总的来说选题很有针对性，也有意义，写的也不错。我想我稍微改一改吧。文里有很多错的地方。评起来不如你把改过的和原文对一下，可能收获更大。 Mobile Phones in the Class With the quick development of science and technology， more and more people become relying on mobile As the picture shows， mobile phones even enter the Some teachers allow students to use them to take notes or copy some important For this，I can hardly say yes or no， since everything has two From my own perspective， I think the good thing is that students can make a good use the mobile phones in their study as a tool to take notes ， search for information for The bad thing is that inevitably mobiles phones are often used by students to do something else like playing games rather than taking notes or something useful for Besides， the frequent use of mibile phones in class will help students develope a kind of laziness and dependence，which will do harms not only in students' indepentent thinking but the operational Thus， personally I think we should not be shocked by the mobile phones in the classroom What we should do is to help students to have a right attitude to use mobile phones like using computers in the classroom
