授人以鱼不如授人以渔对于作文,我说的最多的就是:不走寻常路!你不要以为在网上下载那些所谓的优秀作文,拿来背背,你就成为高手了,其实大错特错!因为我看了之后也觉得一般,甚至有些拙劣,哗众取宠的味道,比如有的所谓优秀作文竟然还用什么be good at ,importance,very much,depend on,in my opinion ,completely 这样低等的写作词汇,说它低等,那是因为这些词汇已经广为人知,阅卷老师已经看的麻木不仁了!要写出高人一等的作文,我觉得并不难,只要你有一定的语法基础和一定量的写作词汇(越高级越好),写作句型,就足可以应对常规的高考,四六级考试……(我记得高中25分满分的作文我可以保持在21-23这个级别,四六级的作文都是110多分)首先是语法,在你的语法达到一定层次之后,你就可以追求更多的变化了,比如,用虚拟语气句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we should……,又如用倒装句代替常见的平铺直叙等,这样可以增加你的语法亮点,让已经有些麻木一直想睡觉的阅卷老师眼睛一亮,在你的试卷上多扫射一番!其次,是词汇,我觉得,在你的语法达到基本不会出错的程度上,作文便应该以词汇取胜,因为在这个层次上,大家的语法都差不多,没什么变化,唯一有变化的就是你的词汇!给你打个比方吧,很多想到“许多”就用many,但是你别忘了many a ;handsome;massive,innumerable,a multitude of ;很多人想到“专家”就写expert,但很少人会想到specialist,很多人在想到“擅长”这词,就写be good at ,却不知还有更高级的表达法:be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才,就体现在这些细微的差别上!再次,是怎么将文章润色,从而使你的文章大放异彩!!关于这方面,我觉得我自己使用最多的,也是我自创的------叫做“添油加醋”,包括如下几个方面:尽可能地在形容词前使用副词,在介词短语中加入适当的形容词和副词,在过去分词前加入副词,在名词之前尽可能多用形容词……,总之就是尽可能地使用形容词和副词。我觉得这样做有一个好处,那就是使原本干巴巴的句子变得血肉丰满,比如:The regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!In my opinion,the driver’s carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成3For my part,the driver‘s negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously!………………………………………………………………………………………………………………最后,我建议你,平时读报,或者做题的时候,发现有好的句子好的词汇,你要抄下来,长期下来,你的作文会有提高的,需要说明的是,这个提高过程可能很缓慢,但是最后能收到很好的效果,以前25分的作文我都能保证在21-23这个级别,靠的就是对语法的熟练掌握和积累了许多较高级的词汇,句型,句子。
一、 1/Currently, there is an inevitable and undeniable fact that …… At present, it is inevitable and undeniable that … 2/Along with the advance of the society (science and technology), people are attaching much importance to …… 3/Recently, the phenomenon that …… has aroused wide public concern 4/Based on the discussion above, it is easy for us to draw the conclusion that… 二、用于文章结尾的句型: 1) From what has been discussed above/taking into account all these factors, we may safely arrive at/draw/come to/reach the conclusion that 2) It is high time that we put considerable/great/special emphasis on 3) There is no immediate solution to the problem , might be helpful/ 4) No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of , but the general awareness of the necessity/importance might be the first step on the right 5) There is little doubt/denying that 6) It is, therefore, obvious/evident that the task quire immediate 7) In conclusion, 8) Personally, I prefer 9) In short, should learn ; Only in this way can the most difficult problems be solved 10) As far as I am concerned, I agree with the opinion 三、常用谚语 (在议论文中): 1) As a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides” 2) As a proverb says, “Everything has two sides” On the one hand, physical exercise is good for your On the other hand, if you dont deal with it properly, it will do harm to your So we should look at the matter from two 3) As a proverb says, “Where there is a will there is a ” (有志者事竟成) 4) As a popular saying goes, “A man is known by the company he ”(观其交友,知其为人) 5) As is known to all, “No pains, no gains”(没有苦,就没有甜) 四、辩论中常用的句型: 1) There is no doubt that 2) It is obvious/clear that 3) As is known to all, 4) (It’s) no (难怪) He didn’t work hard and no wonder he lost his 5) It goes without saying that (不用说,不成问题,很自然„„) 6) What is more important, 7) I am convinced that (我深信„„)
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