。IN CONCLUSION， despite the fact that Kraft IMPROVED the takeover bid， with more than 3 dollor as well as GIVING AWAY 26 new Kraft share for each Cadbury share， Cadbury shareholders should DECLINE the takeover GIVEN its exellent performance in In fact， the value of Cadbury had increased SINCE the first time Kraft announced a takeover Overall， CONSIDERING the result that Cadbury had a strong growth of revenue in the fourth quarter of 2009， the shareholders should insist on rejecting the adverse
to sum up， despite the fact that Kraft （enhanced） the takeover bid， with more than 3 （dollors） as well as 26 new Kraft (shared) for each Cadbury share， Cadbury shareholders should （have refused） the takeover， because of its exellent performance in In fact， the value of Cadbury (/) increased (/) the first time Kraft announced a takeover Overall， through the result that Cadbury had a strong growth of revenue in the fourth quarter of 2009， the shareholders should insist on rejecting the adverse takeover
